Twilight Out of Focus Manga Reviews (P.21)

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

よい。

good.

寿が美しくてきれいだね。部活動として映画をつくることと並行して寿と真央の恋愛も進んでいくため、ふたりの恋話だけにスポットをあててないからか、読み終わったときはこれで終わり？と物足りなさを感じてしまった。お互い自覚のないまま自然に好きになっていった感じかな。ぜひ続編読みたいですね。もっとふたりの恋愛見ていたい。とくに寿の感情が揺れ動くようなシーンが見たい。

Kotobuki is beautiful and beautiful, isn't it? The love affair between Kotobuki and Mao progresses in parallel with making a movie as a club activity, so maybe because they don't focus only on the love story between the two, and this is where it ends when you finish reading? I felt that it was unsatisfactory. I think they naturally fell in love with each other without being aware of it. I definitely want to read the sequel. I want to watch more of their romance. I especially want to see scenes where Kotobuki's emotions fluctuate.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

やったぁ～！！

Hooray!!

一冊にまとまるまで、分冊版の7話だけ購入して今か今かと心待ちにしておりました。はぁ読めて嬉しい?とても良かったです。最高です！寿が大人びててエロく、真央の可愛さ❤このふたりがすごくお似合い。エッチもちゃんとあり、修正なしでの見せ方に脱帽。綺麗で想像したくなります。ほんと、続きが読みたいです。

Until it came together in one book, I bought only 7 episodes in the split edition and was looking forward to it now or now. huh, are you happy to read it? It was very good. It's awesome! Kotobuki is mature and erotic, and Mao's cuteness ❤ These two are a great match. There's also plenty of sex, so hat off to how to show it off without correction. It's beautiful and makes me want to imagine it. I really want to read more.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

画の分かりやすさ、綺麗さに脱帽‼

Hats off to how easy the pictures are to understand and how beautiful they are ‼

恋を自覚してからの真央（受け）がとても可愛かったです！カメラ越しの画も分かりやすく綺麗で、物語に入っていきやすく、200ページ超にも関わらず短く感じました。高校生活、そして卒業してからの二人をもっと読んでみたいです！

Mao (reception) was so cute after she realized she was in love! The images through the camera were also easy to understand and beautiful, easy to get into the story, and I felt short even though it was over 200 pages. I want to read more about their high school life and the two after graduation!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

完成した映画を見てみたい

I want to see the finished film

この作者さんの作品を読むのは３作目だけれど、最初は馴染めなかった絵柄が今では逆に好きになり、本作の寿がめちゃくちゃ綺麗で色っぽくて格好良かった。恋の芽生えと恋の気付きが無理なく描かれ、映画撮影に一生懸命な部員たちもただの脇役になっていなくて、１本の映画を見ているような不思議な感覚だった。真央は映像系の道に進むのかな。卒業後の寿と真央を追っかけてみたい。

This is my third time reading this author's work, but now I like the pattern that I wasn't familiar with at first, and the Kotobuki in this work was insanely beautiful, sexy, and cool. The emergence of love and the realization of love were depicted without difficulty, and the members of the club who worked hard to shoot the film didn't just play supporting roles, and it was a strange feeling like watching a single movie. I wonder if Mao will go on to the video industry. I want to follow Kotobuki and Mao after graduation.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

いい！

That's good!

This review contains spoilers. 絵がキレイ。高校生なのに色っぽい！真央がかわいい！もっとうじうじ片思いしちゃうのかと思いきや、グイグイ行くねー！！と感心。もっと先の２人が読みたいなぁ。続編希望！！！

This review contains spoilers. The picture is beautiful. She's sexy even though she's a high school student! Mao is cute! I wonder if they'll have even more unrequited love, but I'm going so fast!! I'm impressed. I want to read the two more people ahead. I hope for a sequel!!!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 08, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

◎

◎

This review contains spoilers. 試し読みよりも、購入して読んで話が進むにつれ絵も◎もう少し長く上下完結くらいで思いを伝える過程をも少しゆっくり二人を見たかった気もしましたが、大満足です！！読み返すお気に入り本が一つ増えました。その後の大人になった2人も見てみたい！！

This review contains spoilers. Rather than a trial reading, I bought it, read it, and as the story progressed, I also felt like I wanted to watch the two of them slowly and slowly the process of conveying their thoughts by completing the top and bottom, which is a little longer, but I am very satisfied!! The number of favorite books to reread has increased by one. I want to see the two adults after that too!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 07, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

美しい…

beautiful...

皆様書いてらっしゃいますが、二人が可愛すぎます。色気っぽくもあるし、文句なしです。買って良かったです！私の癒し

Everyone wrote it, but they are both too cute. They're also sexy, and I have no complaints. I'm glad I bought it! My healing

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 07, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

絵が綺麗

The picture is beautiful

攻めの切れ長の目とスラッとした骨ばった体の線が好き。キュンキュンするぅ。一巻で終わりは短い～…

I like the sharp eyes of attack and the slender, skeletal lines of the body. it makes me cringe. It's one volume and the end is short...

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 07, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

納得の高評価！

A convincing high evaluation!

This review contains spoilers. 表題作のみ、青春純愛BL、高評価も納得！とても良かったです！作者様の繊細なタッチの美しい絵で青春の甘酸っぱい感じとかふたりの心が近づいてく過程が丁寧に綺麗に描かれてて素敵だった！ゲイで彼氏がいるイケメン一匹狼の寿×純粋で優しい真央くんのお話。ゲイであることを秘密にする、恋愛対象としてみない、等ふたりのルールを決め、同じ部屋でルームメイトとして1年間暮らし、お互いに大切な友人になったふたり。真央くんが部活でとる映画のタイトルはBL、その主役に寿が抜擢され、そこから意識をしてしまって、という感じ。どこで好きになったか分からないけど日常の積み重ねで好きになってて急に意識しちゃう時ってあるよなぁと、近くに居すぎるからこそ相手の気持ちが分からなくてたまに拗らせちゃって、でも最終的にはお互いがお互いを応援し合う、認め合うような関係のふたりが素敵だと思いました！寿の過去は辛いけど、真央くんがしっかり受け入れてハッピーなふたりが良かった！あと、作者様は表情描くのが上手だと思います！寿の切なげな表情とか真央くんのえちの表情とか良かった〜。修正はほぼ見えない角度でした。

This review contains spoilers. I'm convinced that only the title work is Seishun Junai BL, and the high ratings! It was very good! The sweet and sour feeling of youth and the process of their hearts getting closer were carefully and beautifully drawn in beautiful pictures with the artist's delicate touch, and it was wonderful! A story about Kotobuki the lone wolf who is gay and has a boyfriend x pure and kind Mao-kun. The two decided rules such as keeping their homosexuality a secret, not seeing them as romantic partners, etc., lived in the same room as roommates for 1 year, and became important friends with each other. The title of the movie Mao-kun takes in Club Activities is BL, and I feel like Kotobuki was selected for the leading role, and he became aware of it from there. There are times when they don't know where they fell in love but fell in love with each other in their daily lives and suddenly became aware, and sometimes they were relentless because they were too close, but in the end, I thought it was wonderful for the two to have a relationship where they both support and acknowledge each other! Kotobuki's past is difficult, but it was nice that Mao-kun accepted it well and they were happy! Also, I think the artist is good at drawing facial expressions! Kotobuki's sad expression and Mao-kun's facial expression were nice. The correction was an almost invisible angle.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 07, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

コレは文句なしに

There are no complaints about this

一番好きです、じゃのめ先生作品の中で。いろんな角度から描かれている男子高校生が、とにかくカッコイイ⤴ 耳から顎にかけてのラインが特に好きです。映画部の部員もいい味出してる。部活モノいいですね。

Among Janome sensei's works, which I like the most. The male high school student drawn from various angles is just so cool ⤴ I especially like the line from ear to chin. The members of the film club are also showing good taste. Club activity stuff is good, isn't it?

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 07, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

かわいい

cute

まおがかわいい！ひさしのことが好きだと自覚してから、くっつくまで色々あるかと思ったけど、すんなりくっついた感じ。２人がかわいくて、何回も読み返したくなります。

Mao is cute! After I realized that I liked Hisashi, I thought there were a lot of things until they stuck together, but it felt like they stuck together smoothly. They are both so cute that I want to reread them over and over again.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 06, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

今まで読んだ中で上位を争うほどの作品

It's such a work that it competes for the top rank among those I've read so far

This review contains spoilers. 何回も読み返してしまう程、かなりハマってしまいました！！真央のピュアなところと、真央への気持ちに気付いてからの寿の一途なところがキュンキュンです。エッチもちゃんとあり、また、その見せ方が上手い！！角度を変えて描くことによって、修正なしでもこんなにエロくなるんだーと脱帽です(*´꒳`*)他の方のレビューにもあったように、分冊版7話はこちらの続きになっており、すぐさま購入！！でも、まだまだ２人の続きが見たい！！こちらの作品でじゃのめ先生のファンになりました☆

This review contains spoilers. I was so addicted to it that I reread it over and over again!! Mao's purity and Kotobuki's unwavering feelings for Mao since he realized his feelings for Mao are amazing. They also have proper sex, and they're good at showing it!! I take my hat off to say that drawing at a different angle makes it so erotic even without correction (*'`*) As others have reviewed, episode 7 of the split edition continues from here, so I bought it right away! But I still want to see the next two of them!! I became a fan of Janome sensei with this work ☆

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 06, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

かっ…可愛いっ…！！

huh... cute...!!

ほんとにほんとにほんとに、どこまでも可愛い二人！！真央も寿も、恋に真っ直ぐで一生懸命で、すごく良い子で応援したくなります。じゃのめ先生の描かれるキャラクターはみんな良い子で大好きなのですが、このお話の主人公たちは、その中でも群を抜いて可愛いのでは？また先生の見せ方がうまくて…。ぜひたくさんの人に読んでいただきたいです。その後の真央と寿を、どこかでまた見たいなぁ。

They are two really, really, really cute people!! Both Mao and Hisashi are straight in love and work hard, and they are really good kids and I want to support them. The characters drawn by Janome Sensei are all good kids and I love them, but aren't the main characters in this story by far the cutest? Also, the way the teacher showed it was so good... I definitely want many people to read it. After that, I want to see Mao and Kotobuki again somewhere.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 06, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

やっと！

at last!

待ってました！やっと読めた！高まりすぎてた期待を裏切らないお話しで、とてもよかったです！じゃのめ先生だいすき！

I've been waiting! I finally read it! It was a story that didn't disappoint my expectations, which had been raised so much, and it was great! I love Janome sensei!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 06, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

良かった

good

待ってました。作者買いです。真央が可愛い！ラストの涙が良かった！大人になった二人が見てみたい！

I've been waiting. I'm buying the author. Mao is cute! The last tears were good! I want to see these two grown ups!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 05, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

待ってました

I've been waiting

満たされる…幸せな気持ちになる。あまりの素敵で何回も何回も読み直しました。過去何千冊も読んできたけどこりゃええで…

It makes me feel satisfied... happy. It was so wonderful that I reread it over and over again. I've read thousands of books in the past, but that's fine...

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 05, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

待望の単行本

The long-awaited book

分冊から気になっていたのですが、一気に読みたくて漸く待ってました！！前からじゃのめさんの作品が好きでこちらの作品も読みましたが良かったぁ。また、男子校なのもいいし知らない間にお互い惹かれて惹かれて…番外編も良かったのでこちらの作品読んだ後是非！！！

I've been curious since it was split up, but I wanted to read it all at once, so I finally waited!! I've always liked Janome's work, and I read this one too, which was great. Also, it's good that it's a boys' school, and they were attracted to each other before they knew it... the extra edition was great too, so be sure to check it out after reading this work!!!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 04, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

完璧✨✨✨

perfect ✨✨✨

いや〜もう完璧！！！キャラも画力もセリフも構図もストーリーもエロもなんなら萌えまで「完璧デス！」ってこんな言い切れる作品にはなかなか出会えないですよね。お試し読みでビビっと来たら即ポチって後悔はないかと。深みのあるストーリーというよりは「高校生」という十代ならではの青春のきらめきと恋のときめきがギュギュッと詰まった作品という印象です。寿のイケメン&色気は反則級。こんなエロスの塊みたいな高校生居たらけしからんなー。笑寿の熱をはらんだ視線の色気ったら半端ナイですよー。というわけで、私はこれからコミックスに未収録の彼らの番外編をポチりに行って参ります！！楽しみ〜?※修正は必要ない構図で。でも！しっかり甘エロです?

No, it's already perfect!!! The characters, drawing power, dialogue, composition, story, and eroticism until Moe is “perfect death!” It's hard to come across a work that can be described as such, is it? As soon as I got scared with the trial reading, I wonder if I'll regret it. Rather than a deep story, I have the impression that it is a work tightly packed with the sparkle of youth and the crush of love unique to teenagers called “high school students.” Kotobuki's handsome guy and sex appeal are foul grade. I wouldn't be surprised if there were high school students who looked like such a bunch of eros. Lol I'm half-naive if you look at him with his fervent gaze. So, from now on, I'm going to poke out their extra edition, which hasn't been recorded in the comics!! looking forward to it~? ※The composition does not require correction. but! is it really sweet and erotic?

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 04, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

好きです

I like it

短話で読んでましたが単行本待ってました。番外編も可愛くて大満足です。

I read it as a short story, but I was waiting for the book. The extra edition is also cute and I am very satisfied.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jul 04, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

完成度の高い一冊

A book with a high degree of perfection

修正→見えない構図で素晴らしいエロス男子校寮生活映画作り、魅惑的なプロローグ、台詞、キャラ力、どれもツボ！映画を作る過程に伴い芽生えた恋心と気持ちの深まりの描写も見事。真央には手出ししない、という固い約束が解けてゆく瞬間の蕩ける感じがもうね。2人だけのムービーの演出もとても好き。ねねさんのレビューに分冊の番外編がこちらにら未収録という事で早速買いましたが、控えめに言って最高でした。ねねさん貴重な情報をありがとうございました！

Correction → making a wonderful Eros boys' dorm life film with an invisible composition, captivating prologue, dialogue, and character power are all points! The depiction of the deepening love and feelings that sprout along with the process of making the film is also amazing. I already feel a sense of emptiness the moment my firm promise not to touch Mao is broken. I also really like directing movies with just the two of them. The extra edition in Nene's review was unrecorded here, so I bought it right away, but to put it mildly, it was awesome. Thank you Nene for your valuable information!

Helpful

Reviews for Twilight Out of Focus Manga