A Beak Upon the Dawn's Flower Manga Reviews

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Oct 24, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

はぁ〜〜美しすぎる♡

huh... it's too beautiful ♡

もうね、表紙見ただけで、この美しさは全ての方に伝わると思います……思いますが、ぜひ本作を買って隅々まで読んでほしい。もちゃろ先生の繊細な作画はね、見るだけでも価値があります。その上キャラたちが最高に尊くて……上品なエロスが貴方を待ってるよ！ぜひ！！

Well, I think this beauty will be conveyed to everyone just by looking at the cover... I think, but I definitely want you to buy this work and read every inch of it. Mocharo-sensei's delicate drawings are worth just looking at. Furthermore, the characters are extremely precious... and elegant Eros is waiting for you! by all means!

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May 19, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

かわいい

cute

This review contains spoilers. 実は表紙買い&作者買いです。人外やちょっと特殊な設定がお好きなのでしょうか？前読んだ作品より画力が上がっているような気がします。溺愛が大好物なので今後も楽しみです！

This review contains spoilers. Actually, I bought the cover and bought the artist. Do you like outsiders and slightly special settings? I feel like my drawing power is better than the work I read before. Doting is my favorite food, so I'm looking forward to it in the future!

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Dec 02, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

さきが気になる

I'm worried about Saki

絵もきれいだしこのさきが気になります！時代物が好きです！まだまだ序盤すぎて、、このあとどんなふうになるのかなぁ

The pictures are beautiful too, and I'm worried about this! I love period stuff! It's still too early... I wonder what it will be like after this

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Dec 02, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

衣装が素晴らしい。

The costume is amazing.

This review contains spoilers. お話の初めの方に女官？が受けの体をあれこれする場面が大変地雷でした。私は女の人が出てくるのが無理なのであそこが男だったら良かったなと思いました。

This review contains spoilers. the lady at the beginning of the story? The scene where they do this and that on the receiving body was a huge landmine. It's impossible for women to come out, so I thought it would have been nice if they were men.

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Dec 02, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

絵もストーリーも綺麗！

The pictures and story are beautiful!

This review contains spoilers. 朝凪が自分の中途半端な姿を醜いと思って遠慮してるけど、全然気にせずめちゃくちゃ大好き丸出しの白栄が良い～！平安時代っぽい設定と作画がもろ好みです♪単話だけど買っちゃってます！1冊に纏まるのも楽しみです♪

This review contains spoilers. Asanagi thinks her half-hearted appearance is ugly, so I don't care about it at all, and I love Hakuei from Baredake so much that I like it! I like all the Heian Period-like settings and graphics ♪ I bought it even though it's a single episode! I'm also looking forward to putting it together in one book ♪

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Sep 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

続きが楽しみ

I'm looking forward to the continuation

単話と単行本どちらも購入。鷹の白栄様と目白の朝凪。絵が綺麗。白栄様の目とか睫毛表情が格好良いし可愛い。話はこれから進んでいく感じ。続きが楽しみです。

I bought both a single story and a single book. Hakuei the hawk and Asanagi from Mejiro. The picture is beautiful. Hakuei's eyes and eyelash expressions are so cool and cute. I feel like the story is about to move on. I'm looking forward to the continuation.

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Aug 21, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

世界観に惹き込まれます。

I'm drawn to the view of the world.

絵柄が兎に角美しい…！ファンタジーを描かれるのに向いていらっしゃる気がして一気に惹き込まれました。一話読んで続きがとても気になる状態なので、単行本も出たこの機会に買って読もうと思います♡

The design is beautiful with rabbit horns...! I was drawn to it all at once because I felt that they were suited to drawing fantasies. After reading episode 1, I'm very worried about the continuation, so I think I'll take this opportunity to buy the book and read it ♡

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Aug 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

平安風ファンタジー

Heian-style fantasy

This review contains spoilers. 毎話更新を楽しみにしていて、6話までの感想です。平安時代の雰囲気漂う、和風ファンタジー。絵がとても丁寧で繊細に描かれていて、物語の世界観に引き込まれました。ゆっくりと進展する2人の関係を楽しみつつ、6話の最後が不穏なんですが…。白栄様のあの台詞の意味が気になります?

This review contains spoilers. I'm looking forward to every episode being updated, and my impressions are up to 6 episodes. A Japanese-style fantasy with an atmosphere from the Heian period. The pictures were drawn very carefully and delicately, and I was drawn into the world view of the story. While enjoying the relationship between the two that slowly progresses, the end of episode 6 is unsettling... Are you curious about the meaning of Hakuei-sama's line?

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Jul 21, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

求愛の給餌は夫の誉・・・

Courtship feeding is my husband's honor...

日本語の美しさを感じる漫画です。タイトルの台詞が今まで本や漫画を読んできて、一番胸を打ち、大げさに聞こえるかもしれませんが生き方を考えさせられました。仕事にも育児にも。優しい漫画はいくらでもあるのですが、この作品は少し趣が違って、人との向き合い方を考えるヒントを得られると感じました。有難うございます。

It's a comic where you can feel the beauty of Japanese. The line in the title has touched my heart the most since I've read books and comics until now, and although it may sound exaggerated, it made me think about how to live. For work and childcare. There are plenty of gentle comics, but this work has a slightly different flavor, and I felt that I could get hints for thinking about how to deal with people. Thank you very much.

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Jul 10, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

6話まで

Up to 6 episodes

話が途中になると続きが気になるから、と、単行本なら1巻あたりの6話まで待ってから一気読みしました。、、、が、続きます（笑）。終わりませんでした。エチもまだ本格的にはなし。これは長くなりそうな予感。作者様買いですが、前作よりも作画に磨きがかかってます。情景も美しい。細部まで綺麗です。着物も丁寧です。今回は攻めがタイプ！

I read it all at once after waiting until 6 episodes per volume if it was a book, because I was worried about the continuation when the story was in the middle. ... but it continues (laughs). It wasn't over. Ethi isn't in full swing yet either. I have a feeling this is going to take a long time. I bought it from the author, but the drawing is more refined than the previous work. The scene is also beautiful. Every detail is beautiful. The kimono is also careful. Attack is the type this time!

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Jul 08, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

いいね

nice

２人の仲睦まじさが、焦れったいけどでも、ホンワカしてなんかいいな〜これからも、いい方に話が進んで行くといいなと切に願う私です。次回も楽しみにしてます

The friendship between the two is serious, and even though I'm impatient, I sincerely hope that it would be nice if the conversation progresses in a good direction from now on. I'm looking forward to the next one

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Jun 29, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

とにかく可愛過ぎる

Anyway, it's too cute

もうこのふたりが可愛過ぎる。エッチシーンは無いけど充分に癒される?お互いに想う表現が美しい絵と共に合ってて素敵です?次の話まで待つのが辛いわぁ。この2人がずっと幸せでありますように

these two are already too cute. there are no sex scenes, but are you healed enough? Is it wonderful that the expressions you have for each other go well with beautiful pictures? It's hard to wait until the next episode. May these two be happy forever

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May 29, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

内容も作画も最高！

The content and drawing are great!

和風が好きなので自分的には凄く刺さりました！朝凪がめちゃくちゃ可愛い!!二人が初々しいのも最高すぎました!

I like Japanese style, so it really stuck with me! Asanagi is so cute!! The fact that the two of them are fresh was also amazing!

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May 28, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

華やかな優しい世界

A glamorous and gentle world

八咫烏シリーズ的な、鳥になれる人間が暮らす世界の王朝もの。BLだが猛禽系の王・白栄は格好良く、小鳥系の朝凪はかわいらしく、お話もほのぼのしていて可愛いです。少女漫画的雰囲気でも、エロシーンはガッツリあります（BLのジャンル分けがされているので問題ないか？）。布がたっぷりな平安時代的な装束も良い。主人公たちだけでなく、女性や老人も好ましい描き方がされています。絵がとても綺麗なので紙でも読みたいです。

Like the Yatagarasu series, it's from a world dynasty where people who can become birds live. BL, but Hakuei, the king of raptors, is good-looking, Asanagi of the small bird family is cute, and the story is heartwarming and cute. Even though it has a girls' manga atmosphere, there are plenty of erotic scenes (since they are divided into BL genres, isn't that a problem?). Heian period costumes with plenty of cloth are also good. Not only the main characters, but also women and old people are drawn in a preferred way. The pictures are so beautiful that I want to read them on paper.

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Apr 25, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

か、かわいい！健気過ぎる！

or so cute! I'm too energetic!

This review contains spoilers. 攻め様も、受けちゃん　も　それぞれ辛い経験があり、現在進行形で苦しんでます。互いの想いが切なすぎて健気過ぎて、どうしたら2人が幸せになれるのか本気で悩んでしまいます。可愛い…です。早く続きが読みたい。

This review contains spoilers. Both Attack-sama and Uke-chan have had difficult experiences, and they are currently suffering in a progressive manner. Their feelings for each other are so sad and so healthy that they are seriously worried about how to make them both happy. it's cute... I want to read more soon.

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Apr 24, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

うつくしい！

beautiful!

This review contains spoilers. まず作画が眼福美しすぎる。白栄様がとても見目麗しくギャップがとてもいい…！朝凪が女の子にしか見えない点が少し気になりますが、ストーリーもとても丁寧に進んでいくので好感がもてます。楽しみな作品

This review contains spoilers. First of all, the drawing is too eye-pleasing. Hakuei-sama is so pretty and the gap is so nice...! I'm a little concerned that Asanagi can only be seen by girls, but the story also progresses very carefully, so I like it. A work to look forward to

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Apr 22, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

美しい世界

A beautiful world

絵も世界観も美しいです。作家さん買いだったのですが、格段に画力が上がり眼福です。お話も好きなお話で、つい単話買いしてしまいました。お互いを思う強い気持ち、伝わりあってはいないけれど、周囲の暖かさにも触れつつ早く思いを通じ合ってほしい。ゆっくりと進んでいく恋愛模様に焦ったい感もありますが、美しい絵に癒されるので、これからも単話で追っていこうと思います。続き楽しみです。

Both the picture and the view of the world are beautiful. The artist bought it, but my drawing power has improved dramatically, and it's a blessing for my eyes. I also liked the story, so I just bought a single episode. The strong feeling of thinking about each other isn't conveyed, but I want them to quickly come through with their thoughts while also being in touch with the warmth of their surroundings. There is also a feeling that I'm impatient with the love pattern that slowly progresses, but I'm healed by the beautiful pictures, so I think I'll continue to follow it in a single episode. I'm looking forward to the continuation.

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Apr 17, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

とっても好き

I like it very much

とーっても好きな作品です。とにかく絵が綺麗で、話も今のところ優しい感じに進んでいます。ですが、もう少し展開が早く進むと嬉しいです。先が読めなすぎてかもしれませんが、もたついてる感がします。もしかしたら単行本版で読む方が私には合ってるのかもしれません。

It's a work I really like. Anyway, the picture is beautiful, and the story is progressing kindly so far. However, I would be happy if the development progressed a little faster. Maybe I can't read ahead too much, but I feel sluggish. Maybe it's better for me to read it in a standalone edition.

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Apr 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

初々しい〜

innocent ~

ほんのり二人の距離縮まった？かなでもじれったい〜！！続きは絶対買うんだけど早くー！相変わらず絵がべらぼうにうますぎる更新ないけどどしたの？

Has the distance between the two of you shortened a little bit? Kana but I'm so upset!! I'll definitely buy the next one, but fast! The pictures are still so good that they haven't been updated, but what happened?

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Apr 13, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

明けの花に嘴

Morning flower with beak

とにかく！とにかく！絵が美しい！朝凪が可愛い！白栄様もステキ！平安時代っぽい設定も鳥の獣人設定もこの作品の何もかもが私のツボです！続きが楽しみすぎて仕方がないです！

anyway! anyway! The picture is beautiful! Asanagi is cute! Hakuei-sama is wonderful too! Everything about this work, from the Heian period setting to the Beast Man setting, is my point! I'm enjoying the continuation so much that I can't help it!

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