Leo's Reviews

Nice story, although the characters' psychology could be delved into a little more. They change too quickly, as if it was no big deal... More chapters would have been nice and would have made the story more realistic. But don't let this stop you from reading, it's a cute story, and the characters are endearing.
However, I was a little taken aback by the 2 other stories that appeared for no apparent reason, interrupting the story. I almost stopped reading as I wasn't sure the story would resume afterwards. Luckily, it did, and I'm happy I kept reading, it's a nice story.