Twilight Out of Focus Manga Reviews (P.22)

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Jul 04, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

待ってました！

I've been waiting!

This review contains spoilers. 単行本になるのを待ち望んでいた作品です！期待が大きすぎると、ガッカリするケースが多々あるので心配しましたが、それでも発売日に即買いし即読み。そして買って良かったと喜びを抱きしめています。予想よりもアッサリしてましたが、映画にちなんだ表現が印象的で、学生の瑞々しさ、若々しさ、初々しさが詰め込まれた良作でした。心情がしっかり描かれていて、綺麗にまとまっていると感じました。ただ、少しおとなしい印象かもしれません。それを減点要素とするか、静かに描き切っていると評価するかは、好みによると思いますが、私はこの空気が好きでした。物語としては4〜4.5弱かな。でも、この作者さんのファンなので、☆マックスで評価させて頂きます！

This review contains spoilers. It's the work I've been waiting for to become a standalone book! I was worried because there are many cases where I would be disappointed if my expectations were too high, but even so, I bought it right away on the day it went on sale and read it right away. And I'm happy that I bought it. It was quicker than I expected, but the expressions associated with the film were impressive, and it was a good work packed with the freshness, youthfulness, and freshness of the students. The feelings were clearly depicted, and I felt that they were neatly organized. However, it may seem a bit quiet. I think it depends on your preferences whether to use it as a point deduction factor or evaluate it as quietly drawing, but I liked this atmosphere. As a story, it's probably 4-4.5 or less. But I'm a fan of this author, so I'll give it a ☆ max rating!

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Jul 26, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

シリーズ一作目　寿×真央

First film in the series Kotobuki x Mao

This review contains spoilers. 本編のみ231ページ。残像スローモーションから入ってこちらも購入。寮の同室から始まる高校生もので高校生活の青春が眩しい。寮室に二人の個性が見えるのも楽しい。癖がある絵だと思いますがこのシリーズにはハマっていて美しいです。映画部が舞台なだけあってちょっとしたコマの構図に動きがあって格好いい。このままシリーズ集めていきます。表紙絵の黒髪は作中作の委員長で寿はカメラを向けてる真央に目線を向けている（200ページのシーン）でいいのかな？

This review contains spoilers. The main story only has 231 pages. I went in from Afterimage Slow Motion and bought this one too. They are high school students starting in the same room in the dorm, and their youth in high school life is dazzling. It's also fun to see the personalities of the two in the dorm room. I think it's a picture with a habit, but I'm addicted to this series and it's beautiful. It's set in a film club, so there's a bit of movement in the frame composition, so it's cool. I will continue to collect the series. Is it OK for the black hair on the cover picture to have Kotobuki looking at Mao who is the chairman of the film in the story (200-page scene)?

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Jul 17, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

よかったー！

That was great!

試し読みで気になったので購入！雰囲気もキャラもみんなよくて一巻完結なのもったいないと思ってたら続編出てるみたいなので買います！

It was a trial reading and I was curious, so I bought it! The atmosphere and characters are all so good that I thought it would be a waste to complete one volume, but it seems like a sequel is out, so I'll buy it!

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Mar 29, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

寮生活

Dorm life

This review contains spoilers. 攻めが最初はもっと感じ悪いのかなと思ったけど最初から優しい人だった寮の同室ってなんかいいよね微笑ましい二人でこれからも見守りたい

This review contains spoilers. I thought the attack would be even worse at first, but it's kind of nice to be in the same room in the dorm from the beginning, aren't they two smiling people and I want to keep watching over them

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Feb 27, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

無題

Untitled

タイトルは知ってたけどなかなか購入してなかったけど、アニメ見てこれは漫画で見たいと思い購入。独特な絵のタッチで気だるそうだけどそれがまたエロい。

I knew the title, but I didn't buy it easily, but after watching the anime, I bought it because I wanted to see it in a comic. The unique touch of the picture makes it boring, but it's also erotic.

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Aug 20, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

なんか魅力ある

Something attractive

作者さんの絵が好き。なんか心を揺さぶられるわけでもないんだけど、お話もなんかいい。このシリーズ非現実な雰囲気もさらっと受け入れて読めるし、映画部の設定とキャラが強くて印象に残る。ビジュアルがみんな中性的で、攻受の役割も相まって男女性が混沌としてるのも面白いなと思う。中性という性別１つしかない世界みたいにも見える。

I like the author's paintings. It's not like it shakes my heart, but the story is good either. I can easily accept the unrealistic atmosphere of this series and read it, and the film club's settings and characters are strong, leaving an impression on me. The visuals are all neutral, and I think it's interesting that, combined with the roles of attack and attack, men and women are chaotic. It also seems like a world where there is only one gender called neutral.

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Aug 15, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

アニメから

From anime

きました。なんだかムズムズする感じが逆によかった。受けくんの行動が「？！」と思うことがありましたが、全体的に好きな感じです。続編もあるようなのでそちらも読んでみます。

It's here. On the contrary, the feeling of being stuffy was nice. The act of receiving is “?!” There were things I thought about, but overall I like it. There also seems to be a sequel, so I'll read that one too.

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Jul 27, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

あら、すごい色気が…

Oh, amazing sex appeal...

ほんとにDKですかーと言いたい色気が視線や仕草に駄々洩れしている寿くん。やんちゃっぽいDKはいつの時代も目を引く存在、そこに色気まで加わったらそりゃ好きになるわ！寮の同室設定が大好きな私はもうちょっと日常の部屋の中の行動が見たかったなぁ

Kotobuki-kun's sex appeal that he really wants to say is DK is leaking out in his gaze and gestures. The naughty DK has always been an eye-catcher, and if you add sex appeal to that, you'll fall in love with it! I love the dorm room setting, so I wanted to see a little more everyday behavior in the room

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Jul 15, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

良かった

good

This review contains spoilers. アニメ見てから来ました、お初の作者様。高校の寮で同室の訳アリ不良×普通の少年の話。普通少年の所属する映画部の作品に不良少年が協力し…という感じのスタート。ストーリーはヒリヒリ感がある青春BLで淡々とした空気感。作画はアニメの印象よりは書き込み線多めで少しクセがあるかも（アニメからきたのでそう感じやすいのかも）。エロシーンはエロ度は低め。青春BLが好きな人におすすめ。

This review contains spoilers. I came here after watching an anime, the first author. A story about a bad ant x a normal boy in the same room in a high school dorm. It started with the feeling that a bad boy cooperated with the film club that the normal boy belongs to... The story is a tingling youth BL with a sense of emptiness, and the atmosphere is bland. The drawing has more writing lines than the impression of the anime, so it's probably a bit addictive (maybe it's easy to feel that way since it came from anime). Erotic scenes have a low level of eroticism. Recommended for people who like Seishun BL.

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May 25, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

絵のタッチが気にならない方にはぜひ

Definitely for those who don't care about the touch of pictures

リアルで一通りの恋のイロハを経験した方が、初々しいけどテンポ良いファンタジーを求めているのならばオススメです本編は映画を舞台にしているのですが、その割に専門性はなく、映画という要素を購入材料に考える方には物足りなく感じると思います

If you're looking for an innocent yet well-paced fantasy, I recommend it if you're looking for an original yet well-paced fantasy. The main story is set in a movie, but for that reason, there's no expertise, and I think it's unsatisfactory for those who think about the element of film as purchasing material

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Mar 07, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

アオハルです☆

It's Aoharu ☆

青春です☆アオハルです♪キュンキュンです☆☆キャラが多くて、最初は混乱したけど、みんな顔が良くて良いです♪真央ちゃん、可愛い☆寿はカッコいい☆☆読んでいて幸せな気持ちになれる話でした！

It's youth ☆ it's Aoharu ♪ it's Kyun Kyun ☆☆ there are a lot of characters, and I was confused at first, but everyone has a good face ♪ Mao-chan is cute ☆ Kotobuki is cool ☆☆ It was a story that made me feel happy to read!

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Feb 07, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

救済でもない？

isn't it even a relief?

This review contains spoilers. 中学の時に教師と関係を持ってずるずる付き合っていた攻めってかなり闇を抱えてると思ったけれど、その教師と別れてからはあんまり摺れたところのない素直な高校生に変身。真面目な受けとももだもだせずにすんなりうまくいってちょっと拍子抜けしました。もうちょっと葛藤があってもよいと思ったんですけどね。まあシリーズ第一弾で、とりあえずハピエンということで。

This review contains spoilers. When I was in middle school, I had a relationship with my teacher and I thought the attack had quite a bit of darkness, but after breaking up with that teacher, I transformed into an honest high school student who didn't get along very well. It went so well without taking it seriously, and I was a bit out of touch. I thought it would be okay to have a little more conflict, though. Well, this is the first installment in the series, so for now it's Happien.

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Oct 24, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

美しい世界観

A beautiful view of the world

始まりは表紙に惹かれ立ち読みをして面白そうだったので購入しました。ストーリーもよく美しい世界観でした。映画部のみんな、キャラが濃くて中々面白い人達でよかったです。この2人の続編もあるみたいなので時間がある時に読みたいなって思います。

At first, I was attracted to the cover and it seemed interesting to read while standing, so I bought it. It was a beautiful world view with a good story. I'm glad that everyone in the film club has strong characters and is pretty interesting. There also seems to be a sequel for these two, so I want to read it when I have time.

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Aug 16, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

情景の美しさ

The beauty of the scene

じゃのめ先生は初めて読みました。抒情的で美しい画面に引き込まれます。表現手法にすごく力を入れていて読者にも伝えたい、という気持ちを受ったように思います。続編も読んでいきたいです。

I read Janome sensei for the first time. You'll be drawn into a lyrical and beautiful screen. I think I've received the feeling that they put a lot of effort into methods of expression and want to convey it to readers. I also want to read the sequel.

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Jul 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

うーん

Umm

良かったけどそんなにハマらなかったかも、、なぜかは分からないけど期待しすぎてしまった感はあったかな、

It was good, but maybe I wasn't that addicted... I don't know why, but there was a feeling that I had expected too much,

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Jan 11, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

面白い

interesting

とても面白い作品だと思います。シリーズの最初の単行本です。徐々に恋に落ちていく感じが好きですが、もどかしいと感じる人もいるかもしれないです

I think it's a very interesting work. This is the first book in the series. I like the feeling of gradually falling in love, but there may be people who find it frustrating

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Dec 30, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

よかった～！！

That was great!!

癖のある絵がちょっと苦手で中々手が出せませんでしたが、思いきって読んでみたら。。。ストーリー引き込まれました！シリーズのようで他のも読んでみます！

I wasn't good at drawing pictures with a habit, so I couldn't get my hands on them, but I read them to my heart's content... I was drawn into the story! It looks like a series, so I'll read the others too!

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Nov 16, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

青春だなぁ

it's youth

This review contains spoilers. 寮生活、同室、ゲイとノンケ。映画部と帰宅部。最初に恋愛しないという約束のシーン。ずっと気になりつつ読みましたが、大丈夫です。安心して最後まで読んでください。絵柄とお話がとてもあっていて、青春の良さと痛みを感じました。面白かったです。

This review contains spoilers. Dorm life, same room, gay and non-gay. The film club and the homecoming club. A scene where they promise not to fall in love first. I read it with interest for a long time, and it's fine. Please feel free to read to the end. The picture and story matched very well, and I felt the goodness and pain of youth. That was interesting.

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Aug 27, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

読了後、短い、もっと欲しい…

After reading it, short, I want more...

と思ってたら、まさかの200頁越えで、びっくりしました。もっと長い尺で読みたいくらい。もっと読みたいくらいがいいのかも。でも、男子校、寮、部活動、大好物のシチュエーションで、大満足。絵柄はあまり好みではないのですが、なんか好きな作者さんです。

When I thought about it, I was surprised that it was over 200 pages long. I wish I could read it at a longer length. Maybe I want to read more. But I was very satisfied with the boys' school, dormitories, club activities, and favorite situations. I don't really like the design, but I like the author.

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Aug 26, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

黄昏アウトフォーカス

Twilight Outfocus

This review contains spoilers. 初読み作家さんです。ずっと気になっていたので読めて良かったです。寿が色っぽいので実は受なの？とモヤモヤして読み進めてみたところやっぱり攻なのでホッとしました^^;

This review contains spoilers. I'm a first-time reader writer. I've always been interested, so I'm glad I was able to read it. Since Kotobuki is sexy, is it actually an acceptance? I was confused and read on, and I was relieved that it was an attack after all ^^;

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