The Hawk God and The Pitiful Sacrifice Manga Reviews (P.4)

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Jul 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

ぜひ読んで！

Be sure to read it!

This review contains spoilers. BＬだけど､心打たれるとても良い作品です。燕の過去や優しさや強さを知り惹かれていく叢雲､燕も叢雲の人間嫌いだけど少しずつ感じる優しさに惹かれる。叢雲の燕を守る為なら何でもするかっこよさが好き！まさか卵を産んで温めるとはちょっと笑だね！子供もできも2人は仲良くまた､色々な試練があったけど家族の愛はすごいね。良い本に巡り会えました。

This review contains spoilers. It's BL, but it's a very good work that hits my heart. Murakumo knows and is attracted to Tsubame's past, kindness, and strength, and Tsubame is also attracted to Murakumo's kindness that she feels little by little even though she hates people. I love how cool it is to do anything to protect Murakumo's swallow! I don't think laying eggs to warm them up is a bit laughable! Both children and Makimo are on good terms, and although there have been various trials, the love of the family is amazing. I came across a good book.

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Jul 11, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

絵が綺麗

The picture is beautiful

生け贄にされ神様にも、都合良くつかわれるちょっとイヤな感じがしたけれど、最後はお互いに好きになり幸せなって良かった。続編期待してます

I felt a little bad about being sacrificed and conveniently used by God, but I'm glad they both fell in love with each other at the end and were happy. I'm looking forward to the sequel

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Jul 04, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

甘々な二人

Two sweet people

子供ができています。この2人の幸せが見れて良かったです。さちうす受け大好きだけど、幸せになってこそだものね。

A child has been born. I'm glad I was able to see these two happy. I love receiving sachiusu, but that's only when you're happy.

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Jul 02, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

いいお話です。

That's a great story.

This review contains spoilers. 作家さんが好きで購入。素敵な絵に切なくも強くて優しい気持ちが乗っかったお話です。もう一つのお名前で描かれているお話も大好きですを

This review contains spoilers. I liked the artist and bought it. It's a story where a sad yet strong and kind feeling was attached to the wonderful picture. I also love the story drawn under the other name

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Jun 30, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

美しい！

beautiful!

久しぶりに美しい絵で、美しいストーリーを読んだ気がしました。何度も何度も引き込まれ、涙が滲みました。続きが読みたい！

It's been a long time since I had a beautiful picture, and I felt like I was reading a beautiful story. I was drawn in over and over again, and tears welled up. I want to read more!

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Jun 27, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

良き!

good!

絵がキレイなところで惹かれて購入したけど、実際読んだらストーリーもおもしろい!ラブラブもあり、涙ありで読み返してもおもしろい!

I was attracted to the beautiful picture and bought it, but when I actually read it, the story was interesting too! There is also Love-Love, and it's funny even if you read it over and over again with tears!

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Jun 14, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

2巻読了。良かったー

I've read volume 2. That was great

This review contains spoilers. この先生の絵が好きです。なので余計に楽しめました。1巻始めでは刺々しかった叢雲が甘々になり、不運だった燕が愛され、新しい家族ができずっと幸せでいてね。と思います。2巻では、心残りだった妹の雛の幸せな未来も見ることができ、みんな幸せになるので、2巻まで見て欲しい！です。 1巻には描かれなかった恋文や燕の印の意味も描かれていて、ちょっとジーンとします。

This review contains spoilers. I love this teacher's paintings. So I enjoyed it even more. At the beginning of volume 1, Murakumo, who was painful, became sweet, and Tsubame, who was unlucky, was loved, and they had a new family and stayed happy the whole time. I think so. In volume 2, you can also see the happy future of my little sister Hina, which was a remorse, and everyone will be happy, so I want you to watch up to volume 2! That's it. The meaning of love letters and the seal of swallow that were not depicted in volume 1 are also depicted, and it makes me feel a bit jean.

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Jun 05, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

最後ーです

It's the last one...

This review contains spoilers. 絵が綺麗！雛が無事で良かったね！燕の過去泣きました。幸せになって良かった〜最後にでてきた子供こ雛の子供なんて…しかも妹か弟ができるっていうから続編があってもいいくらいです！読みたい！

This review contains spoilers. The picture is beautiful! I'm glad the chicks are safe! Tsubame's past made me cry. I'm glad I'm happy ~ The last kid that came out is Kohina's kid... and since they say they'll have a younger sister or younger brother, it's okay if there's a sequel! I want to read it!

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大好きな世界観

Favorite view of the world

This review contains spoilers. 弱そうで強い燕。苦しく生きてきた分、末永く幸せになって欲しいなと思います。家族がどんどん増え幸せが一目でわかります。龍の子はこれからスピンオフかなんかで出てくるのでしょうか。最後のいとこ同士の巡り合い、ほんとは雛ちゃんに知らせたいところですね、お兄さんも子供いて幸せだよって。

This review contains spoilers. A strong swallow that seems weak. I want them to be happy for a long time as they have lived a hard life. There are more and more families, and happiness can be seen at a glance. Is Ryuko going to come out in a spin-off or something from now on? The last encounter between cousins is something I really want to let Hina know, that the older brother also has children and is happy.

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Jun 02, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

気になってました

I was curious

ずっと気にはなっててクーポンがあったので購入させて頂きました(*^^*)絵がキレイでストーリーも読みやすかったです。

I've always been interested in it, and there was a coupon, so I bought it (*^^*) The pictures were beautiful and the story was easy to read.

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May 31, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

不憫過ぎる

Too pitiful

燕が、不憫過ぎて、村の飢饉を救う為に、生贄に　出された燕　妹が生活に困らなのならと死んで、黄泉の国で土地神様に、雨を降らせて欲しいと願うもここでも不憫過ぎる燕　次第に、土地神様に、愛される用になり番に、燕が健気過ぎて泣きました。2巻も邪魔者が、燕に悪さをし不憫過ぎて泣きました。土地神様の愛が深くて良かった!双子も可愛い!続きで3人目の卵が、生まれる所が、見たいな〜

There was too much pity, and Tsubame, who was sacrificed to save the village famine, died saying that she was having trouble living, and even though she wanted the earth god to rain in the country of yellow springs, Tsubame gradually became a servant to be loved by the god of the land, and Tsubame was too healthy and cried. In volume 2, the person who got in the way did bad things to Tsubame and was so pitiful that I cried. I'm glad that the Earth God's love is deep! Twins are cute too! Next, I want to see the place where the 3rd egg is born ~

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May 31, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

おもしろかったです?

was that interesting?

This review contains spoilers. 妹を守るために生け贄になる累(本当は燕)それが報われて良かったです。村の人達は酷すぎると思う‼燕はいい子で、綺麗なのに自分を卑下してて、何とかしてあげて欲しかった。叢雲と子供達と幸せな未来を望みます。

This review contains spoilers. I'm glad that the sacrifice of being sacrificed to protect my sister (actually a swallow) paid off. I think the people in the village are too bad ‼ Tsubame was a nice kid, and even though he was beautiful, he despised himself, and I wanted them to do something about it. I hope for a happy future with Murakumo and her children.

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May 31, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

幸せいっぱい

Full of happiness

This review contains spoilers. 初めは刺々しい叢雲さまですが、それには過去があります。燕も苦労人だし大変な人生を送ってきましたが、叢雲さまと出会うことで幸せを知ります。子供たちや龍の環くんは可愛く、読んでいるとニンマリしてしまいます。2巻読みましたがお勧めです?

This review contains spoilers. At first, it's a sharp cloud, but it has a past. Tsubame is also a struggling person and has had a difficult life, but I learned about happiness by meeting Mr. Murakumo. The kids and Ryu no Tama-kun are cute, and it makes me cringe when I read them. I've read 2 volumes, would you recommend them?

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May 28, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

不思議～

Strange~

切ない始まりだけど、段々と幸せになってく様子が良かったったです。お兄ちゃんがツバメになって現世の妹に会いに行くとこ素敵な描写でした♡

It was a sad beginning, but it was nice to see how they gradually became happier. It was a wonderful depiction of the older brother becoming a swallow and going to see his younger sister in this world ♡

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May 22, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

良かったです

That was great

This review contains spoilers. 背景もわかりやすいし、絵もきれいで初作家さんでしたが、とても良かった！２巻最後のいとこ同士の出会いもしんみりしてしまった。

This review contains spoilers. The background was easy to understand, and the pictures were beautiful, and I was a first-time artist, but it was great! I also enjoyed the encounter between my cousins at the end of volume 2.

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May 22, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

ハンカチ持って

Bring me a handkerchief

This review contains spoilers. 買って良かった〜！最初受け君が、理不尽ないじめにあってるの、すごく腹たって、そして生贄…!死なずに神の世界に行ったのかな〜？と思ったら、違うかった。死んで、生きてる世界と、成仏したら行く世界の間の世界での話！最初攻君は酷いけど、後はスパダリで、超カッコ良い〜！2巻最終では、泣きました。結構幸せなってからの話が長くて、読んでる方も幸せです。その後みたいな、子供達の話では、従兄弟と共演、感動です。

This review contains spoilers. I'm glad I bought it! First, I got bullied unreasonably, got really angry, and then sacrificed...! I wonder if they went to God's world without dying? When I thought about it, it was different. A story about the world between the dead and the living, and the world you go to once you have attained Buddhism! The first attack was terrible, but the rest were spadari, super cool! At the end of volume 2, I cried. The story after Pretty Happy is long, and the people who read it are also happy. I'm moved to perform with my cousin in the children's story, like the one after that.

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May 21, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

最高すぎて、、

it's too awesome...

子育てBL好きだから買ったんだけどなにこれ最高じゃん、、！完成度高いし程よく波風立っててハラハラもあってキュンキュンもあってえちもあって、私の大好物盛り沢山って感じでとっても良きでした！買って良かったです！！赤子ちょー可愛いし絶対何回も読み返します！！！！

I bought it because I like child-rearing BL, but why is this the best...! It had a high degree of perfection, and it had just the right amount of waves and wind, it was jarring, and it felt like there were so many of my favorite foods! I'm glad I bought it!! The baby is so cute and I will definitely be re-reading it over and over again!!!

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May 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

幸せになって良かったねぇえええ т т

I'm glad you're happy yeah!!!

This review contains spoilers. 燕ちゃんがあまりにも可哀想で可哀想で、、でも健気なところが可愛くて！！！！！！！最高でした、、、、こういう受けが酷い目に合っちゃうみたいな、トラウマがあったりするお話が性癖ドンピシャすぎるんですけど、もうど真ん中いってくれましたねこれは。何よりも攻めが！！！旦那が！！！旦那がスパダリですね最高スパダリしか勝たんでした！！最初無理やり犯すところはんえ！？ー！！って思ったけど、最終的に幸せになったし旦那結構後悔ちゃんとしてて、お前出来るやつやん、、、、ってしみじみしてました！！！途中途中刺客が入ってくるところも激アツ展開でした、、、、控えめに言って最高！！！

This review contains spoilers. Tsubame-chan is so pitiful and pathetic, but the healthy part is cute!!!!! That was awesome... this kind of story is so traumatizing that it seems like this kind of reception is too bad, but they've already gone right in the middle. Attack above all else!!! my husband!!! My husband is Spadari, right? Only the best Spadari won!! What is the first place you force yourself to commit a crime!? —!! I thought, but in the end, I was happy, and my husband had quite a few regrets, and I was really excited that it was something you could do...!! The place where assassins came in on the way was also super hot... it's awesome to say the least!!!

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May 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

面白いです

It's interesting

This review contains spoilers. １巻２巻と読み進めたのですが、話が分かりやすくて、かわいいし、程にエッチだし良いです。卵生んで、子供になってから子供達かわいいし、ほっこりもします。続きありそうだなぁ～、あってほしいなぁ～、待ってます。

This review contains spoilers. I read on from volume 1 to volume 2, and the story was easy to understand, cute, moderately naughty, and good. After they lay eggs and become children, children are cute and make them feel relaxed. It looks like there will be a continuation ~, I hope so ~, I'm waiting.

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May 18, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

よかった

That was great

思わず一気読みして、泣いてしまいました。叢雲の過去話うあ燕の過去話など、とてもつらいことがあっても、ともに生きていける幸せに出会えて良かったです。

I read it all at once, and I cried. I'm glad we were able to meet the happiness of being able to live together, even when things were very difficult, such as Murakumo's past story, Utaru's past story.

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