The Hawk God and The Pitiful Sacrifice Manga Reviews (P.5)

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May 18, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

良いお話でした。

That was a good story.

This review contains spoilers. 生贄と神様のお話で最初は手荒いストーリーの展開でどうなるか?と思いましたが、最後は子供も授かり、幸せになってホッコリしました。是非子供たちの成長などの続きが読みたいです。

This review contains spoilers. What happens when the story of Sacrifice and God unfolds in the rough at first? I thought, but at the end, I had children, and I felt happy and relieved. I definitely want to read the continuation of Children's Growth, etc.

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May 17, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

かわいいファミリー

cute family

色々辛い過去があったけれど…今は素敵な旦那さま神さまとかわいい子どもたちも産まれて幸せそうで良かった? 新たな家族も増えそうなので続きも楽しみにしてます！

I had a lot of painful pasts, but now I'm glad that a wonderful husband, God, and cute children have been born and seem happy? The number of new families is likely to increase, so I'm looking forward to the continuation!

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May 17, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

続編

sequels

This review contains spoilers. 前作では卵で終わって育児編があればなぁって感じだったので今作で育児エピソードも見られて嬉しかったです！そして前作で燕くんの首の痣と思っていたものが今作で回収されました。もし続編がなければ回収されなかったのかな？実は何気に気になってたんですよね。もしかしたら作者さんの自費出版で回収されてたかもですけど(出版社が許可されたら)。描き下ろしで成長した双子ちゃんが雛ちゃんのお子と遭遇する話、兄妹としてはもう会えないけどお互いの子供達が何らかの形でまた会うことがあって仲良くなってくれたら幸せだなと思いました。

This review contains spoilers. I was happy to be able to watch the childcare episode in this film because it ended with eggs in the previous film, and I was happy to be able to watch the childcare episode in this film too! Also, what I thought was a bruise on Tsubame-kun's neck in the previous work has been collected in this game. If there were no sequels, wouldn't they have been collected? Actually, I was worried about something. Maybe it was collected due to the author's self-publication (if the publisher approved). It's a story about twins who have grown up meeting Hina's child, and even though they can't meet each other as brother and sister anymore, I thought it would be happy if their children met each other again in some form and became good friends.

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まさかの続編！

Unexpected sequel!

This review contains spoilers. 2巻目がでるなんて思っていなかったので続編ありがとうございます！燕の過去や子供が産まれたあとのお話。切ないところもあり、感動もあり、ほっこりな気分になれる場面もありな感じでした。もっともっとその後の続編が読みたいです！

This review contains spoilers. I didn't expect volume 2 to come out, so thank you so much for the sequel! A story about Tsubame's past and after her child was born. There were sad places, there were also emotions, and there were scenes that made me feel relaxed. I want to read more and more sequels after that!

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May 16, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

まさか

No way

まさか続編が出るとは思ってなかったので、とても素敵なお話読めました。1巻最後で卵を産み2巻は子育ての話と燕の過去話。そう来たかとはなったけど。絵も可愛く飽きたりせず読みきれました。あと子供たちの鳥化めちゃ可愛い♡

I never thought there would be a sequel, so I was able to read a very nice story. Laying eggs at the end of volume 1 volume 2 is a story about raising children and a past story about swallows. I was wondering if that's where I came, though. The pictures were cute and I couldn't get tired of reading them. Also, the birding of children is so cute ♡

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May 16, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

良きです✨

That's great ✨

1巻目も良かったですが、今回もとても良かったです^ ^その後のほっこりとした様子とか見れて嬉しかったです。2人の仲がさらに深まってて最高でした！続きがまた観れるのを楽しみにしてます！

The first volume was good, and this one was great too ^^ I was happy to see how relaxed they felt after that. It was great that the relationship between the two of them had deepened even deeper! I'm looking forward to watching the continuation again!

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May 16, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

双子！

twins!

This review contains spoilers. 2巻待ってました燕は相変わらずいいコ可愛い双子が生まれて赤ちゃんも可愛いけど最後の子供も可愛い！さらに生まれる？南の王も北の王も出て来てないので続きますよね？環も気になるぅ！待ってます

This review contains spoilers. I've been waiting for volume 2, Tsubame is as nice as ever, and cute twins were born, and the baby is cute, but so is the last child! Will more be born? Neither the King of the South nor the King of the North have appeared, so it will continue, right? I'm worried about the ring too! I'm waiting

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Apr 30, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

よきです！

That's great!

This review contains spoilers. 最初から中盤ぐらいまでは重めな雰囲気で物語が進んでいきますが、どんどん惹かれあっていくがめちゃよきです！

This review contains spoilers. The story progresses in a heavy atmosphere from beginning to about midstage, but it's really nice to be attracted to each other more and more!

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続きみたいよ！！

I want to continue!!

This review contains spoilers. 鷹神様の叢雲と生贄の燕そんな二人の出会いは・・・燕にとっては苦しみしかなくそれでも妹の為に必死に食い下がる姿は可哀想で・・・叢雲がなぜ人間を嫌うのか・・・その理由が分かってからは孤独な二人・・どうか幸せになってほしいって想いで読んでた。けっこうシリアスな内容だったから最後のハッピーエンドは感無量でした。子供達が孵化した後の話もぜひ読んでみたいなあ。家族4人で幸せに過ごしてる姿見てみたいな～

This review contains spoilers. I read the encounter between these two people... Takagami no Murakumo and the Sacrificial Tsubame... there was nothing but suffering for Tsubame, and yet the sight of Murakumo desperately devouring down for her sister was pitiful... why does Murakumo hate humans... two lonely people after understanding the reason... I wanted them to be happy. The content was pretty serious, so the happy ending at the end was very emotional. I definitely want to read the story after the children are hatched. I want to see them having a happy time with their family of 4 ~

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Apr 18, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

鷹神様と憐れな生贄

Hawk God and Merciful Sacrifice

This review contains spoilers. 最初と最後で抱き方が変わるけど、どっちも好きです。というか、最初があったからこそ最後がまた良くなると思いました。受けの方にも攻めの方にも幸せあれと思いたくなるキャラなのでこれからも2人仲良くいちゃ付き合っていて欲しいです。

This review contains spoilers. The way you hold them changes at the beginning and end, but I like both of them. Or rather, I thought the last one would get better again because the beginning was there. It's a character that makes you want to think that both the receiver and the attackers are happy, so I hope the two of them continue to be on good terms.

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Apr 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

満足です

satisfactory

結論終わりが幸せなら満足です！ただ……見たいなぁ。ものすごく見たい。卵が孵化したその後の話を是非‼️孫を溺愛する神様が浮かびます?

Conclusion If the end is happy, then I'm satisfied! I just... want to watch it. I really want to see it. Be sure to read the story after the egg hatched ‼️ does God who dotes on grandchildren come to mind?

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えー！なになに可愛い！！！

Eh! What is so cute!!!

暗い感じで始まるけど、ハピエンで安心しました！ってか！！ハピエンしたけど、続き読みたいー！！！あの終わり方ずるいです(T＿T)！！！エロいし、面白いし、絵も好きで大満足でした！！とりあえず！子供見せて！！！

It starts with a dark feeling, but I was so relieved that I was happy! I mean!! Happy, but I want to keep reading!!! that way of ending is crazy (T_T)!! It was erotic, interesting, and I liked the pictures, so I was very satisfied!! for now! Show me the kids!!!

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Mar 14, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

すっごいキレイ

it's so beautiful

初めての作家さんでしたが、生贄ものが好きなのと、絵が好みだったので思わず購入。正解でした。とにかく絵がキレイです。生贄になった男と、人間に心を閉ざす神様の、心を通わすストーリー。願わくは土地神様の恋文の内容を知りたかった！

It was my first time as an artist, but I liked sacrifices, and I liked painting, so I bought it without thinking. That was correct. Anyway, the picture is beautiful. A heartwarming story about a man who was sacrificed and a god who closes his heart to humans. Hopefully, I wanted to know the details of the Earth God's love letter!

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イラスト、ストーリーもめちゃくちゃ良い。

The illustrations and story are also insanely good.

試し読みをして気になったので購入しました。が、大大大満足でした。何度も泣いてしまいました。2人の愛の形は今までにない感じで読み応えがありました。繊細な感じのイラストとストーリーの儚さに合っていて購入して良かったです。

I bought it because I was curious after a trial reading. But I was very, very satisfied. I cried so many times. The form of love between two people felt like it had never been seen before, and it was worth reading. I'm glad I bought it because it matched the delicate illustrations and the transience of the story.

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Jan 31, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

よかった

That was great

健気で芯の強い受けと不器用な攻めが心を通わせていく過程に惹かれた。だんだんと甘々過保護になっていくのもいい。シリアスさの中にもコミカルさもあって楽しめました。

I was drawn to the process where the energetic and strong reception and clumsy attack made my heart go through. It's also good to gradually become overprotective. I enjoyed it because it was both serious and comical.

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健気で良い子

A healthy and good kid

最初はほんと切なかったり、悲しかったりイラッとしたけど後半にかけての愛の深さやら、優しいストーリーが最高‼

It was really sad, sad, and frustrating at first, but the gentle story, like the depth of love in the second half, is the best ‼

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沢山買った中でもお気に入りの作品です！

It's my favorite work even though I've bought so many!

買って一週間たちますけど毎日読んじゃってます！そのくらい好き❤はじめ、燕（かさね）が可哀想すぎない！？叢雲さま酷い！！って思っちゃいましたが、それには理由もあるし、きっと燕に一目惚れしたからなんだろうな…って思う。不器用すぎる叢雲さまが恋文や贈り物をするなんて考えただけでも萌えます?燕も恥ずかしがり屋なのでいちいち顔が赤くなるし、ホント可愛い！想いが通じ合った後の二人のラブラブぶりにはほっこりします?描き下ろしのたまご…良かったわぁ〜絵も綺麗だし素敵な作品でした！

It's been a week since I bought it, but I read it every day! I like it that much ❤ Hajime, isn't Swallow (Kasane) too pitiful!? Murakumo-sama is terrible!! I thought, but there's also a reason for that, and I'm sure it's because I fell in love with Tsubame at first sight... Just thinking about Murakumo-sama, who is too clumsy, giving love letters and gifts makes you fall in love? Tsubame is also shy, so her face turns red one by one, and she's really cute! Are you relieved to see how the two are in love after their feelings have come through? The egg I drew... that was great ~ the picture was beautiful and it was a wonderful work!

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寂しい神様と、健気受け。

A lonely god and good health.

This review contains spoilers. 過去に人に裏切られた神様と、そこに捧げられた健気な受けの話。まず絵がとても綺麗！ストーリーは最初からやっちゃう？！ってなる（笑）読み進めると神様と受けがラブラブになっていくのが良かった！

This review contains spoilers. A story about God who was betrayed by people in the past and the healthy reception dedicated to it. First of all, the picture is so beautiful! Shall we start the story from the beginning?! It was nice that God and Reception became lovey-dovey as I read on!

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良き！

good!

This review contains spoilers. 妹を守るために生贄になる兄。最初はかわいそうでツラい。。黄泉の国で幸せになるけど、やはり死んでしまっているんだなーとか、。なんか色んな感情でぐるぐるするけど結果ハッピーエンドで救われる！！燕になり大きくなった妹に会いに行くとことかまじで泣ける！！あと、恋文の内容気になります！

This review contains spoilers. An older brother sacrifices to protect his sister. It was a pity and rough at first.. It makes me happy in Yomi no Kuni, but I wonder if they've died after all. They go round and round with all kinds of emotions, but as a result, they end up being saved with a happy ending!! I can seriously cry when I go see my little sister who has turned into swallows and has grown up!! Also, I'm curious about the content of the love letter!

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書き下ろしのお話が良い！

The story you just wrote is good!

This review contains spoilers. 試し読みでは受けが不憫な感じで暗い感じかな？と思っていましたが、内容は驚くような展開があるわけでもなく、想像していたよりも普通(?)でした。書き下ろしで、たまごが生まれてるので子育ても入ってくるのかな？次作が楽しみです！

This review contains spoilers. Is it a dark feeling that the reception is pitiful and dark in the trial reading? I thought, but the content didn't have any surprising developments, and it's more normal than I had imagined (?) That was it. It's written down, and since eggs have been born, will child-rearing also come into play? I'm looking forward to the next one!

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