A Beak Upon the Dawn's Flower Manga Reviews (P.2)

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Apr 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

美し過ぎやしないか？最高

isn't it too beautiful? highest

平安時代風、神社神道系の舞台に鳥人の羽が似合う似合う。舞台に人物、ストーリーも美しすぎます。1ページ1ページ噛み締めながら余すとこなく眺めています。ストーリーもキュンとして、全てにおいて完璧、続きが気になる。

Bird feathers look great on Heian period-style, shrine Shinto stages. The characters and story on the stage are too beautiful. I'm looking at it thoroughly while clenching page by page. The story is also amazing, everything is perfect, and I'm worried about the continuation.

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Feb 24, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

めちゃくちゃ可愛い

Insanely cute

This review contains spoilers. 朝凪が可愛くて純粋で繊細で何度も読み返してます?白栄様のもつ特性？的に難しい部分もあると思うけど報われて欲しい?続きが楽しみです！

This review contains spoilers. Asanagi is cute, pure, and delicate, and has you reread it over and over again? What are Hakuei-sama's characteristics? I think there are some difficult parts, but do you want them to be rewarded? I'm looking forward to the continuation!

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Feb 15, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

好き!!!!!

I like it!!!!

あ〜もういい！！絵も好みだしストーリーもドストライク！！相手が好き過ぎて傷つけるのが嫌って…たまらんｯｯｯ///w大好物ですwwwこれからの2人が楽しみでたまりませんねｰｰｰｰ!!!!!

ah, that's enough!! I like the pictures and the story is Dostrike! I love my partner so much that I don't like getting hurt... it's unbearable ///w it's my favorite food lol lol I'm looking forward to the next 2 of them...!!!

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Jan 27, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

尊いです！

It's precious!

This review contains spoilers. まだまだ途中なのでわからないことは多いですがとりあえず読めばわかります、とても尊いです。肉食獣と小動物の恋？みたいな感じで肉食獣が小動物のこと好き過ぎて悩んでる様が最高に良いです。

This review contains spoilers. I'm still in the middle, so there are many things I don't understand, but if I read it anyway, I understand it, it's very precious. Love between carnivores and small animals? It's really nice that carnivores like that are worried because they like small animals too much.

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Jan 24, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

最新刊まで一気読み

Read all at once until the latest edition

世界観が素晴らしすぎてとても楽しく拝読できました！細かいところまで描かれていて最高です…あまりに尊すぎて語彙力が…

The view of the world was so wonderful that I enjoyed reading it! It's amazing that even the details are drawn... it's so precious that my vocabulary is...

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Dec 31, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

よき

Good

しょっちゅう他社さんのcmで出てきていて、ずっと読みたかった！！幻想的で繊細な、きれいな絵で、うっとり。

It comes up all the time in commercials for other companies, and I've always wanted to read it!! I'm fascinated by the fantastic, delicate, and beautiful pictures.

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Dec 26, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

凄く良い！

Very good!

絵も綺麗だし、溺愛してるのに強く出れない鷹の君の不器用さも、朝凪の可愛さも伝わって来てほっこりします。更新が次々されたら良いな～早く読みた～い!!コミック化したら絶対買います!!ご検討下さいませ。

The picture is beautiful, and the clumsiness of Hawk-kun, who is doting on you but can't come out strong, and the cuteness of Asanagi are conveyed, making me feel relaxed. It would be nice if updates were made one after another ~ I want to read it fast!! I'll definitely buy it when it's made into a comic!! Please consider it.

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Dec 25, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

だっ。大好物。

huh. My favorite food.

これはいかん。大好物ファンタジー。嫁可愛い過ぎる。なんか色々やらされ過ぎて不憫過ぎるが大好物。とりあえず嫁を幸せにしてあげて欲しい。続きが楽しみです。

I can't do this. My favorite fantasy. My wife is too cute. I love being made to do too many things and feel too sorry, but it's my favorite food. For now, I want my wife to be happy. I'm looking forward to the continuation.

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Dec 22, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

絵が綺麗です。

The picture is beautiful.

朝凪さまがいじらしく可愛らしいです。そして白栄さまのビジュアルの良さよ。ファンタジー的な世界で、お話はまだまだこれからっぽいので、ふたりの仲がどう深まっていくのか凄く気になります。そして、白栄さまは王ですから、政治的な争いごともこれから起こってきそうな予感。色々な意味で、早くふたりが結ばれるシーンが見たいです。

Asanagi-sama is so annoying and cute. Also, Hakuei's visuals are so good. It's a fantasy world, and the story seems like there's still more to come, so I'm really curious about how the relationship between the two will deepen. Also, since Mr. Hakuei is the king, I have a feeling that all political disputes will happen in the future. In many ways, I want to see a scene where the two get together quickly.

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Dec 16, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い～エロっぽい

cute ~ erotic

健気で可愛い～たまりませんねぇ～早くなかの良い感じにならないかなぁ～二人とも好き同士だよね。きっと絶対幸せになってほしいなぁ～

They're healthy and cute ~ it's irresistible ~ I wonder if they'll feel better soon ~ they both like each other. I definitely want them to be happy~

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Dec 15, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

2人の愛の育みが楽しみ

I'm looking forward to the development of love between the two

先ず絵がとてもお綺麗です。着物の細かな柄とか全体的に繊細で綺麗。そして朝凪様が繊細で可憐な姫君(男性ですが)で一目惚れ。手が羽になってるのが素敵。白栄様が最初から愛情溢れる人のように思います。１話の印象は神秘的な姫君がひたすら王に溺愛されるお話という雰囲気がしますね。(そういうの大好き！)２人とも優しさが溢れてる感じ。心通わせていく様が楽しみです。

First of all, the picture is very beautiful. The fine patterns on the kimono are all delicate and beautiful. Then Asanagi falls in love at first sight with her delicate and pretty princess (although he is a man). It's nice to have your hands turned into wings. I think Hakuei-sama was a person full of love from the beginning. My impression of episode 1 is that it's a story about a mysterious princess who is simply doted on by the king. (I love that!) I feel like they are both full of kindness. I'm looking forward to seeing them communicate with you.

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Dec 10, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

白栄様かっこいぃ〜

Hakuei-sama is so cool

作者買いです。もちゃろ様、素晴らしい作品をありがとうございます！いつもに増して絵が素晴らしいです！朝凪が特に可愛すぎてたまりません。今後の配信を楽しみにお待ちしております！

I'm buying the author. Thank you Mocharo-sama for your wonderful work! The pictures are more amazing than ever! Asanagi is particularly cute and irresistible. We look forward to future broadcasts!

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Dec 09, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

おもしろいです

It's interesting

This review contains spoilers. 人外モノ興味なかったけど、これは雅な世界が綺麗でポチってしまいました。三話良いところで終わってるので、次回のイチャイチャ（また寸止めか⁈）が楽しみです。日栄（ひとりガラ悪い）が愛喰みを我慢しきれず極まってガブッとやったら、完全体？になれたりするのかな？初めての作者さんですが、これまでも人外モノ描かれてたようですが、絵も作風もとても巧みになった印象です。

This review contains spoilers. I wasn't interested in alien things, but this elegant world was so beautiful that it made me cringe. Episode 3 ended at a good point, so I'm looking forward to the next flirt (stop again?). If Nichiei (Bad Alone) couldn't put up with his love eater and got extremely stubborn, would it be a perfect body? I wonder if I can get used to it? This is my first time as an artist, and it seems that he has drawn foreign objects until now, and I have the impression that both the pictures and style have become very skillful.

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Dec 07, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

美しい……

beautiful...

絵がとても綺麗で、話の内容も好きです。複雑な感情や愛情表現に戸惑う二人のこれからの展開がどうなっていくのか待ち遠しい。

The pictures are very beautiful, and I like the story. I can't wait to see what the future unfolds for the two, who are puzzled by their complicated feelings and expressions of affection.

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Dec 07, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

待ってました！！！

I've been waiting!!!

ずっとずっと気になっていた作品…やっとここで拝見できる！！嬉しくて即ポチしてましたありがとうありがとう… 絵も世界観も綺麗で惹き込まれる、しかも純愛系…ぽい、けどちゃんと艶かしいシーンもあり……最高過ぎです！！これからの展開が楽しみ！

A work I've always been interested in... I can finally see it here!! I was so happy and immediately poked up thank you thank you... the pictures and the world view are beautiful, and I'm drawn in, and there are also pure love... but really glamorous scenes... it's too awesome!! I'm looking forward to future developments!

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Dec 04, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

嬉しいです

I'm happy

他サイトでずっと気になっていた作品がまさか、こちらで読めるなんて顔レビも沢山付けたいぐらい嬉しいです。NEWマークの出るペースが遅い作品は、待ちきれなくて途中で挫折しがちなので、程良いペースで楽しめたらと思います。

I've always been interested in works on other sites, and I'm so happy to be able to read them here so much that I want to add a lot of facial reviews. The slow paced works that show the NEW Mark can't wait and tend to get frustrated along the way, so I hope you can enjoy them at a moderate pace.

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Dec 01, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

待ってました

I've been waiting

ずっと待ってたので読めて幸せ。とにかく絵が美しくて、お話も素敵です。不憫な受けですが、痛々しいとか悲愴感溢れてる感じではないので、心が乱されず落ち着いて世界観に浸れます。攻めがどっしり構えてる感じもすごく安心感があるし、でも可愛いかったりもするのでギャップ萌えします。続きが楽しみで仕方ないです。

I've been waiting so long, so I'm happy to read it. Anyway, the pictures are beautiful, and the story is wonderful. It's a pity, but it's not painful or full of sorrow, so you can calm down and immerse yourself in the worldview without disturbing your mind. There's also a great sense of security when the attack is strong, but it's also cute, so there's a gap. I can't help but look forward to the continuation.

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Nov 29, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

和風ファンタジー

Japanese fantasy

とてもきれいで優雅な絵です。どうして手が羽なのか、なにか秘密があるのか早く先が読みたくてたまりません。期待しています。

It is a very beautiful and graceful picture. I'm dying to read ahead quickly to see why Hands are Wings or if there are any secrets. I'm looking forward to it.

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Nov 23, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

美麗な舞台の裏側?みだらな艶事にときめく

behind a beautiful scene? I'm thrilled with indecent lustful things

This review contains spoilers. 白いふわふわ羽毛髪（強く美しい白鷹の帝）×黒ロングストレート髪（可憐な翼腕メジロの后）舞台は和風王朝ファンタジーで、鳥が人に転化しています。御殿、十二単、束帯、花々、和歌、唐菓子、お輿入れ、閨の御作法、夜のお渡り、優雅でうっとりできます。弱小な一族からまともに人に転化出来ない男の小鳥を、帝の正后として輿入れさせる。二人は過去に出会っていそうな感じです。虐められたりはしません。夫君が愛するあまり愛喰の衝動や態度を取り繕って、すれ違っています。これから物語が動き出すのかな、といった感じ。【実はかなり艶事あり?】一見美しい夢のような世界ですが、色々な性癖が詰まっています。特に女孺による后への閨の教育が淡々と凄い。張り型でのお慣らし拡張、喉奥や口唇での愛し方の指導、極めさせることは夫君にしか許されないので寸止め一ヶ月……。夫君からは求愛給餌、愛喰衝動未遂（キュートアグレッション？）、お腹を押しただけでの絶頂、手で触られ極める……5話目でも交尾まで至っていないのに、この先どうなっちゃうのだろう?（5話まで既読）「眇たる何をもでも」は“取るに足らない何であっても”、みたいな意味です。自分よりも相手を思い遣っていて健気。相思相愛だけど、まだお互いに片想い中。

This review contains spoilers. White fluffy feather hair (strong and beautiful emperor of the white hawk) x long black straight hair (behind the pretty winged white-eye) is set in a Japanese-style dynastic fantasy, and birds are transformed into people. Palaces, twelve-fold ties, flowers, Japanese songs, Chinese sweets, okoshiki, Japanese manners, and night time walks are elegant and enchanting. Kotori, a man who can't properly turn into a person from a weak family, is forced to pass in as the emperor's direct queen. The two seem to have met in the past. You won't be bullied. My husband loves them so much that they fix their instincts and attitudes, and they pass by each other. I feel like the story is about to start unfolding. [Actually, it's pretty glossy?] At first glance, it's a beautiful, dreamy world, but it's filled with various sexual habits. In particular, the education given to later generations by women and children is so bland and amazing. I stopped for a month because only my husband is allowed to do extreme things such as relaxation and dilation with a tension type, and guidance on how to love with the back of the throat and lips... Courtship feeding from my husband, attempted love eating (cute aggression?) , climax just by pressing your stomach, being touched with your hands to the extreme... even though they haven't even mated even in episode 5, what will happen in the future? (Read up to 5 episodes) “whatever is insignificant” means something like “whatever is insignificant.” They are healthy because they care more about their partner than themselves. We're in love with each other, but we still have unrequited love for each other.

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Nov 20, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

これ絶対好きなやつ

This is one I definitely like

とにかく白栄様の顔がいいので満点。読むだけで肌の調子が良くなるので白栄様の顔はデパコスより効きます。写真集とか出して欲しい。言い値で買います。なんかあの白栄様の耳らへんの羽？みたいなのがフワッフワッですね！？フワッフワッ！！顔がいい！！とどめの黒手袋がもうやばい。

Anyway, Hakuei has a nice face, so it's a perfect score. Your skin condition will improve just by reading it, so Hakuei's face is more effective than Depacos. I want them to put out a photo book or something. I'll buy it at the asking price. Something that Hakuei-sama can't hear? Something like that is so fluffy isn't it!? huh huh!! Nice face!! The black gloves at the end of the day are already bad.

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