ADMONITION FROM AN ELDER BROTHER Manga Reviews (P.2)

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Jul 12, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

初短編集。個性が凄い、凄すぎる…

First short edit. The personality is amazing, too amazing...

これがデビュー作とは本当に驚き以外無いですね。ストーリーも絵も物凄く上手い。そしてこちらのレビューのお陰でブログ「そんなにねむくない」にたどり着く事が出来ました。ありがとうございます。こちらの3編で、表題作から描き下ろしの間の兄の葛藤やツヅキ（弟）が兄へ懐いてく様子が読めます。これがスゴク良い。ガチ兄弟物ながら、禁忌な感じが無くカラッとしてる。この兄弟らしいあくまで自然な流れ。そこが本当に「ズリィ」です（褒めてます）。表題作他、4編。中でも「毛虫」が好き。魔女に恋人を毛虫にされるとか、ぶっ飛んだストーリー。辛い状況にありながら、めちゃ笑える中にもキュンありで、唸らざるを得ません。社会派、ハードな物からファンタジーまでストーリーも年齢も幅広い作品集です。残念ながら、本番？は有りません笑。ラブすら無いじゃんという作品も。ブロマンスというやつでしょうか。妄想力でL補完するもしないもお任せで笑。総198p。

I'm really surprised that this is my debut work. The story and pictures are extremely good. And thanks to this review, I was able to get to the blog “Not So Sleepy.” Thank you very much. In these 3 parts, you can read the older brother's conflict and how Tsuzuki (younger brother) falls in love with his older brother during the period drawn from the title work. This is really good. Although they are serious siblings, they don't feel taboo and are cool. It's just a natural flow, typical of these siblings. That is really “Zuri” (I'm praising him). The title work and 4 others. Above all, I like “caterpillars.” It's a wild story about a witch turning her lover into a caterpillar. Even though I'm in a difficult situation, I can't help but groan because I can't help laughing so much that I can't help but groan. It is a collection of works for a wide range of stories and ages, from social and hard stuff to fantasy. Unfortunately, real? I don't have one lol. There is also a work called There Isn't Even Love. Is it something called bromances? I'll leave it up to you whether to complement L with your delusional powers lol. Total 198p.

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Mar 30, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

絵柄が凄く好き

I really like the design

This review contains spoilers. 表題作と他短編4部同時収録。Dear,MY GO Dもそうでしたが、登場人物のネーミングがゆるくていいですね。そしてやっぱり絵が好きです。BLと言うよりも、男同士の関係性に新しい始まりの予感や読後の余韻が良かったです。特に表題作と毛虫が好き。ゆるさや遊びを取り入れた味わいの違う構成というのも面白かったです。

This review contains spoilers. The title work and 4 other short films are recorded simultaneously. As was the case with Dear, MY GO D, it's nice that the names of the characters are loose. And after all, I love painting. Rather than saying BL, I had a good feeling of a new beginning in the relationship between men and the afterglow after reading it. I especially like the title work and The Caterpillar. It was also interesting that the structure had a different flavor that incorporated looseness and play.

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Jan 02, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

作者様買いです

I'm buying the author

This review contains spoilers. ねむい先生の作品はハズレがないのでいつもありがたく読ませてもらっています。絡みは少ないですが満足度の高い短編集です。

This review contains spoilers. There are no flaws in Nemui sensei's works, so I'm always thankful to read them. There is little entanglement, but it is a short story with a high level of satisfaction.

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世界観がかっこいい‼

The view of the world is cool ‼

This review contains spoilers. 初めて手を出した朝田作品でしたがこれがデビュー作と知ってびっくり。兄ハジメのカッコ良さが突き抜けてるから、弟ツヅキのだらしなさが心地よい。近親でいろいろしてても不快感がない。むしろ家族愛の延長のようにさらっと書かれている…。苦手な作品じゃないかと思ってましたが雷に打たれたくらい痺れる良作品でした。

This review contains spoilers. It was the first Asada work I dabbled in, and I was surprised to learn that this was my debut work. The coolness of older brother Hajime penetrates through, so the laid-back nature of younger brother Tsuzuki is comfortable. I don't feel uncomfortable even when I'm a close relative and do a lot of things. Rather, it is simply written as an extension of family love... I thought it might be a work I wasn't good at, but it was such a good work that I was so numb that I was struck by lightning.

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ツヅキとハジメがかっこいい！

Tsuzuki and Hajime are so cool!

This review contains spoilers. ねむい先生のデビューコミックスらしいですが、表題作が最高に好みでした〜！兄弟2人がかっこよすぎる…。彼らの不思議な関係性もいいですねえ。はたから見たら兄弟なんだけど、兄は弟を恋愛(?)・性的対象としても可愛いと思ってしまうくらい溺愛しているし、弟はあーだこーだ文句言いながらも兄に物凄く懐いているし。フォローさんのレビューで知った、ねむい先生のブログに載っているコミックス未収録作品3作も読みました！もう最高です。。かまちょなツヅキがいじらしくて可愛くて…。そりゃあ兄も余裕なくなってしまいますよ。。モデルガン強盗、毛虫、桃太郎、エログロスプラッター作家、、、他収録作品も、相変わらずねむい先生ワールドに満ち溢れていて、読んでいて楽しかったです！自由でバラエティに富んだねむい先生の発想や感性が本当に大好きです。いや〜毛虫の恋人は斬新だった笑

This review contains spoilers. It seems to be Nemui sensei's debut comic, but I really liked the title work! the two siblings are too cool... Their strange relationship is also nice. Seen from the outside, they're siblings, but the older brother is in love with the younger brother (?) ・I love him so much that I think he's cute even as a sexual object, and my younger brother is terribly fond of my older brother even though he complains. I also read 3 unrecorded comics on Nemui sensei's blog that I learned about through Follow-up's reviews! It's already awesome.. Kamachona Tsuzuki is so messy and cute... Well, my older brother won't be able to afford it either.. The recorded works of Model Gun Heist, Caterpillar, Momotaro, EroGloss Splatter... and others were still filled with Nemui Sensei's World, and it was fun to read! I really love the ideas and sensitivities of Mr. Nemui, who is free and diverse. No ~ Caterpillar's Lover was novel lol

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Sep 13, 2021 (PST) | Translate to English

「笑撃」の意味

The meaning of “laughing”

朝田ねむいさんの「CALL」がとても良かったのでデビュー作のこちらも購入しました。表紙からシリアスめの重たい内容なのかなと思い込んでいたのですが、あらすじ紹介の「笑撃」という文字通りコメディ寄りの短編集で、笑いありで短いながらも1話ごとに読み応えがあって買ってよかったです。BL要素は少なめでベッドシーンも淡白な描写ですが、ストーリー展開や描写の巧さが見事で良い作家さんだなと思います。内容で十分読ませてくるのに、BL要素があるからさらに作品が際立つのが魅力的な作家さんです。他の作品も読みたいと思わせられます。

Asada Nemui's “CALL” was so good that I also bought this one, which was her debut work. I was wondering if the content was serious and heavy from the cover, but I'm glad I bought it because it's literally a comedic short story called “Shokaku” introduced in the synopsis, and even though it's short with laughter, it's easy to read each episode. There are few BL elements and the bed scenes are bland, but I think he is a good writer with excellent story development and skill in depiction. Even though the content makes me read enough, it is an attractive writer whose work stands out even more because of the BL element. It makes me want to read other works as well.

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兄と弟

brother and brother

失踪した兄とやさぐれた生活を送る弟。年の差兄弟萌です！ねむい先生の作品は、絡みの描写がほぼなく、あっても超あっさりですが、もう表情とかでエロいです（笑）

A younger brother who lives an easy life with his older brother who disappeared. My age difference brother is Moe! There is almost no depiction of entanglement in Nemui sensei's work, and even if there is, it's super easy, but it's already erotic with facial expressions (laughs)

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好みでした♡

I liked it ♡

表題作兄の忠告のお兄ちゃん格好いい！弟が大怪我したときのお兄ちゃんの登場の仕方シビれます。レビューの方が書いていたブログ「そんなにねむくない」のお兄ちゃんが我慢する姿に萌えました♡朝田先生このレベルの高さでデビュー作って凄すぎです。大好き！また是非いろんなお話も読んでみたいです。

The older brother in the title My Brother's Advice is so cool! I'm amazed at how the older brother shows up when his younger brother is seriously injured. I was fascinated by the way the older brother of the blog “I Don't Go to Bed That Bad,” which was written by the reviewer, put up with it ♡ Asada sensei made his debut work at this high level, and it's amazing. I love it! I definitely want to read various stories again.

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続編のブログ最高

The sequel blog is the best

This review contains spoilers. 絵がめちゃくちゃ好み！ゆる〜い近親もので萌えました。短編じゃなくて、全部表題作のみが良かったな〜。

This review contains spoilers. I really like pictures! I fell in love with close relatives who were laid-back. It wasn't a short film, only all the title works were good.

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めっちゃ面白いデビュー作

A really interesting debut

This review contains spoilers. 『鬼才の新人』と言わしめた朝田先生、笑撃デビュー作。帯の宣伝文句に偽りなしで、ホントに文句なしに面白かったです。デビューにして既に、その作風と世界観が確立している朝田先生恐るべし！フォロー様のお名前見つけて、ニンマリしました。がっちり心の握手です。短編集なんですけど、どれもハズレなく仕上がり完璧で、上手くまとめてるなぁ、と感心しまくりです。カテゴリー的にはBLなんですけど、広い意味で『愛』かなと。表題作はそのタイトル通り「だから言ったのに」ってオチの上に、兄の過保護を過ぎた過干渉(笑)兄弟愛というか、弟べったりなお兄ちゃん。この作品の続編となる話が、『そんなにねむくない』というブログ名で読めます。面白かったぁ。これは是非読むべし！フォロアー様のレビューで、この貴重な情報を知る事が出来て、すご～く、すごく感謝の気持ちでいっぱいです。ありがとうございました。続編含めて面白いですよね。THE SWERVE：おじさん二人の人生再スタート。これ好き。毛虫：なんだこりゃ？って思いますが、意外に深い。愛さえあれば♪Life in the park：役所職員とホームレスと彼らをサポートする男。ちょびっと泣けちゃいました。とてもいいお話です。波の音がきこえる：失恋しては、その哀しみを小説に全力ぶつける小説家のお話で、同じ失敗繰り返してやっと気づいたか？って事でいいんですかね…楽しい、短編集でした。流石の朝田先生です。新刊『CALL』も購入済みで、楽しみです。分冊版の2作品を早くまとめて単行本にして欲しいんですけど～。心待ちにしております！

This review contains spoilers. Asada sensei, who called him a “genius rookie,” made his laughing debut. There were no false claims about the obi, and it was really interesting without complaint. Asada sensei, whose style and worldview has already been established since his debut, is scary! I found the name of the follower, and I was amazed. It's a firm handshake from the heart. It's a short story, and I'm impressed that all of them are flawless, have a perfect finish, and are so well put together. It's BL in terms of category, but I think it's “love” in a broad sense. As the title suggests, “That's why I said it,” on top of the punch line, excessive interference (laughs) over the older brother's overprotection (laughs) brotherly love, or rather older brother's brother. You can read the story, which is a sequel to this work, under the blog name “I'm Not So Sleepy.” That was interesting. You must read this! I was able to learn this valuable information through followers' reviews, and I'm so, so grateful. Thank you very much. Including the sequel, it's interesting, isn't it? THE SWERVE: Restart the lives of two old men. I like this. Caterpillar: What is this? I think, but it's surprisingly deep. Love is all you need ♪ Life in the Park: government office workers, the homeless, and the man who supports them. It made me cry a little bit. It's a very nice story. I Can Hear the Sound of Waves: It's a story about a novelist who hits his heart with all his might on his novel, and did you finally notice it after repeating the same mistakes? I wonder if that's fine... it was a fun short edit. As a matter of fact, this is Asada sensei. I've already purchased the new book “CALL,” and I'm looking forward to it. I'd like to see the 2 works in the split edition put together as soon as possible and make it into a single book. I'm looking forward to it!

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Jul 26, 2021 (PST) | Translate to English

短編

short story

にいちゃんの雰囲気に引き込まれました！！他の短編もどこかにグッと惹かれる部分があるあって面白かった。

I was drawn into Nii-chan's vibe!! The other short stories were also interesting because there was a part where I was really attracted to them.

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型にはまらないBL！！

Unconventional BL!!

『マイリトルインフェルノ』が大変面白く、デビュー作が気になり購入。表題作(兄弟者)×短編4。個人的には表題作と短編①THE SWERVE が好きでした。私はラブイチャ兄弟よりも、これくらい兄弟感があって、実はデキてるっていう関係が凄く好きだなぁ〜。なんかたまらんです！まぁ弟くんはまだ好きとかそういうのがないのですが…お兄ちゃんの思うように事が進んでいく気がします。頑張れー！短編1は、BOYも、LOVEもなにもありませんが、なんか良かったなー。やさぐれたおじさんの夢旅がスタートして『完』その後はLOVEに発展するだろうと期待してます。他短編も、ぶっ飛んだのもあり面白いですね。先生が描く独特の世界観にはまりそう…

“My Little Inferno” was very interesting, and I was curious about the debut work, so I bought it. Title work (brothers) x 4 short stories. Personally, I liked the title work and the short story ① THE SWERVE. I have this much more of a sense of sibling than the Lovecha siblings, and I really like the relationship that they're actually great. It's kind of unbearable! Well, my little brother still doesn't like him or anything like that... but I feel like things are progressing as my older brother wants. do your best! Short story 1 doesn't have BOY, LOVE, or anything, but it was kind of good. I'm hoping that Uncle Yasagure's Dream Trip will start and develop into LOVE after “complete.” There are also other short films that have gone viral, so it's interesting. I feel like I'm addicted to the unique worldview drawn by the teacher...

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いや～良かった～！

Well, that was great!

マイリトルインフェルノを読んでこっちに来ました。笑撃のデビュー作というだけあって面白かったです。マイリトルインフェルノのほうが話はまとまってると思うのですが、こっちの短編集のがなんかぐっと来ました。先生がお好きな方はぜひ読んでほしいです。そんなBLじゃなくて、男二人が出会ってここからさあどうなるっていう感じの話が多い感じがします。朝田先生すきだーーーー！！

I came over here after reading My Little Inferno. It was interesting because it was just a laughing debut. I think the story of My Little Inferno is more organized, but this short story has come a long way. If you like teachers, I definitely want you to read it. It's not BL like that, I feel like there are a lot of stories about two men meeting and what's going to happen from here on out. I love Asada sensei!!

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ブロマンスからBLまで

From bromances to BL

短編集ですが、どれもひとクセあるお話ばかりです。キャラの描き分けがうまく魅力的な男の子ばかりなので、彼らの友情や恋愛の一部始終を読みたかったなあと思わされます。

It's a short story, but all of them are unique stories. They are all charming boys with good character drawing, so it makes me think I wanted to read the whole story of their friendship and romance.

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絵が良い

The picture is good

絵が好きな感じです。ソフト近親もので面白かったです。短編集でした。

I feel like I like the picture. It was interesting because the software was close relatives. It was a short story.

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めちゃくちゃ好き

I like it insanely

兄弟愛の延長+性的欲求って感じの理想の兄弟BL。本編があってこそではあるが、他の方がおっしゃってるように書き下ろしとブログが最高。ブログだといつ消されてしまうかという恐怖があるので、是非電子書籍で販売してほしい。

An ideal sibling BL with a feeling of extended brotherly love+sexual desire. It's only because of the main story, but the blog is great because it's written as others have said. If it's a blog, there's a fear of when it will be deleted, so I definitely want you to sell it as an e-book.

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作家買いさせていただいてます

I'm buying an artist

この作品からこ朝田先生を知りまして。それからどっぷりとハマったままです。絵が元々大好きなんですがとにかく空気感とかセリフとか雰囲気とか。本当に素晴らしい！センスと才能の塊だと思いますね。これからも先生を追っかけて行きます

I learned about Asada sensei from this work. Since then, I've been totally addicted to it. Originally, I loved the picture, but just the atmosphere, dialogue, and atmosphere. It's really great! I think it's a mass of sense and talent. I will continue to chase my teacher

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絵柄が好き

I like the pattern

レビューを参考にブログに掲載されている漫画まで読みに行きました！そこまで読んで1本の作品という感じです！しかしもっと続いて欲しい…その後が気になる…表題以外だと小説家のお話が好きでした。こちらも続きが気になる…明確に終わらせる話が少ないので、その後が知りたい！となってしまう人は辛いかもしれません

Referring to the reviews, I even went to read the comics posted on the blog! It feels like I've read that far and it's just one work! But I want it to continue... I'm worried about what comes after that... Other than the title, I liked the novelist's story. I'm worried about the continuation here too... there aren't many stories that end clearly, so I want to know what happened after that! It may be difficult for people to become

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ダメ男受けが好きな人は是非

If you like receiving bad guys, don't miss it

実兄弟BL。近親そうかんは最高のBL。最高過ぎて言う事ないよね。ダメ男受けが好きな人は早く読んで……私はサンプル見て即買いしました。最高だった。特別仲が良い訳でも悪い訳でもない兄弟。兄が突然殺人犯として服役することに。残された母親は何も語らず、何も知らないまま道を外す弟。チンピラの如く風俗サービスに来るモブおじさんから金を巻き上げる美人局をしていたら、ヤ○ザにぼこぼこにされ、そのヤ○ザの頭が服役から出所した兄だった。ここからが、朝田先生の最高に面白いところなんですけど、兄貴の指示でぼこぼこにされたものの、弟はその事については全く気にしてない。それよりも、なぜ何も言わずに服役することになったのか、その事に腹を立てている弟。最高じゃないですか？私は最高でした。

Real brother BL. Close relative Sokan is the best BL. It's too awesome to say, is it? People who like Bad Men read it quickly... I saw the sample and bought it right away. That was awesome. They are siblings who are not on good or bad terms. My older brother suddenly ends up serving time as a murderer. The mother left behind doesn't say anything, and the younger brother misses his way without knowing anything. When I was running a beauty bureau where money was raised from old mobs who came to sex services like a thimp, I was bumpy down by yaoza, and that yaoza's head was my older brother who was released from prison. From here on, the most interesting part about Asada sensei is that although he was made lumpy by his older brother's instructions, the younger brother doesn't care about that at all. More than that, my younger brother is angry about why he ended up serving time without saying anything. Isn't it awesome? I was awesome.

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とてもいい

Very nice

表題作＋短編4作でした。まず感想としてはめちゃくちゃ好きな漫画でした。どのお話も萌えます。でもやっぱり表題作が一番好きかな。お兄さんがカッコいいです。短編集4作の内容は、「THE SWERVE」〜不景気な中で出会ったリーマンとチンピラのおじさん２人のお話。「毛虫」〜魔女に呪いをかけられて彼氏が毛虫に見えてしまう高校生カップルのお話。「Life in the Park」〜社会福祉課の人 VS 公園に棲みつくホームレスを守ろうとする男のお話。「波の音が聞こえる」〜恋多き小説家と編集者のお話。どの作品もとても面白かったです。イチャラブするシーンは全然ないですが、そんなのなくても私は満足するぐらい素敵なお話でした。個人的にどれも続きが読みたいですが、特に表題作の兄の忠告は是非続編を読みたいです。朝田ねむい先生の作品は直接的なラブやエロがなくても読了後にキュンとしたり満足感を得るのは何故でしょうね。さすがです。

It was a title film plus 4 short films. First of all, my impression was that I really liked the comic. Every story is fascinating. But after all, I think I like the title work the most. Your older brother is cool. The content of the 4 short stories is “THE SWERVE” ~ the story of Lehman and two old thugs who met in the midst of a recession. “Caterpillar” ~ A story about a high school couple who is cursed by a witch and their boyfriend looks like a caterpillar. “Life in the Park” ~ A story about a person in the Social Welfare Division vs. a man trying to protect the homeless living in the park. “I Can Hear the Sound of Waves” ~ A story about a novelist and editor with a lot of love. Every piece was very interesting. There aren't any flirtatious scenes at all, but it was such a wonderful story that I was satisfied even without that. Personally, I want to read the continuation of all of them, but in particular, I definitely want to read the sequel to the title work's older brother's advice. I wonder why Asada Nemui sensei's works make you feel excited and satisfied after reading them, even if there is no direct love or eroticism. As expected.

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