The Hawk God and The Pitiful Sacrifice Manga Reviews (P.6)

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Jan 09, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

切ない

It's sad

This review contains spoilers. 結構ひどい人間が沢山出てきますが、幸せになれたので救われました。妹のことを思うと、切ないですが…。強い子みたいで安堵しました。幸せになってからと、妹のその後も覗いてみたいです。

This review contains spoilers. There are a lot of pretty terrible people, but I was saved because I was able to be happy. It's sad when I think about my little sister... I was relieved that he seemed like a strong kid. I'd like to take a peek at her sister's afterward after she's happy.

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Jan 08, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

ツンデレ…

tsundere...

This review contains spoilers. 受けがかわいい…妹のことを思う気持ちの強さもたまりません。神様はツンデレだけど、繊細な感じ。切ないところもありますが、最後はハッピーエンドでよかったです□

This review contains spoilers. The reception is so cute... the intensity of feeling for my little sister is also irresistible. God is tsundere, but it feels delicate. There are sad parts, but I'm glad it ended happily at the end □

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性癖どストライクでした…

My sexual habits were on strike...

This review contains spoilers. 受けの子の健気な感じや、攻めの過去のトラウマがあって影がある感じがとっても好みでした！！表紙の絵も素敵でしたが、漫画の笑顔個人的にもっと好きです！どうなるかと思いましたが、みんなが幸せのハッピーエンドで大満足です。今後の子どもたちが産まれたあとの話なども続きが出れば絶対買いたいです！！！

This review contains spoilers. I really liked the healthy feeling of receiving the child and the feeling that there was a shadow due to past trauma from the attack!! The picture on the cover was also wonderful, but I personally like the comic smiles even more! I was wondering what would happen, but everyone is very satisfied with the happy ending. I definitely want to buy it if the story of future children after they are born continues to come out!!!

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良かった……

That was great...

This review contains spoilers. 初めましての作者さんでした。とにかく絵が綺麗、受けが初め不憫なのもいい、攻めが後々好きになる感じもいい、特に目立った意地悪が居ないものいい、そして受けが最後ちゃんと幸せになるのもめっちゃいい！！燕として妹ちゃんに会いに行ったところは泣きました……。本当に良い作品と出会えて幸せでした。ありがとうございます。最後……卵からの孵化見たかった！！！続編！！！！期待してますっっ！！！！！！！！

This review contains spoilers. Nice to meet you, the author. Anyway, the picture is beautiful, the reception is pitiful at the beginning, the feeling that you fall in love with the attack later is also nice, the one that doesn't have any noticeable spiciness is good, and it's also really nice that the reception is really happy at the end!! I cried when I went to see my little sister as Tsubame... I was happy to come across a really good work. Thank you very much. Finally... I wanted to see them hatch from eggs!!! sequel!!! I'm looking forward to it!!!!!!

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初作家さんです

First time writer

This review contains spoilers. クーポンでお得に購入できるため色々漁ってましたが、こちらの作品を数P試し読みしたところ先が気になり過ぎて購入しちゃいました。読み出したら止まらなく一気に読破‼︎絵がとても綺麗なのとハッピーエンドなのがgoodでした。燕くんの喉仏の痣のような模様はなんなのでしょう。続きはあるのでしょうか。とても気になります。

This review contains spoilers. I was fishing a lot because I was able to buy it at a reasonable price with a coupon, but when I tried reading this work a few times, I was too worried about the future and bought it. Once I read it out, I couldn't stop reading it all at once ‼ ︎ It was good that the picture was so beautiful and had a happy ending. What is the pattern on Tsubame-kun's throat that looks like a mole on the Buddha. Is there more? I'm really curious.

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出だしは悲しいですが

The beginning is sad

叢雲の寵愛を得るまで累が可哀想で不憫です(--;)健気な累を傍においている内に、叢雲も累の事が好きになりますが、その辺の描写もう少しハッキリさせた方が尚よかったかな～家族が増えるので、子育て編出ないかな？3巻まで読了！2巻から待望の子育て編となってます♪巻を追う毎に燕(累)が幸せになってます(*^^*)双子ちゃんの成長も楽しみです♪ひょんな事から環を家族に迎え、益々賑やかになってきました。いつか環の故郷も出てこないかな。

Take is pitiful and pitiful until she gains Murakumo's favor (--;) While keeping a healthy Take by her side, Murakumo also falls in love with Tsumi, but I wonder if it would have been better to make the depiction of that area a little more clear ~ the number of families will increase, so wouldn't they come up with a child-rearing organization? I've read up to 3 volumes! It has been the long-awaited child-rearing edition since volume 2 ♪ Every time I follow the volume, Swallow (tired) is becoming happy (*^^*) I'm also looking forward to the twins' growth ♪ I welcomed Tamaki into the family by accident, and it became more and more lively. I wonder if Tamaki's hometown will come out someday too.

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とても良いお話です‼

It's a very good story ‼

生贄の『綺麗な心』が神様の怨みや悲しみを『穏やかな心』に変えていく。恋する心が様々な出来事にあうごとに絆となっていく2人の穏やかな顔はジーンとくるものがありました。BLの枠を超えて素晴らしいストーリーでした?

The sacrificial “beautiful heart” changes God's grudge and sorrow into a “peaceful heart.” There was something about the peaceful faces of the two, whose heart in love becomes a bond every time they encounter various events. Was that a great story that went beyond BL?

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良かった

good

前々から気になっていましたが、クーポンで購入しました。絵も綺麗だし、面白かったです。受けが健気だし、攻めの不器用さも良かった。

I've been interested in it for a while, but I bought it with a coupon. The pictures were beautiful and interesting. The reception was strong, and their clumsiness in attacking was also good.

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神様と魂

God and soul

いつか読んでみたいと思っていた作品がクーポンで買えました。絵も綺麗でお話も一気に読んでしまいました。サクサク進む展開と二人の気持ちのスピードに少しついていくの大変でしたがハピエンでよかったです。

I was able to buy a work I'd like to read someday with a coupon. The pictures were beautiful and I read the story all at once. It was a bit difficult to keep up with the rapidly progressing development and the speed of their feelings, but I'm glad they were happy.

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すごく好みです

I really like it

クーポンで購入した初作家さんですが、大満足。異世界やファンタジー系は嫌いではないんですが、当たり外れが多いイメージがあり‥でも今回、クーポン対象で本作に出逢えたことに感謝です。累の自分の生命にかえてでも妹の幸せを願う健気さ、辛い境遇に涙が出ます。妹の生活を守るため生け贄となり、代償の雨が降った時、雨が降って自分の役目が果たせホッとした気持ちの中、生きて妹の側で成長を見守れず、ゴメンと泣いた累。もう儚く美しい不憫受けに何度も涙が出ます。土地神様も辛い過去、境遇があり、始めは累に冷たい態度を取りますが、徐々に累の心に触れ惹かれていく過程もホントに良いーーー孤独な2人が惹かれ合い家族を作るラストは最高です。他の皆さんもレビューに書かれてますが、子供が生まれ家族愛にワチャワチャしてる2人を是非、見たいです！

I'm a first-time artist who bought it with a coupon, and I'm very satisfied. I don't dislike other worlds or fantasy games, but I have an image that there are a lot of hits and mismatches... but I'm grateful that I was able to come across this game for a coupon this time. I'm in tears over the health and difficult circumstances of wishing for my little sister's happiness, even after returning to my own exhausting life. I was sacrificed to protect my sister's life, and when the price rain fell, I felt relieved that the rain fell and I was relieved to be able to watch my sister grow, and I was tired of crying with regret. I shed tears over and over again at the ephemeral and beautiful feeling of pity. The land gods also have a difficult past and circumstances, and they have a very cold attitude at the beginning, but the process of gradually being touched and attracted to their tired heart is also really good — the end where two lonely people are attracted to each other and form a family is amazing. Everyone else has written about it in the reviews, but I definitely want to see these two people who have a child and are in love with their family!

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良かったです!!

That was great!!

前にちょっぴり立ち読みし気になった作品でしたが、出だしがheavyそうだったので保留したままでした(初見の作家さんでしたし)今回クーポン利用のおすすめ作品で再見レビュー高評価と試読でやっぱり続きが気になる！で購入なんと言っても絵が美しい！細かなとこまで美しい!!そして、内容もheavyな始まりからの紆余曲折のハピエン文句無しです(えっちだし)贅沢を言えば、その先っ!!ヒビの入った卵の、その先ーーーーっっっつまり、もうちょい続きを見せて〜って上手いトコで終わられちゃってる事!!やられたなーーーー!!この作家さんの別作品も購入しようと思います！良かったよ!!!!!

It was a work I was interested in standing up for a bit before, but it seemed like the beginning was heavy, so I left it on hold (it was my first time seeing the artist), and it's a recommended work using coupons this time, and I'm still worried about the continuation due to the high review reviews and trial reading! No matter what you buy, the picture is beautiful! It's beautiful down to the smallest detail!! Also, the content is heavy, and there are no happy twists and turns from the beginning (that's right) speaking of luxury, beyond that! the cracked egg, beyond that... in other words, show me the continuation a little bit longer and ended up in a good place!! it was done!! I'm going to buy another work by this artist too! That was great!!!!

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Jan 04, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

感動して涙チョチョギレる

I'm moved and burst into tears

とりあえず私みたいな涙腺緩い人は泣けます。週1回は見ないと落ち着かないくらいハマっています。何回も見直してますが毎回累くんと叢雲様（土神様）のの切なくてキュンキュンするストーリーが「大好き」ってなります！

Anyway, people like me who have loose lacrimal glands can cry. I'm so addicted to it that I can't calm down if I don't watch it once a week. I've reviewed it many times, but I “love” the sad and creepy story of Tari-kun and Murakumo-sama (Tsuchigami-sama) every time!

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設定が素敵でした

The setting was wonderful

This review contains spoilers. この作品は設定がとても好きです。2人の感情の変化やそれに伴って知っていく過去など見ていてすごくドキドキしました。最後に燕が鳥になって自由に飛び回るところがとても素敵でした。

This review contains spoilers. I really like the setting of this work. I was really excited to watch the changes in their emotions and the past they come to know along with it. It was so nice to see swallows become birds at the end and fly around freely.

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不憫受け最高

It's the best to take pity

村のため(というか妹のため)に贄になった主人公。その主人公を嫌う神。なんでなのかっていうのは後でわかる。主人公が不遇の人生を歩んでいて、贄になってからも体をはり、神に嫌われてもなお頑張る姿に応援したくなる。

The main character was sacrificed for the village (or rather for her sister). God hates that protagonist. I'll figure out why later. The main character is living an unfortunate life, and I want to cheer for him as he wears his body even after being sacrificed, and works hard even when disliked by God.

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一途な二人

Two people who are at once

This review contains spoilers. たぬきちくんが可愛いんですが(笑)累が妹に一途で、鷹神さまも昔の人に一途で切ないですね。一途なあまりに意固地になっついて、それでいて気になるのがキュンキュンします。迦楼羅さまはおちゃらけているにも関わらず、母性の塊です。鷹神さまも赤ちゃんの時から育てているんですもん、累の卵に『丸くてツヤツヤ』の表現が吹き出します。『じいじ』と呼ばせるなんて…鷹神さま一家が賑やかになるのが目に浮かびます。続編があるなんて、嬉しいわー。

This review contains spoilers. Tanukichi-kun is cute (laughs) My sister is tired, and Takagami-sama is also very sad for people from the olden days. I'm so determined to stick to it, and yet it makes me cringe at what I'm worried about. Despite the fact that Karura is messy, she is a mass of motherhood. Takagami has also been raising her since she was a baby, and the expression “round and shiny” pops out into her tired eggs. Being called a “old man”... I can see how the Takagami-sama family becomes lively. I'm so happy that there's a sequel.

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続くのですね！

It continues!

続編あるとの事！( ﾉ^ω^)ﾉﾊﾞﾝｻﾞ～ｲです！次は…子育て編かな？いずれにせよ賑やかになって楽しそうです！不憫だった累(後に燕という名に)と人間嫌いの神様叢雲様。最初こそ最悪ですが､一生懸命な累(燕)を見て叢雲様の気持ちが…そこからは溺愛気味の叢雲様！最高です！続編が待ち遠しい！

They say there's a sequel! (^ω^) That's awesome! Next up... maybe the child-rearing edition? Either way, it seems to be lively and fun! Tarei (later named Tsubame), who was a pity, and Kamikamuragumo-sama, who hates humans. The beginning was the worst, but when I saw Murakumo-sama's hard work (swallow), I felt like I was doting on Murakumo-sama... and from there on on, Murakumo-sama was doting on! It's awesome! I can't wait for the sequel!

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健気な受けに胸が苦しくなります

A healthy reception makes my heart ache

試し読みで綺麗な絵と健気な受けにひかれて購入しました。全編通して健気な受け…タイトルの『〜憐れな生贄』です。読んでいて幸せになって欲しいと願わずにはいられませんでした。不憫受けが好みの方はぴったりだと思います。話的には1巻で完結しているけど、個人的にもう少し先まで見たかった…。短編でもいいので出るといいな！

I bought it after being fascinated by the beautiful pictures and healthy reception during the trial reading. A healthy reception throughout the entire story... the title is “~ Merciful Sacrifice.” I couldn't help but wish that I would be happy while reading it. I think it's perfect for those who like feeling sorry. In terms of story, it was completed in volume 1, but personally I wanted to watch it a little further... Even a short film is fine, so I hope it comes out!

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可愛すぎる

too cute

受けが可愛すぎると思いましたが、それでも生前死後共に不幸であった彼が幸せになれてホッとしました。最後に子供ができるのが永遠の愛みたいで大好物なので良かったです。

I thought the reception was too cute, but even so, I was relieved that he, who was unhappy both during life and death, was happy. Having children at the end is like eternal love, so I'm glad it's my favorite food.

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ふつうにおもしろかった

It was usually interesting

This review contains spoilers. 現実離れした作品です。足が片方上手く使えない子が、生贄にされて、神様と出会う。それで、屈辱を味わわされるけど、弟のために、耐える健気な子。そのうちに神様が絆されていって…って感じでした。

This review contains spoilers. It's a work that is far from reality. A child who can't use one leg well is sacrificed and meets God. Because of that, he is humiliated, but he is a healthy kid who endures for his younger brother. It felt like God had a bond over time...

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不憫な境遇の累の将来はどうなる…？

What will happen in the future after being full of pitiful circumstances...?

This review contains spoilers. 初読み作家さんで、発売当時からずっと気になっていたんですが、積んでいたのをようやく読めました。土地神の叢雲（むらくも）様×足の不自由な生贄の累（かさね）のお話で、表題作のみ全５話＋描き下ろしで合計189ページ。事故で両親を亡くし片足が不自由になってしまった累が、唯一の家族・妹の雛の将来を案じて、土地神様への生贄になることを了承して…というお話。これでもかって言うくらい累が不憫です笑。不憫な境遇なんですが優しくて心根は強いという、もうまさに不憫受けのど真ん中を行ってます。そんな不憫な受けが色んな仕打ちに耐えながらも叢雲様の心を開き、幸せな人生を全うするという、ストーリーの骨子はとてもシンプルで王道展開なのかなと思います。なんですが、展開が分かっていてもやっぱり良いんですよね〜。自分のことは後回しで人のことを先に考える累に好感が持てたり、叢雲様が過去に受けた酷い仕打ちに絶望したり、心情描写が丁寧なので共感しやすかったのが良かったと思います。絵も丁寧で綺麗だし、修正の甘いエチが結構あったり、全体的なバランスが良かった。スライム的な物の怪（触手？）はちょっと世界観が違うような気がしましたが、まぁ★を減らす程ではなかったかなと。現世の人間と幽世の神様という関係で、どういう将来があるのか懸念してましたが、落としどころも良く読後感も良かったです。累の見た目が女子っぽいので、そういうビジュアルでも大丈夫かどうか試し読みしてから決めた方が良いかと思います。

This review contains spoilers. I'm a first-time reader, and I've been interested in it ever since it went on sale, but I was finally able to read what was piled up. It is a story about Murakumo-sama (Murakumo), the god of the Earth, and is a total of 189 pages, with only the title work 5 episodes plus drawing down. It's a story about losing her parents in an accident and being crippled in one leg, worrying about the future of her only family, her younger sister, and agreeing that it would be a sacrifice to the god of the earth... I'm so tired and pitiful that I can say even this lol. It's a pitiful situation, but they are kind and have a strong heart, and I'm already right in the middle of receiving pity. I think the outline of the story is very simple, where she endures all kinds of treatment while enduring all kinds of treatment, and the story unfolds in a very simple and royal manner. But even if you know what's going on, it's still good, isn't it? I think it was good that I was able to put myself on the back burner and think about people first, despair at the terrible treatment that Mr. Murakumo has received in the past, and that it was easy to sympathize with them because the depiction of feelings is careful. The pictures were also careful and beautiful, there were quite a few sweet touches of correction, and the overall balance was good. A slime-like monster (tentacle?) I felt like the view of the world was slightly different, but well, I wonder if it wasn't enough to reduce ★. I was worried about what kind of future there would be due to the relationship between humans in this world and the gods of the universe, but there were good points and a good feeling after reading it. Tsumi looks like a girl, so I think it's better to make a decision after trial reading to see if that kind of visuals are OK.

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