ADMONITION FROM AN ELDER BROTHER Manga Reviews (P.3)

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Aug 11, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

こういうの求めてました！

I was looking for something like this!

This review contains spoilers. 絵が抜群に好み。特にユキチとイナゾウのBLすぎないというか…友情に毛が生えたような少しの密着がたまらなかった。兄の忠告は実兄弟ものなので苦手な方は避けて。ただ、私もそれほど得意ではなかったけどすんなり読めたので、冒険してみるのもいいかも。

This review contains spoilers. I really like the picture. In particular, the BL between Yukichi and Inazou wasn't too good... the slight closeness that seemed to have grown hairs on their friendship was unbearable. My older brother's advice is from my biological siblings, so avoid those you don't like. However, I wasn't that good at it either, but I was able to read it easily, so it might be a good idea to go on an adventure.

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Dec 21, 2018 (PST) | Translate to English

おもしろい

entertaining

話がとにかく面白かったです。表題作の兄の話も短いながら兄弟のぎこちない雰囲気や距離感が描かれていて、話作りの上手さに驚きました。他の収録作品もどれも話の展開で読ませてくれるので、エロ描写がなくてもとても満足できます。BLというよりはヒューマン作品という感じですが、こういう内容が詰まった作品もいいなと思います。

Anyway, the story was interesting. The story of the older brother in the title story is also short, but it depicts the siblings' awkward atmosphere and sense of distance, and I was surprised at how good the story was. They let me read all of the other recorded works as the story unfolds, so I'm very satisfied even if there are no erotic depictions. It feels like a human work rather than a BL, but I think works filled with this kind of content would also be nice.

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Oct 18, 2018 (PST) | Translate to English

恋の話というより

Rather than a story about love

This review contains spoilers. 愛情とか執着とか、家族に近い情っていうか、そういうのが好きなのでたまりませんでした。ぐっときたのは兄の顔が男前すぎるのと、パン屋さんの話が世知辛温かすぎるところ。キレイに事を進められない不器用な短髪男性が一生懸命生きてるのを見てきゅんとしました…(*´▽｀*)

This review contains spoilers. I like love, attachment, or feelings close to my family, so it was irresistible. What struck me was that my older brother's face was too handsome and that the bakery story was too bitter and warm. I was amazed to see a clumsy short-haired man who can't proceed with things cleanly living so hard... (*'▽ `*)

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Aug 04, 2018 (PST) | Translate to English

受け様愛され度90

Receptionist Loves Degrees 90

レビューに習って表題作のブログ読み兄弟の発展しそうな予感にわくわくしました。絵も個性的でかっこいい。表題作だけでも星5つなのに、他の短編もよかった。毛虫のしょうくん、かわいい。

I learned from the review and read the title blog, and I was thrilled by the feeling that the brothers seemed to develop. The pictures are also unique and cool. Even though the title work alone received 5 stars, the other short films were good too. Sho-kun the caterpillar is cute.

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Dec 04, 2016 (PST) | Translate to English

めちゃめちゃたのしめる！！❤

I'm having so much fun!! ❤

サンプルで絵があれかなーっと思ったが、読んでるうちに良くなってきた！兄弟物としてのストーリーもちゃんとしててドキドキできる！お兄ちゃんの葛藤がいい！一冊この兄弟でもよかったなぁ、、

I was wondering if the picture was in the sample, but it got better as I read it! It's exciting to have a proper story as siblings too! My older brother's conflict is good! It would have been nice if it was one book by these siblings...

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Jun 05, 2016 (PST) | Translate to English

描きおろしから本領発揮？

From the first moment you draw it, show it to your true form?

★５は、表題作＆描き下ろし＆ブログ発表３編の評価です。他の短編は★３～４くらい。何がいいって、ザ・男の思考と行動なところ。これまでも男の思考と行動の作品に高い評価付けてましたが、まぁ、なかなかないので、少し女っぽいところがあっても大目に見てました。でもこれは女っぽいところゼロです。それがいい。そんな男な兄と弟が、最終的にBLな気分になってしまう状況を違和感なくまとめているのがウマイです。本編のBL度はほぼゼロです。描き下ろしで火が付きます。ブログ３編を読むと描き下ろしがもっと楽しくなります。ブログの作品は、エロ系BLで描くと変態行為になってしまうのですが、そりゃぁ、現実こういうことあるよね、という設定なので気持ち悪くないです。（変態っぽいのは好きでないので）電子書籍の自由度を活かして、表題作と書き下ろしとブログ３編をまとめたらいいのに～、と思いました。総198ページ。

★ 5 is an evaluation of the title work, drawing, and blog presentation 3. The other short stories are about ★ 3-4. What is good is the man's thoughts and actions. Until now, works of men's thoughts and actions have been highly praised, but well, there aren't many, so I condoned them even if they were slightly feminine. But this has zero femininity. That's good. It's funny that such a male older brother and younger brother summarize situations where they eventually feel like BL without any sense of incongruity. The BL level of the main story is almost zero. It catches fire when you draw it down. If you read 3 blogs, drawing becomes even more fun. Blog works become perverted acts when drawn in erotic BL, but well, it's not disgusting because the setting is that in reality this kind of thing exists. I thought it would be nice if I could take advantage of the degree of freedom of e-books (since I don't like perverted ones) and put together 3 titles, writing down the title, and 3 blogs. 198 pages in total.

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Mar 08, 2016 (PST) | Translate to English

男性も読めそう。ブログの続編が良い!

Men seem to be able to read it too. A blog sequel is good!

表題作がすごく良い。そんで一番BLぽい。★5は、表題作+巻末の続き短編+ブログ掲載の続編込みの評価。はっきり言って、すっごくもったいない!ブログの分も全部収録して一冊表題作だったら、評価絶対上がるのに!といっても、ブログの短編は単行本発行されて随分してから描かれたようです。続刊で発行したら良いのに〜。ブログの話も一緒に読まなきゃ、ソンです!コチラの単行本読んでからブログの短編3本、順番どおりに読むのがオススメです（ブログ名、そんなにねむくない）この本自体は短編集。広義のBL？最初の表題作一話と他の短編を順に読むと、？？？、と違和感を覚えるかも。何故ならLove的要素が皆無に思えるから（笑）。表題作は続編郡込みで、最終的にはラブっぽくストーリーもキャラも面白くなってますが、この一冊だけ読むと独特な雰囲気のストーリー集。好みが大きく分かれそう。ラブラブを期待する人には向きません。メインの登場人物達が男性のストーリー集。友情、家族愛、さらに恋らしき感情の芽生えるか芽生えないか。。そうやって読むと、ギャグっぽさを含みながら楽しく読めます。腐女子以外にも受けそうな作品。絵的にも、男性も楽しく読めそう。（私見ですが）こういう広義のBL？、どのカテゴリの漫画と問われたら私はBLで良いと思う。少女漫画に色々なタイプの話があるように、BLだって色々あって良いじゃないか！と。それだけ許容範囲が広ければ、幅のある面白い作品が増えてくれるかな〜♪という下心もあるからですけど。

The title work is really good. That's why it's the most BL-like. ★ 5 is an evaluation that includes the title work+the short story that continues at the end of the book+the sequel published on the blog. Frankly speaking, it's sooo wasteful! If I had recorded all of my blog posts and made the title for one book, my ratings would definitely go up! However, it seems that the short story on the blog was drawn long after the book was published. It would be nice if it was published in a sequel edition. I have to read the blog story together, it's Song! I recommend reading the book here and then reading the 3 short stories on the blog in order (blog name, I'm not that sleepy) This book itself is a short story. BL in a broad sense? If you read the first episode of the title story and the other short stories in order,??? You may feel a sense of incongruity with,. That's because there doesn't seem to be any love elements at all (laughs). The title work includes a sequel county, and in the end, the story and characters are both love-like and interesting, but if you read only this one book, it's a collection of stories with a unique atmosphere. There seems to be a big difference in taste. It's not suitable for people who expect a lovey-dovey relationship. A collection of stories where the main characters are men. Will friendship, family love, and even feelings like love sprout or not... If you read it that way, it's fun to read while containing a gag feel. This work is likely to be received by people other than Rotten Girls. Pictorially, men also seem to enjoy reading it. (IMHO) BL in a broad sense like this? If you were asked what category of comics it was, I think BL would be fine. Just as there are many types of stories in girls' comics, isn't it good that there are various BL too! and. That's because I also have an ulterior motive that if the tolerance range is that wide, I wonder if the range of interesting works will increase ~ ♪.

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Jun 21, 2015 (PST) | Translate to English

大好きです

I love it

絵柄と、表題作の攻めが好きな要素を持ってるということに惹かれて読んでみましたが、読後に読んでよかったなあ、作家さん追いをしたいなあ、と強く感じられた素敵な作品でした。今時珍しい？本番がない作品が多く、BL！と強く押し出されるところがない、独特な雰囲気をもつ漫画が多かったですが、私にはそれがちょうどよく馴染みました。自分の好きな商業BL漫画トップ5には入るかなあという感じでした。ちなみに表題作は朝田先生のブログでおまけ漫画が二つほど見れます。非常に可愛らしいので、二人が気に入られた方は是非。

I read it because I was attracted to the design and the fact that the attack in the title work has elements I like, but it was a wonderful work that made me feel strongly that I'm glad I read it after reading it, and that I want to go after the artist. Is it unusual nowadays? There are many works that don't have an actual performance, BL! There were a lot of comics with a unique atmosphere where there was no place that was strongly pushed out, and that suited me just right. I was wondering if it would be in the top 5 commercial BL comics I like. Incidentally, you can see about two bonus comics for the title work on Asada sensei's blog. They are very cute, so if you like them, don't miss it.

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秀逸な作品です。

It's an excellent work.

表題作兄の忠告と他１本はシリアスで、後はシリアス混じりのシュールなギャグ話です。兄の忠告は非常に渋い話で、兄の弟に対する絶対的な兄貴ぶりと反抗的な弟が次第に兄を認め軟化していく様がとても良いです。このヤクザ者の兄貴は決して弟を見捨てないし、弟は生涯兄貴にかなわないのだろうと思うと非常にそそられます。ギャグ話はシリアスとシュールの配分が絶妙で、ストーリーの完成度が高くキャラも良いです。総じて、かなり秀逸な作品です。読まないのは勿体無いです。余談ですが、本書発売直後に作者のブログを見たら兄の忠告の兄が弟の排泄介助をするシーンの漫画が載っていました。彼らが好きな方はお勧めです。私は大好きです。

The title writer's advice and the other one are serious, and the rest is a surreal gag story mixed with seriousness. The older brother's advice is a very bitter story, and it's very nice that the older brother is an absolute big brother and the rebellious brother gradually admits and softens the older brother. This yakuza older brother never abandons his younger brother, and it's very intriguing to think that the younger brother will never match his older brother for the rest of his life. The gag story has an exquisite balance between serious and surreal, and the story has a high degree of perfection and good characters. Overall, it's a pretty excellent work. It would be a shame not to read it. As an aside, when I looked at the author's blog right after this book went on sale, there was a comic with a scene where the older brother advised the older brother to assist the younger brother with excretion. If you like them, I recommend them. I love it.

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Dec 09, 2014 (PST) | Translate to English

良かったです♪

That was great ♪

レビュー評価あまり良くないけれど、言うほどBLぽくないわけでもないです。暗いお話?と思いながら読んでいるとキャラクター達が味があって面白かったです！それぞれのその後の話があれば読みたいな～と思いました！エロばかりじゃなくストーリーも重視する方は読んでみてもいいかと★

The review ratings aren't very good, but it's not as BL-like as they say. dark story? When I read it while thinking, the characters had a taste and it was interesting! I thought I'd like to read each story after that! If you place importance not only on eroticism but also on stories, I think it's okay to read it ★

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Jun 22, 2014 (PST) | Translate to English

★ 4.5です！

★ It's 4.5!

5作品入った短編集です。独特な設定が多く恋愛要素薄ほぼ無いものもありますが、キャラクターが個性的で生き生きしているのが魅力的。さらっとした表現のなかでじんわりと愛情を感じられる、どこかおかしみあるストーリーも好きでした。表題作のお兄さんと4作目の編集者が個人的にツボ(*^^*)商業誌ではまだあまり発表されていないのでしょうか？他の作品も待っています！

This is a short story with 5 works. There are many unique settings and some have almost no romance elements, but it is attractive that the characters are unique and lively. I also liked the story, which had something strange, where I could feel a gentle feeling of love in the smooth expression. The older brother of the title work and the editor of the fourth film personally (*^^*) haven't been published much in commercial magazines yet? We are waiting for other works!

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Oct 13, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

作者買い

Buy the artist

ペンネームは阿佐田哲也リスペクト？今作は初期短編集、表題作は続きが読みたいかな。（7編・198頁）敬称略 m(_ _)m

Is the pen name Asada Tetsuya Respect? I wonder if I want to read the initial short story and continue reading the title work. (7 pages, 198) Honorific title omitted m (_ _) m

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短編集って知らなかった

I didn't know about short stories

短編集と知らずに買ったので兄と弟の話少なくで残念でした。物語は面白かったです。もっとこの2人の話がみたい。逆にこの2人以外の話はあんまり…

I bought it without knowing it was a short story, so it was a pity that there wasn't much talk about brother and brother. The story was interesting. I want to hear more of these two stories. On the other hand, there aren't many stories other than these two people...

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May 24, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

短編集

short story

タイトル作品と描き下ろし、他に短編が4つ入ってます。描き下ろし部分が無ければBLかどうか怪しいし、エチは触りっこまでで最後まではありません。どのお話もそれぞれ雰囲気あって楽しく読めたけど、タイトル作品の兄弟のキャラがめっちゃイイので、できればコレで一冊読みたかったなー。

It was drawn with the title work, and there are 4 other short films included. If there's no part drawn, it's doubtful whether it's BL or not, and Echi doesn't end until the touch. Every story has its own atmosphere and I enjoyed reading it, but the sibling characters in the title work are really good, so I wanted to read one book with this if possible.

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Sep 04, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

そうなんだ

That's right

This review contains spoilers. 朝田先生の初コミックス。気になっていたのに後回しになっていて。確かに、BLとは？と思いますが、ブロマンス的なものから発すると関係性ってことなんだろうな、と。ヤのつくお兄さん、なんか色気あるんだよね…エチシーンのない不思議な短編が詰まった作品です。

This review contains spoilers. Asada sensei's first comic. I was worried, but it was put on the back burner. Certainly, what is BL? I think, if it starts with something like a bromance, I wonder if it means a relationship. The older brother Ya no Tsuku has some kind of sex appeal... it's a work filled with mysterious short stories without any etiquette scenes.

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May 21, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

あれあれ？

huh huh?

BL漫画を買ったはずが、、、これは、、、？！ラブなんてほぼありません。ですが、作者買いなので、ここから始まったのかと思うと納得のデビュー本でした。

I should have bought a BL comic, but... this...?! There's almost no love. However, since it was purchased by the author, it was a convincing debut book when I thought that it started here.

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Jul 09, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

BL？

BL?

朝田ねむいさん初です。こんな力強い作者さんがいたなんて、なんで今まで知らなかったんだろう！でも出会えて良かった、嬉しい！こういう漫画大好き。絵も話もだいすき。私の中で、はやりやまいさんと似てるかな、とちょっと思いました。まだ本作しか読んでないのでわからんですが、絶対に他の作品も面白いんだろうことはハッキリと分かる。好みに合うかどうかはわからん。本作も、兄の忠告と波の音が聞こえるは好き。他は海外の短編名作集を読んだような不思議な気持ちになった。面白いけどBL？とは思った。兄の忠告は作者さんHPの続編も読んで、もっともっと更に2人を見たいと思いました。

This is Nemui Asada's first time. I wonder why I didn't know there was such a powerful author until now! But it was nice to meet you, I'm so happy! I love comics like this. I love both the pictures and the story. I thought for a moment that she was similar to Hayareyamai-san. I've only read this work yet, so I don't know, but I can clearly see that the other works are definitely interesting as well. I don't know if it suits my taste. I also like hearing my older brother's advice and the sound of the waves. Other than that, I had a strange feeling as if I had read a collection of famous short stories from overseas. It's interesting, but BL? I thought so. As for my older brother's advice, I also read the sequel to the author's website, and I wanted to see more and more of them.

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Jun 14, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

兄貴、男前

Big brother, handsome

This review contains spoilers. 兄弟「愛」が軽〜くサラリと描かれています。兄弟がイケメンというか男前。女性的なものは一切なく良いです。カッコいいわぁ。

This review contains spoilers. The brothers “Ai” are depicted in a light and smooth manner. My brother is handsome, or rather handsome. There's nothing feminine at all, which is fine. that's cool.

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絵に色気あり

There is sex appeal in the picture

短編集で、表題作他4作品。セクシャルなラブと特別な絆的ラブの境界上の関係も入ってるという印象。お話のモチーフに引っ掛けたキャラ名も多く、ちょっと寓話のような感じもあります。昔ながらのいい男感がある男性の絵柄が好き。なお、表題作については、他レビューでも紹介されている作者さんのブログ(そんなにねむくない)掲載の未収録分は必読だと思います。

It is a short story, with the title work and 4 other works. The impression is that there is also a relationship on the boundary between sexual love and special bonded love. There are also many character names caught in the story's motifs, and it feels a bit like a fable. I like the old fashioned design of a man with a nice, masculine feel. Also, as for the title work, I think the unrecorded portion published on the author's blog (not so sleepy), which has been introduced in other reviews, is a must-read.

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短編集としては星４

4 stars for a short story

This review contains spoilers. デビューの短編集です。表題作＋短編４作。BLという括りで読むと「なんだか思っていたのと違う」と感じるかも。どの作品も絡み無しで、バディ感が強いものが多いです。表題作に関しては、他の方のレビューでブログに続きがある事を知り、そちらも読みました！本編では兄弟のやりとりとして見える描写のみでしたが、「描き下ろしでは抜き合い&キスがあっておぉ！？となりました。ブログではおシモの世話の話やお兄ちゃんの葛藤が描かれていて、本編の内容に補完できよかったです。どうせならこちらも単行本に入れて欲しかったなぁー！

This review contains spoilers. This is my debut short story. Title work+4 short films. If you read it in the BL group, you may feel “something different from what you thought.” None of the works are entangled, and many of them have a strong sense of buddy. As for the title work, I learned from other people's reviews that there is a continuation of the blog, and I read that too! In the main story, there was only a depiction that appeared to be an exchange between siblings, but “in the depiction, there is an excellent encounter and kiss!? It became. The blog depicts stories about taking care of Oshimo and her older brother's conflicts, and I'm glad I was able to complement the content of the main story. Anyway, I wish this would have been included in the book too!

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