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  Posted by Readers in Japan

  Apr 03, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English
  別府先生はオチャラケが好き？
  Does Beppu sensei like funny things?
  巧みな技術を持っているのにコメディータッチに描いているのは好みだからでしょうか？展開も絵も素晴らしいのに、コマを大きく割くところはオチャラケたところばかりなのが目につきます。それでも、表現には申し分なく展開もテンポが良いので、他の作品に比べて頁字数が少なく感じてしまうほどです。ケイトの上司とのトラブルから展開していく、時にはオチャラケた大げさな行動の絵、ザックとの時間のシットリとした絵のギャップがケイトの心の動きのヒダまでも感じさせてくれています。しかし、残念なのはザックの孤独を表現しきれていないところ。P122の場面ではザックの表情のない横顔をもっと大きく書くことでそれがアピールできたのではないかと考えてしまいます。成功者ザックのトラウマを持つ只の男性、一般人ケイトのトラウマを持つ只の女性、運命的に出会って恋におち、ケイトが頑なで誠実であることが、ザックの誠実さを目覚めさせて結ばれる素敵な物語でした。

  Is it because I like drawing with a comedic touch even though I have clever techniques? The development and pictures are wonderful, but I can see that the places that break the frame in large parts are just funny places. Even so, the expression is perfect and the development tempo is good, so I feel that the number of pages is small compared to other works. The gap between the picture of her sometimes ridiculous and exaggerated behavior, which unfolds from her trouble with Kate's boss, and the tight gap between her time and Zack makes me feel even the creases of Kate's heart movement. However, what is unfortunate is that it doesn't fully express Zack's loneliness. In the P122 scene, it makes me think that could have been appealed by writing Zack's expressionless profile in a larger size. It was a wonderful story where only a man with the trauma of the successful person Zack, and only a woman with trauma from the common person Kate, fatefully met and fell in love, and the fact that Kate is stubborn and sincere awakens Zack's sincerity.

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  Posted by Readers in Japan

  Aug 04, 2015 (PST) | Translate to English
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  This review contains spoilers. 結構笑えます。ヒロインはあるポリシーを持ってるので、プレイボーイには甘えない、カッコよくて可愛いです。ヒーローはちょっと軽いけど、意外と誠実だった。平凡だけど良いお話でした。ただ、白目が品を落としている気がして。(もっと丁寧に描いてね)残念！

  This review contains spoilers. It's pretty funny. The heroine has a certain policy, so she's not spoiled by Playboys, and she's cool and cute. The hero was a little light, but surprisingly sincere. It was a plain but good story. However, I have a feeling that the white eye is losing the item. (Please draw more carefully) Too bad!

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