KrashBandicoot's Reviews

Very interesting plot. It is a bit different than what I usually read, but I am not deterred by it. This storyline has SO MUCH potential to be more, however, I do like how short it is. It was not too convoluted. Some other short stories like this add in too many or too little detail to really make sense of the plot. I liked that this story has just enough. Definitely one of the better ones I've read. There was suspense, drama, and shock value to what was happening. Overall, I am content with the read and would recommend!

Great storyline and character development. It got to the point without being too rushed. There were no major and nonsensical miscommunications dragged out. I like that the characters resolved their concerns with each other quickly. Spicy scenes were also enticing and sweet!