The Hawk God and The Pitiful Sacrifice Manga Reviews (P.7)

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Nov 17, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

不器用な攻と健気で芯の強い受

Clumsy offense and strong reception with good health

一冊丸ごと表題作。神様×生贄のファンタジー。受の健気さと気丈さ、攻の人の良さと不器用さ…からの想いを通わせあってからの過保護溺愛ぶりがとてもツボでした。序盤の双方とも望まない行為のヒリヒリ感もとても癖でたまりません。2人の心情が変わってゆく様を感じて大変悶えます。

The entire book is titled. A fantasy of god x sacrifice. Overprotection and doting after passing through feelings from receiving's strength and temperament, and the good and clumsy attackers... was a great pressure point. The tingling feeling of an act both parties don't want in the beginning is also very addictive and irresistible. I'm very agitated to feel how the feelings of the two of them are changing.

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とても好き

I like it very much

This review contains spoilers. 燕が不憫だけど健気で可愛くて…！叢雲さまも辛い過去があるけど優しくてかっこよくて。２人とも性格も見た目も凄く好みで、両想いになってからの２人がとても可愛いです。ストーリーのテーマは重いのに、絵の美しさと燕の可愛さで、重さは感じず、切ないけど暖かい気持ちになれるストーリーで最高でした。

This review contains spoilers. Tsubame is pitiful, but she is healthy and cute...! Murakumo-sama also has a difficult past, but she's kind and cool. They both really like each other in terms of personality and appearance, and the two of them are so cute after they have both feelings. Even though the theme of the story is heavy, the beauty of the picture and the cuteness of the swallow were great, and it was a story that made me feel sad yet warm without feeling heavy.

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Nov 16, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

健気で一途

Be healthy and go all the way

最初は累くんが余りにも可哀想で。妹の為に人身御供にされ、叢雲さまには事情があるといえど、なかば強引にヤラれて…。余りにも不憫。それでも健気に頑張る累くんの姿に涙。徐々に累くんと叢雲さまの心の距離が近づく様子は初々しくてホンワカ。二人の子供の姿が出てこなかったのは残念。続編あるのかな？あったら是非とも子供の姿をみたい。それと、最後まで気になったのが累くんの首にある変わったアザ。何か意味があるのかなと思ったけど、それには一切触れずに終わった。何とも思わせ振りなアザなんだろうか！

At first, I felt so sorry for Tare-kun. I was given human sacrifice for my sister, and even though Murakumo-sama had circumstances, she forcibly screwed her... It's too disgraceful. Still, I'm in tears at the sight of Tari-kun doing his best in good health. The sight of the distance between Tori-kun and Murakumo-sama's hearts gradually getting closer is fresh and exciting. Too bad the two kids didn't show up. I wonder if there will be a sequel? If so, I would definitely like to see a child. Also, what bothered me until the end was the unusual bruise on Tei-kun's neck. I was wondering if it meant something, but I ended up without touching on it at all. I wonder if this is such a thought-provoking bruise!

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Nov 15, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

良いですね

That's good

健気な受けに癒される神様の気持ちに共感です。妹ちゃんも幸せそうで、主人公たちも報われて良かったです。

I sympathize with God's feeling of being healed by a healthy reception. My little sister seemed happy too, and I'm glad the main characters were rewarded.

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Nov 14, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

感動しました〜

I'm moved ~

涙あり、最後は2人とも幸せになって良かったです□絵柄も好みで、2人とも可愛かった〜他のキャラも可愛くて面白くて最高です！続編も楽しみにしてます！育児編かな〜？これからも応援しています！

There were tears, and I'm glad they were both happy at the end □ I liked the design, and they were both cute ~ the other characters were cute and interesting, and it's great! I'm also looking forward to the sequel! I wonder if it's the childcare edition ~? I will continue to support you!

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可愛い～！

so cute~!

絵が美しいです～！こういう人外？系は大丈夫です！めっちゃ獣人みたいな人外は、ダメなんですが、こういう神様系は全然読める★愛日と花嫁でもそうですが、生贄系？が流行ってるんですかね・・・？？不憫受け大好きーなので、全然オッケーです(♯^.^♯)

The picture is beautiful! this kind of person outside? The system is fine! Outsiders who really look like beastmen are no good, but I can read this kind of divine lineage at all ★ As is the case with Ai Nichi and the Bride, is it a sacrifice type? is popular isn't it...?? I love receiving pity, so it's totally OK (♯ ^.^ ♯)

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Nov 10, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

最高！

the best!

読んだことのない作家さんでしたが表紙に惹かれて購入しました。めちゃくちゃよかったです！絵も綺麗ですがストーリーもよかった。

It was an author I hadn't read, but I was attracted to the cover and bought it. It was insanely good! The pictures were beautiful, but so was the story.

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燕が健気すぎる。

Tsubame is too healthy.

This review contains spoilers. 生贄として、妹のために命を差し出した燕。しかし、土地神の叢雲は、人間に裏切られたことで人間嫌いに。無理やり体の関係をもち、冷たい態度で接するけれど、燕の境遇や妹のことを知り、愛するようになって。どちらも生きるのに不器用すぎですが、後半に両想いで甘々になって良かったです。エッチも色気がありまくりでした。

This review contains spoilers. As a sacrifice, Swallow offered her life for her sister. However, Murakumo, the god of earth, hates humans because he was betrayed by humans. They forcibly have a physical relationship and treat them with a cold attitude, but they learned about Tsubame's circumstances and her younger sister, and they came to love her. They're both too clumsy to live, but I'm glad they were spoiled by both feelings in the second half. There was a lot of sex appeal too.

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絵が綺麗…

The picture is beautiful...

This review contains spoilers. 主人公の二人、叢雲と累がとにかく美しくて可憐なのsですが、生贄として捧げられて叢雲の世界に行った累に対して、叢雲のあまりな仕打ちに累が不憫で不憫で…早く累を自分のテリトリーからで去らせたかったゆえの行為なようですが。虐げられても現生に生きる妹のために、一途に尽くす累に頑なな心を絆されてゆく叢雲。叢雲が累の希望をかなえて、雨を降らせるシーンは、とても美しかったです。それから後はお邪魔ムシな迦楼羅様が登場しようとも、二人の心は寄り添ってゆきます。累を本名の通りの燕に変えて、妹の所に帰してやろうとしますが、妹の成長を見届けて、燕は叢雲の元に戻ってきます。そして二人の間にはかわいい卵が生まれて…ハッピーエンドなのでありました。最初のうちは凹みますが、愛しているのに素直になれないスパダリをお好みの方にはお勧めします！

This review contains spoilers. The two main characters, Murakumo and Tue, are simply beautiful and pretty, but in contrast to Murakumo's world when they were offered as sacrifices, they seem to be acting because they wanted Murakumo to leave their own territory quickly because they were tired of being treated so badly that they were tired and felt sorry... Murakumo's stubborn heart is bonded to the end of her dedication for her younger sister, who lives in the present life even if she is oppressed. The scene where Murakumo fulfills her many hopes and makes it rain was so beautiful. After that, even though the troublesome Karura appears, their hearts are close to each other. I changed my fortune to Tsubame, as my real name suggests, and I try to return it to my sister, but after watching my sister grow up, Tsubame comes back to Murakumo. Then, a cute egg was born between them... and it had a happy ending. It's dull at first, but I recommend it to anyone who likes a spadari that you love but can't be honest with!

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心を寄せていく二人

Two people who keep their hearts together

This review contains spoilers. 現世では幸せになれず、大切な者を守る為には生け贄になるしかなかった累は、幻世に行っても酷い扱いしか受けなくて‥でも叢雲さまと‥──人によって傷付けられた淋しい二人が出会い、それぞれの事情を少しずつ知り、ずれているところもあるけれどお互いに心を寄せていくお話でした。素直になれない叢雲さまが累に惹かれていく過程がツンデレすぎて判りにくいですが、そのもだもだ姿もいいです。たぬ吉くんのかわいさがストーリーの影の部分を和らげてくれています。他の物の怪ちゃんたちとも仲良くなれたかな？心配だった妹のこともちゃんと描かれていたし、累が本当の名前を取り戻し、叢雲さまと幸せになれてよかったです。二人の子供はどうなったのか‥じぃじこと迦楼羅さまが可愛がりすぎて叢雲さまに怒られちゃうのかなぁとか、その後の明るい姿を想像しながら終わりにします。

This review contains spoilers. It was a story about being unable to be happy in this world, and there were no choice but to be sacrificed in order to protect loved ones, but even when they went to the phantom world, they were treated only harshly... but Murakumo-sama and... two lonely people who were hurt by people met, got to know their circumstances little by little, and had their hearts to each other even though there were differences. The process by which Murakumo-sama, who can't be honest, is so tirelessly drawn to it is so tsundere that it's hard to understand, but it's also nice. Tanukichi-kun's cuteness softens the shadows in the story. Were you able to get along well with the other monsters? My younger sister, who I was worried about, was also properly drawn, and I'm glad that Tsumi regained her real name and became happy with Murakumo-sama. I'll end by imagining what happened to the two kids... I wonder if Jiji and Karura are so cute that Murakumo-sama will get scolded by Murakumo-sama, and how bright they will be after that.

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Oct 31, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

結構グッときました

That was pretty cool

This review contains spoilers. 人間に幾度となく裏切られて人が嫌いになっても、愛する気持ちは消えなかった叢雲。妹のために村に雨を降らせる生贄として身を捧げた累。お話は切ないけど、2人の気持ちの揺らぎがなんだか可愛いです。酷い扱いをされても強い意志の上で贄になった累だから、頑として側を離れず叢雲を受け入れてる。そんな姿に何を重ねたのか、閉ざしていた叢雲の心が動き雨が降る…。恋は神様をも変えるんだな〜（恋文を送るくらいにはデレが出てきてるw）。茶々入れる親代わりの迦楼羅も良いキャラです。エッチも初めは無理矢理だけど愛が芽生えてからはエロさが増してる気が…イイ。手が触れるだけで照れてる2人の初心な反応も可愛いです！

This review contains spoilers. Murakumo's feelings of love did not go away, even though she was betrayed by humans over and over again and didn't like people. The exhaustion of sacrificing myself to rain the village for my sister. The story is sad, but the fluctuation in their feelings is kind of cute. Even if they were treated harshly, they were sacrificed due to strong will, so they stubbornly accepted Murakumo without leaving their side. What was superimposed on such a figure, and the closed heart of Murakumo moves and rain falls... Love also changes gods ~ (Dele has come up to the point where I send love letters lol). Karura, the substitute parent who puts in Chacha, is also a good character. At first, sex was forced, but I feel like the eroticism has increased since love blossomed... good. The initial reaction of the two, who are bashful just by touching them, is also cute!

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絵が好き

I like painting

This review contains spoilers. 妹の為に自分が生け贄になるところから始まるお話。重たい話になりそうだけど、累が可愛くて健気で一生懸命で救われます。もっと２人のラブラブが見たいです。

This review contains spoilers. The story begins where I sacrifice myself for my sister. It seems like it's going to be a heavy story, but the tiring is cute, and they are saved by working hard. I want to see two more lovey-dovey people.

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畳痛そうですね

It looks like tatami pain

This review contains spoilers. 世界観が分かるようで分からない。死んで生贄になるみたいだけど新しい世界でも障害は引き継ぐし、体調も崩すし死ぬわけですね。眷属？に生まれ変わる場合もモノノ怪なわけ？鷹神様も元は妖なのか？●自分から出て行かせるために乱暴？辱めを受けたらでてくって？一応、生贄の花嫁設定にしてくれた方が嫌悪感はない。大体死んでるのにどこに出てくのさ。●最初は勢いにしても2回目からは着物ぐらい敷かないと畳が汚れるし傷むし嫌じゃないのかな。シンプルに痛いだろうし。可哀想。●甘々は好き。なんだかんだ布団に寝るようになってからは不器用な愛を感じる。ハピエンで嬉しい。●触手だかスライムだかはいらない。世界観にも合わない。しかも媚薬でおかしくなったからって鷹神様に要求しすぎるのが不自然。自分は身体が不自由で動けないから動いて下さいとか好き放題だったのに起きたとたん、前にさっさと出て行けと言われたのを思い出して心を閉ざす。遅いよ。●身体が女子。低評価レビューにまるで女の子でBLの意味がないとあったが、顔が可愛いのはいくらでもある。しかし、身体が脂肪がほどよく乗った女子のソレ。リアルに骨と皮の体を描けとは言わないが、筋張った身体や細いなりの筋肉を描いてもらわないと。特にお尻。窪んだ堅そうなお尻を描かれたら嫌だけど、安産型で良かったねと言うぐらい丸くて大きい。後ろからが多いから違和感あり。あ、好きなんですよ。この作品。

This review contains spoilers. They seem to understand the worldview, so I don't understand it. It's like dying and being sacrificed, but even in the new world, the disability will take over, you'll get sick, and you'll die. dependents? Isn't it strange to be reincarnated into a thing? Was Takagami originally a demon? ● Rough to get them to walk away from themselves? if you're humiliated, come out? For the time being, I don't feel disgusted if they set me up as a bride for sacrifice. Most of them are dead, but where do they come out. ● Even if you gain momentum at first, the tatami mats will get dirty if you don't lay out a kimono from the second time, and you probably don't want to get damaged. It would simply be painful. That's a pity. ● I like sweetness. Somehow I started sleeping on futons, and then I felt clumsy love. I'm happy to be happy with Happien. ● I don't need tentacles or slime. It doesn't fit the worldview either. Moreover, it is unnatural to demand too much from the hawk god just because they have gone crazy with aphrodisiacs. I was physically handicapped and couldn't move, so I could move as much as I wanted, but as soon as I woke up, I remembered being told to leave quickly before and closed my heart. It's late. ● The body is female. There was a saying in the low evaluation review that it was like a girl and there was no meaning of BL, but there are plenty of cute faces. However, this is for girls with just the right amount of fat on their bodies. I'm not asking you to realistically draw a body of bones and skin, but I have to have them draw a muscular body or thin muscles. Especially buttocks. I wouldn't like to be drawn on a sunken, stiff butt, but it's round and big enough to say I'm glad it was a safe delivery type. There is a sense of incongruity because there are a lot of them from behind. Oh, I love it. this work.

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健気だから、絆されるよね〜

You're healthy, so you can bond, right?

異形、転生、オメガバ？、異種愛、兄妹愛、親子愛？、てんこ盛り、不憫健気受け×溺愛孤独攻め、ニマニマし通しの相互救済系ストーリーです。二人の出会いのきっかけは、受けの累が可哀想ですが、暗さも不穏さも感じません。出会った事が、お互いの救いになるので、ハッピーが加速していくだけです。表紙に「お前の愛し方を俺は知らない」とありますが、割と早い段階から叢雲はホントは優しくて、累に惹かれていたんだなぁと思います。結構、エッチもしていて、修正が甘いです。

Alien, Reincarnation, Omega Ba? , heterogeneous love, brother-sister love, parent-child love? It's a mutual relief story about, full of anger, pity, wellbeing x doting, loneliness, attack, and misunderstanding. The reason the two met is a pity, but I don't feel dark or uneasy. Meeting each other saves us, so happiness just accelerates. The cover says “I Don't Know How to Love You,” but I think Murakumo was really kind and really attracted to her from a relatively early stage. They're also having quite a bit of sex, and the correction is lackluster.

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最高です！

It's awesome!

This review contains spoilers. 本当に２人が幸せになってくれてよかった(ToT)２人の幼少期や生前が、もう辛くて辛くて…泣きそうになりました(*T^T)でもその後子育て奮闘記が読みたいです！！どんな子なのかも気になるので、続編よろしくお願いしますｍ(｡≧Д≦｡)ｍ

This review contains spoilers. I'm really glad they both became happy (ToT) their childhood and lifetime were already so hard and painful... I almost cried (*T^T), but I want to read the story of their child-rearing struggles after that! I'm also curious about what kind of kid they are, so thank you for the sequel m (. ≥) m

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すごく好きな世界観

A world view I really like

雑誌で読んだ時から大好きです。面白かった〜！物の怪も可愛いし、キャラもいい。燕が健気で可愛くてどストライクです。もっと読みたかったなー。続き欲しいです！

I've loved it since I read it in magazines. That was interesting~! Monster is cute, and so are the characters. Tsubame is healthy and cute, so it's a strike. I wanted to read more. I want it to continue!

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良きでした！

That was great!

燕が美人でとっても健気で好きです。叢雲さまも愛されて良かったなと。素敵な作品でした。恋文の内容気になります。

I like Tsubame because she is beautiful and very healthy. I'm glad Murakumo-sama was loved too. It was a wonderful work. I'm curious about the content of the love letter.

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よかった、、

That was great...

This review contains spoilers. 叢雲様が良い神様なのかは置いておいて、累（燕）の健気さだけでも感度できる作品！妹の生活を守るために生贄として死んだ累。妹のその後も確認できて良かった。最後は叢雲様との子供まで！2人の子育て＆イチャラブの続きが読みたいです。

This review contains spoilers. Leaving aside whether Mr. Murakumo is a good god, it is a work where you can be sensitive just by the health of tiring (swallow)! I died as a sacrifice to protect my sister's life. I'm glad I was able to confirm my sister's after that. At the end, I even had a child with Murakumo-sama! I want to read the continuation of Two Child-Raising & Flirtatious Love.

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お幸せに?

happy?

This review contains spoilers. 燕が幸せになってよかったです。叢雲と迦楼羅天はほんとは仲良しなんですね。素直になれない？叢雲にけなげな燕君が泣けました。雛ちゃんはきちんと村の人？が面倒見てくれてよかったです。だけど、双子ちゃんが出来たのはよかったですけど、産まれる前に終らないでー。かわいいだろうな…。見たかった。

This review contains spoilers. I'm glad Tsubame is happy. Murakumo and Karuraten are really good friends, aren't they? Can't you be honest? Tsubame-kun, who scolded Murakumo, made me cry. Are Hina properly villagers? I'm glad they took care of me. But I'm glad I had twins, but don't finish before they're born. it must be cute... I wanted to see it.

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再レビュー！

Re-review!

絵柄と設定が好みで前巻を購入。続編の宵月が出ると聞いてとても楽しみにしてました！前巻時に叢雲様が燕を好きになった過程(心情)、燕の首のアザについてを掘り下げて欲しかったとレビューしてたのですが、見事に回収して下さってて、もうスッキリ！そしてラブラブでえちが多いし子供達可愛いし、新たに環や西の王、息子など気になる人達も出てきて、、、どうやら続編(3章)でるみたいですね！確実に買います！！

I bought the previous volume because I liked the design and settings. I was really looking forward to hearing that the sequel Yoigetsu would come out! At the time of the previous volume, I was reviewing that I wanted Mr. Murakumo to delve into the process (feelings) that he fell in love with swallow and the bruise on Swallow's neck, but they have collected it brilliantly, and I'm already refreshed! Also, they are lovey-dovey, have a lot of fun, and the kids are cute, and new people I'm interested in, such as Tamaki, the King of the West, and my son, have also appeared... apparently there's a sequel (chapter 3)! I will definitely buy it!!

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