The Hawk God and The Pitiful Sacrifice Manga Reviews (P.3)

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Jun 17, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

健気な受けがどんどん幸せになってく良き。

It's good that a healthy reception makes you happier and happier.

最初はほんとに可哀想なのに健気な受けであるかさね、こと、燕ちゃんか、見ていて辛い、けど、どんどん幸せになってく過程が良かった。二巻からカワイイかわいい双子に拾い子のかわいいドラゴンまで出てきて、家族愛が溢れていて、3巻の最後は、もう、燕ちゃんの愛で皆を幸せに取り込んでいく感じが、救われた。

It was really pitiful at first, but it was probably a healthy reception, and it was hard to watch Tsubame-chan, but the process of becoming happier and happier was good. From volume 2, the cute and cute twins to the cute dragons they picked up came out, and family love was overflowing, and at the end of volume 3, the feeling that Tsubame-chan's love was already taking everyone into happiness, and I was saved.

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愛がいっぱい

A lot of love

This review contains spoilers. １巻のかわいそうな燕ちゃんが、嘘のように明るく、可愛くなって。。。泣けた。双子も可愛さ爆発。何度も読みたくなる作品です。

This review contains spoilers. Poor Tsubame-chan from volume 1 is as bright and cute as a lie... It made me cry. The twins also exploded in cuteness. It's a work you'll want to read over and over again.

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優しい神様

Kind God

神様の叢雲が最初に燕を襲ったとき、怖がらせて帰るように仕向ける意図だったのに、しっかりほぐして気持ちよくさせてるのはビックリしましたが、後から読むとそれもきっと優しさ故ですね。燕は現世では悲しいことが多かったですが、叢雲と幸せに慣れてよかったです。受けの燕が華奢でかわいい顔してますが、完全に女顔ってわけでもないです。いろんな人が出てきて色んなことが起こりますが、絵柄のせいか、結構サラサラっと読めます。

When God's Murakumo first attacked Tsubame, the intention was to scare him and make him go home, but I was surprised that it loosened up thoroughly and made him feel comfortable, but if you read it later, it's definitely because of their kindness. Tsubame was often sad in this world, but I'm glad he got used to Murakumo and happiness. Kakeru no Tsubame has a delicate and cute face, but that doesn't mean she's completely feminine either. A lot of people come out and a lot of things happen, but I can read it pretty smoothly, probably because of the pattern.

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May 13, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

感動した

impressed

This review contains spoilers. 最初はお互いギクシャクしてたけど、段々と心を通わせていき、最後は幸せになって心震えました。すごくほっこりしました。生い立ち辛いけどこれから幸せになって欲しい！！

This review contains spoilers. At first, we were both nervous, but then we gradually communicated, and at the end, we became happy and our heart trembled. I was so relieved. It's been hard growing up, but I want them to be happy from now on!!

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めっちゃ泣きました

I cried so much

This review contains spoilers. 作物の収穫などのために生贄が存在する時代が背景になっていて、足を怪我していて力仕事のできない受けに酷い扱いをしたあげく、妹を優遇するからと生贄になるように話を持ちかけた時は、イライラが止まらなかったです。過去に縛られた攻めが最初は強引だったのが、受けの真っ直ぐさに心を打たれて、惹かれて、好きになる過程が分かりやすく、受けの気持ちの真っ直ぐさも変わらずに話が進んだのが良かったです。1巻から2巻を通して、姿を変えてもなお、妹を護る兄の姿に涙が流れました。2巻では、しつこいくらいに当て馬が出てきますし、生贄になった受けを奴隷にさせようとしたのは、さすがに可哀想すぎる！となりましたが、攻めが怒って受けを守るシーンは、1巻の最初の頃とは想像できないほど、受けのことを大切にしているのが伝わってきて感動しました！幸せな夫夫をもっと見たい、もっと続いて欲しい....

This review contains spoilers. The background was an era where sacrifices existed for harvesting crops, etc., and I couldn't stop being frustrated when they treated them harshly in response to a foot injury and being unable to do heavy lifting, and when I asked them to be sacrificed because they gave preferential treatment to my sister. Attacks bound by the past were aggressive at first, but it was nice that I was struck by the directness of the reception, the process of being attracted, and falling in love was easy to understand, and the story progressed without changing the directness of the reception. Throughout volume 1 to 2, tears flowed over the appearance of my older brother protecting my younger sister even though he changed his appearance. In volume 2, the hit horse comes up for Persistent Boy, and it's really too pathetic that they tried to enslave a victim that was sacrificed! However, I was moved by the scene where the attackers get angry and protect their reception, and I was moved by the fact that they value receiving so much that I couldn't imagine it from around the beginning of volume 1! Happy Husband I want to see more husbands, I want more to continue...

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悲しいことを乗り越えて

Overcoming sad things

This review contains spoilers. 妹のために雨を降らせるために身を差し出した累。幽世で悲しい過去を持つ同士が出会って惹かれあっていく。神と贄。最初は距離もあるし、人間嫌いなので迷惑そうな叢雲でしたが、雨と妹のためとは言え、一生懸命に下働きをしている累を見て、人に対する気持ちがだんだん変わっていきます。お屋敷のたぬ吉が累を助けてくれます。可愛くていいやつです。叢雲と累が禁域のことでもめてしまった時もちゃんと累の味方をしてくれます。一生懸命な累は味方を増やしていき、ついには叢雲と気持ちを通じ合わせるのです！最初は単なる処理というか、嫌がらせだったのに…！身も心も結ばれて、お子まで！累の本当の名前は燕。足を悪くしてから累と名乗るようにしていたのですが。切ない。時々、燕は妹の雛の様子を知る事ができます。そんな優しさが、叢雲のいいところですね！可愛い絵柄でちょっとえつちで読みやすいです。子供達にも癒されます。ら

This review contains spoilers. I'm tired of offering myself to make it rain for my sister. People with a sad past in the secluded world meet and become attracted to each other. God and sacrifice. At first, there was a distance, and Murakumo seemed annoying because she hates people, but when she saw the rain and her hard work, her feelings for people gradually changed. Tanukichi in the mansion will help you get tired. He's a cute and nice guy. When Murakumo and Tage get bogged down because of the forbidden area, they are on the right side of Take. Hard work increases the number of allies, and finally they get along with Murakumo through their feelings! At first it was just processing, or rather harassment...! Body and mind are tied together, even children! Rei's real name is Swallow. I used to call myself tired after getting sick. It's sad. From time to time, Tsubame can learn about her sister's Hina's condition. That kindness is a good thing about Murakumo! It has a cute pattern and is a bit rough and easy to read. Children are also healed. A

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感動

touching

神への生贄となった燕は、人間であった時も生贄になった時も辛く悲しい思いをたくさんしているのですが、芯の強さ健気さと優しさで、鷹神様の心を癒し、愛される美しい物語です。鷹神様の叢雲は燕によって愛を知り救われたんだと思います。燕と叢雲が幸せになって本当に嬉しいです。

Tsubame, who was sacrificed to the gods, has many painful and sad feelings both when she was a human being and when she was sacrificed, but it is a beautiful story where she heals the heart of Takagami and is loved by her with her strength, health, and kindness. I think Takagami no Murakumo learned about love and was saved by Tsubame. I'm really happy that Tsubame and Murakumo are happy.

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最高

highest

This review contains spoilers. めちゃくちゃ感動しました。燕の強さ、潔さ、例え過去に何があっても燕は綺麗で素晴らしい人です。内容も感動しましたし、絵も綺麗で大変素晴らしい作品で、ずっと続いて欲しいと思いました。可愛らしいキャラも出てきて5本の指に入る、大好きな作品になりました。

This review contains spoilers. I was so moved. Tsubame's strength and cleanliness, no matter what happened in the past, Swallow is a beautiful and wonderful person. I was moved by the content, and the pictures were beautiful and it was a very wonderful work, and I wanted it to continue for a long time. Cute characters have also appeared, and it's one of the top 5 works, making it my favorite work.

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絵が好き

I like painting

何度読んでもこの話好き。不憫受けの救済ストーリーが好きな方はぜひ！真面目に読めば読むほどちょっと泣いちゃう。。最初は救済ストーリーねーって感じだったんですが。。3回目くらいでウルっときました。絵が綺麗で好きです。ただ受けの子が中性的な容姿なのでほぼ女子でもおかしくないルックス。それはそれで全然ありなのですが。

I love this story no matter how many times I read it. If you like the Pity Relief Story, don't miss it! The more seriously I read it, the more I cried... At first, I felt like it wasn't a relief story... It was about the 3rd time and I was shocked. The picture is beautiful and I like it. However, since Takenoko has a neutral appearance, it looks almost not strange even for girls. That's totally true, though.

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鳥人外かと思いきや

I thought it was outside Birdman

This review contains spoilers. 変身系でしたね☺かわいい系の受けだけど、芯がしっかりとしていてとてもよかったです。燕も叢雲もお互いが好きあっててかわいいお子ちゃまも♥

This review contains spoilers. It was a transformation type ☺ It's a cute reception, but it was very nice that the core was firm. Both Tsubame and Murakumo like each other and are cute kids too ♥

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かわいい〜のっ❣️

it's so cute ❣️

生け贄からのhappy end□ちびっ子達も生まれて、ほのぼの〜❗️大変大好きな作品でした〜□まだまだ、こどもたちの物語も描いてくださ〜い‼️

Happy End from Sacrifice □ the little kids were born too, and it's heartwarming ~ ❗️ It was a work I really loved ~ □ Please draw more children's stories too ‼️

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面白かったです！スピンオフも期待。

That was interesting! A spin-off is also expected.

This review contains spoilers. 叢雲さまも燕も、物語の序盤と比べて随分と柔らかい表情をするようになって…。それだけ幸せだということですね。叢雲さまの恋文の内容も知れてよかったです。まさかあんな純情な文を書いていたとは（笑）子どもたちの成長や、現世に修練に出された凍凪さまのその後、迦楼羅さまと西の王の関係など、まだまだ気になります。スピンオフがあるといいな！

This review contains spoilers. Both Murakumo-sama and Tsubame have much softer expressions compared to the beginning of the story... That's how happy you are. I'm glad I also knew the details of Murakumo-sama's love letter. I never thought I'd written such an innocent sentence (laughs), and I'm still worried about the growth of the children and the relationship between Karura and the King of the West after Mizunagi-sama who was sent for training in this world. I hope there's a spin-off!

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最高！

the best!

家族もののお話が大好きな私にはたまらないお話でした…！！！ふたりが幸せになっていくのが最高すぎました！！

It was an irresistible story for me who loves family stories...!!! It was so great that they both became happy!!

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良かった

good

This review contains spoilers. ずっと気になっていて、2巻が出たのを機に購入。辛い事が多々あるお話しでしたが、購入して良かったです。村の風習で生贄に出された燕。幼い妹と村を守るためですが、本当にこの風習も村もクソです。土地神様の叢雲にも理解してもらえず、ここでも辛いことに…これは2巻読んでから、更に1巻のここも最悪じゃんとなりました。燕の頑張りにより少しずつ叢雲も心を開いていきます。それが少し分かりづらいけど。迦楼羅やタヌ吉など優しい仲間も出来ますし、叢雲は溺愛攻めになります。そして子供も産まれる。1巻の着地としては纏まってました。2巻もウキウキで読んだら、めちゃんこ燕がかわいそうになっていて…ちょっとしんどかったですね。そして1巻の最初を思い出し、マジで不憫過ぎると落ち込みました。それでもこれからは叢雲や迦楼羅やタヌ吉、双子の子供にと幸せになる要素しかない布陣なので心の底から幸せに暮らして欲しいです。村人は罰当たれ！！絵もとてもキレイです。ただ、無理矢理表現が割と多め、2巻に至っては複数のモブに襲われているので地雷の方は要注意。

This review contains spoilers. I've always been interested in it, and I bought it when volume 2 came out. I was talking about a lot of painful things, but I'm glad I bought it. Swallows are sacrificed according to village customs. It's to protect my little sister and the village, but really, this custom and the village are crap. They didn't even understand Murakumo of the Earth God, and it's painful here too... after reading volume 2 of this, it became even worse here in volume 1. Little by little, Murakumo also opens her heart due to Tsubame's hard work. That's a little hard to understand though. You can also make friendly friends, such as Karura and Tanukichi, and Murakumo attacks. And children are also born. They were all wrapped up as the first volume. I was excited to read volume 2, and I felt sorry for Mechanko Tsubame... it was a bit difficult. Then I remembered the beginning of volume 1, and I was really depressed when it was too pitiful. Nevertheless, from now on, it is a formation where there are only elements that make Murakumo, Karura, Tanukichi, and their twin children happy, so I want them to live a happy life from the bottom of my heart. The villagers must be punished! The picture is also very beautiful. However, there are quite a few forced expressions, and up to volume 2, they have been attacked by multiple mobs, so be careful when it comes to landmines.

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良き作品

Good work

ストーリーと絵が良いです。BL初心者の私にピッタリでした。美しい男性同士ってなんでこんなに良いのかな〜（笑）

The story and pictures are good. It was perfect for me as a BL beginner. I wonder why beautiful men are so good with each other ~ (laughs)

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絵が

The picture

This review contains spoilers. 美しい！表紙の美しくさに惹かれて購入しましたが買って良かったです。幸薄な燕の境遇が切なすぎましたが…不器用なふたりが心を寄せあい通じあえて良かったです。双子の可愛さかたまりません。

This review contains spoilers. beautiful! I was attracted to the beauty of the cover and bought it, but I'm glad I bought it. The circumstances of the unlucky Tsubame were too sad, but... I'm glad the two clumsy people were able to get through with their hearts. I can't stand how cute the twins are.

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最高だ

Supreme

ああ、、最高だった、、絵が好みじゃなくて読むことないだろうと思っとったけどクーポンあったから購入して読んでみたらまあ面白いのなんの。泣きましたよ私。なんで早く見ないんだ？いつもそうだ。笑いあり涙ありの物語面白かったです。ちゃんとエチもあるよꯁꯧもっと見たかった！

Oh... that was great... I didn't like the picture and I thought I wouldn't read it, but since there was a coupon, I bought it and read it, which is pretty interesting. I cried. Why don't you watch it sooner? That's always the case. The story with laughter and tears was interesting. There's also a proper etiquette too haha I wanted to see more!

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遂に3巻

Finally, volume 3

This review contains spoilers. 新刊が出たので再レビュー。個人的にとても大好きです。最近は家族もののBLがどれも秀逸で癒されます。多少悲しい場面もありますがハッピーエンドなので大丈夫です。このお話のもっと家族の成長が観たいです。次はスピンオフの連載が始まるようです。

This review contains spoilers. A new publication has come out, so I'll review it again. I personally love it very much. Recently, all of the family BL games are excellent and healing. There are also some sad scenes, but it's okay because it has a happy ending. I want to see more family growth in this story. It looks like the spin-off series will begin next.

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素敵なお話でした

That was a wonderful story

ストーリーも絵もすごく素敵でした。2巻あるので読み応えもありました。主人公もその妹もみんなが幸せになれて良かったです。

The story and pictures were so wonderful. There are 2 volumes, so it was a good read. I'm glad that the main character and her sister are all happy.

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赤ちゃんが産まれて…

A baby was born...

This review contains spoilers. 生贄として、神の元に行った燕だったが、いつしか番となって、赤子を授かるまでになっていた。卵で産まれてきて、孵化するところや、双子の赤ちゃんが可愛くて、ほっこりしました。燕の過去にも触れていましたが、人間のときは、こんなにも苦労していたなんて、可哀想だなと思いましたが、その分、愛してもらえて、よかったなと思いました。

This review contains spoilers. It was a swallow that went to God as a sacrifice, but at some point it was her turn until she had a baby. They were laid with eggs, and the place where they hatched, and the twin babies were so cute, so I felt relieved. I've also touched on Tsubame's past, and I thought it was a pity that they had such a hard time when they were human, but I'm glad they loved them that much.

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