Lullaby of the Dawn Manga Reviews (P.63)

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★5に納得

★ Convinced by 5

前からコミックになったら買おう！と思ってましたが、★5で妙に評価高いな〜と思いつつ読破！続きもの〜！？でももっと読めて嬉しい。絵が美しいのはわかってましたが、謎も多く重い雰囲気になりがちなのに、アルトの存在がストーリーを明るくしてて…ええ子や。ただのBがLしてるだけの話じゃなかったのも嬉しくて、2巻も期待してます。

If it becomes a comic before, let's buy it! I thought it was, but I read it while thinking that it's strangely highly rated at ★ 5! Continued stuff!? But I'm happy to read more. I knew the pictures were beautiful, but even though they had lots of mysteries and the atmosphere was heavy, the presence of alto brightens up the story... well, kid. I'm also happy that it wasn't just a story about B doing L, and I'm looking forward to volume 2.

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続き気になる！

I'm still curious!

試し読みを読んだだけでは購入しなかったと思います。特集ページでアルトが大きくなった姿を見て＆クーポン利用で購入しました。エルヴァのお役目に関しての展開やアルトの今後が気になります。そして、アルトとエルヴァ、それぞれの恋心の変化が楽しみです。

I don't think I bought it just because I read the trial reading. I saw how Alto got bigger on the special page & bought it using a coupon. I'm worried about developments relating to Elva's role and the future of Alto. Also, I'm looking forward to the changes in the love between Alto and Elva.

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なんか切ないわ…

it's kind of sad...

アルトくんが可愛い子供から青年になっても心がピュアのままで凄く良い❗この終わり方はドキドキで次が待ち遠しいのですが、どうせなら話の中に出てくる疑問点を全て解決するまで続けて❗

Even when Arto-kun goes from being a cute kid to a young man, his heart remains pure and it's really good ❗ This way of ending is exciting and I can't wait for the next one, but anyway, keep going until you've solved all the questions that come up in the story ❗

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圧巻のストーリー展開！ワクワクします！

A spectacular storyline! I'm excited!

ユノイチカ先生のデビューコミックスです。圧倒的な画力で絵がとても美しいです！まさにこんなファンタジーBLをずっと待っていました！！年下ワンコ従者アルト×哀しい宿命を背負った無愛想な戦巫女エルヴァのお話。世界観が素敵なのはもちろんですが、アルトとエルヴァ様の一筋縄ではいかなそうな恋模様と圧巻のストーリー展開に一気に引き込まれます！ラブな展開はまだまだこれからと言う感じですが、日常の2人のやりとりに萌えが散りばめられていてたまりません?ファンタジーをあまり読んだことがない方でも分かりやすく、難しい設定がないので楽しく読めると思います。キャラクターがとても魅力的で、エルヴァ様命のワンコなアルトと美しさと格好良さと可愛さを兼ね備えたエルヴァ様が最高でした...！2人の関係性が一目で分かる所も良いです。(飼い主と忠犬最高に萌えます！)幼少期のアルト達もとっても可愛いのでそこも注目ポイントです！気になる展開で終わったので、続きを待ちきれずに単話で購入しました！今1番オススメしたい作品です。

This is Yunoichika sensei's debut comic. The drawing power is overwhelming and the picture is so beautiful! I've been waiting for a fantasy BL like this for a long time!! This is a story about the younger dog attendant Alto x Elva, an unfriendly war shrine maiden who bears a sad fate. Of course, the view of the world is wonderful, but I'm drawn in all at once by Alto and Elva's uneasy love pattern and impressive storyline! I feel like the love development is still yet to come, but it's irresistible that the love is interspersed with the everyday interactions between the two of them? Even those who haven't read much fantasy are easy to understand, and there are no difficult settings, so I think they'll enjoy reading it. The characters were very attractive, and Elva, who combines beauty, coolness, and cuteness with Elva, the dog that lives, was amazing...! It's also nice to be able to see the relationship between the two at a glance. (The owner and the loyal dog are the best!) The alts in their childhood are also very cute, so that is another point of interest! It ended with an interesting development, so I couldn't wait for the continuation and bought it as a single episode! This is the work I would like to recommend the most right now.

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初コミックスですか…

Is this your first comic...

単話の頃から気になって仕方なかった作品のひとつ。でもコミックス派なので大変長らくお待ちしておりました。読んだ感想は、綺麗な絵と世界観、そして話の構成がすごくいい。下手するとBLじゃなくてもいいんじゃないかなとも思えちゃう内容だけれど、逆にBLで描いてくれてありがとうと思うぐらい二人がイケメンと美少年で尊いです。まだ続くのが残念であり楽しみでもありますが、どうか悲しい結末でないといいなと思いながら続きを待ちたいと思います。あ、念のために、1巻ではエロはございませんので、それを期待する方はご注意ください。

It's one of the works I've been interested in since it was a single story. But I'm in the comics group, so I've been waiting for a very long time. My impression of reading it was that the beautiful picture, world view, and story structure were really nice. The content makes you think that if you don't do well, it doesn't have to be BL, but on the contrary, the two are a handsome guy and a beautiful boy, so precious that I think thank you for drawing in BL. It's a pity that it's still going on, and I'm looking forward to it, but I hope it doesn't have a sad ending and I want to wait for the continuation. Oh, just in case, there is no eroticism in volume 1, so please be careful if you expect that.

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星5個では…

5 stars would be...

星5個では足りない…もう最高すぎた！！！1巻はBLしてませんけど(滅茶苦茶プラトニック)、すんごい満足です！本当に素晴らしい！！！天才とか単純に使いたくないけど、イチカ先生は本当に天才だと思う。単話も追ってますが、今7話目…BL展開来ますよ〜

5 stars wasn't enough... it was already too awesome!!! I didn't BL volume 1 (insanely platonic), but I'm really satisfied! really great!!! I don't want to simply use genius, but I think Ichika-sensei is really a genius. I'm also following a single episode, but now episode 7... BL expansion is coming~

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まさしく！！

Exactly!!

表紙の帯通り「こんなファンタジーBLを待ってたんだ」って感じです！初単行本とはすごすぎます。ストーリー性にまず惹かれました。美しくて切なくて儚い物語が始まりました。最後はどうなるんだろう。色んな謎が気になって気になって仕方ありません。ちっちゃくて子どもで可愛らしいアルトが男らしくかっこいい青年になったけどワンコ感は変わらなくてかわいいです。エルヴァ様をどうか救ってね！お互いが大切に想い合っている姿がとても良いです。2巻も楽しみに待ちます！

As the obi on the cover shows, it feels like “I've been waiting for this fantasy BL”! The first book is too amazing. I was first drawn to the storyline. A beautiful, sad, and ephemeral story has begun. What will happen at the end? I can't help but be curious because I'm curious about all kinds of mysteries. Alto, who is small, and cute, has become a manly and cool young man, but his doggy style hasn't changed and he's cute. Please save Elva! It's so nice to see them cherish each other. I'm looking forward to volume 2!

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美しい。良かったです、

beautiful. That was great,

本当に美しい。幻想的で、物悲しい設定も気にならないぐらいのストーリーと圧倒的な画力に酔いしれました。イヤー今後の展開から目が離せません。

It's really beautiful. I was so intoxicated by the fantastic story and the overwhelming drawing power that I didn't care about the sad setting. Keep an eye out for future developments this year.

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ストーリー性重視

Focus on storyline

ストーリーがすごい。一つの本と物語です。絵もすごい綺麗で、半端ないです。2巻が待ち遠しすぎます。どう恋になるのか気になります！

The story is amazing. It's one book and one story. The picture is also very beautiful and unremarkable. I can't wait for volume 2. I'm curious about how they fall in love!

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絵もストーリも最高です！！

The picture and story are great!!

This review contains spoilers. 作家さんの初コミックス、めっちゃ待ってました！単話でも読んでましたが、一冊に纏まると面白さが増します！！不思議な治癒力を秘めた一途な年下ワンコ×夜の黒い海に囚われた美しい孤独な人の物語アルトが幼い頃に、覡であるエルヴァ様と出会う所から物語が始まります。夜の黒い海の謎とか、アルトの不思議な治癒力(出生の秘密)とか、謎がいっぱいで先が楽しみです。あと、絵が本当に美しくて素晴らしいです！感情の揺れ動きがとてもよく分かる描写が沢山あって、物語にどんどん引き込まれます。シリアスな物語ですが、コメディタッチな部分がバランスよく散りばめられているので、重くなりすぎずにとても読みやすくなってると思います。ここから2人がどんな風になるのか、楽しみしかありません。

This review contains spoilers. I've been waiting so long for the artist's first comic! I read it as a single story, but it becomes even more interesting when it's put together in one book!! The story of an unruly young dog with mysterious healing powers x a beautiful lonely person trapped in the black sea at night begins where Alto meets Elva, his son, when he was young. There are lots of mysteries, such as the mystery of the Black Sea at night and Alto's mysterious healing power (secret of birth), and I'm looking forward to the future. Also, the picture is really beautiful and amazing! There are many depictions where you can understand the fluctuating movements of emotions very well, and I am drawn more and more into the story. It's a serious story, but the comedic parts are scattered in a well-balanced manner, so I think it's very easy to read without getting too heavy. I can't help but look forward to seeing what the two will look like from here on out.

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期待を遥かに越えてきた！

It far exceeded my expectations!

単話の時から話題作なのは知っていて、期待して読みましたが、想像以上に完成度の高い作品でした。本当に素晴らしい。これから紡がれていく壮大な物語のまだ序章というところなのに、これだけ面白いってどういうこと！とにかく安定感が半端ない。絵も綺麗でストーリーもしっかりしてて面白いので、物語に没頭できます。引き込まれて一気に読んでしまいました。まだまだわからないことが沢山で、この先の展開に期待しかありません。絶対面白いの間違いない。最後まで追いかけるのがもう楽しみで仕方ないです。何よりエルヴァが大事で想いが真っ直ぐなアルトが癒し。子ども時代も成長してからも全くブレてないところ好きです。どうかどうか2人の人生が明るい方へ進みますように。

I knew it was a popular work since it was a single episode, and I read it with anticipation, but it was a work with a higher degree of perfection than I had imagined. It's really great. It's still just the beginning of the epic story that's about to be spun, so what does it mean that it's this interesting! Anyway, there's no sense of stability. The pictures are beautiful and the story is solid and interesting, so you can immerse yourself in the story. I was drawn in and read it all at once. There are still a lot of things we don't know, and we have nothing but expectations for future developments. There is no doubt that it will be fun. I can't help but look forward to chasing them to the end. Above all else, Elva is important, and Alto, where his feelings are straight, is healing. I like the fact that it hasn't been blurry at all when I was a kid or when I grew up. I hope their lives progress in a brighter direction.

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初読み作家さん

First time reading writer

レビューよくてお試し少し読んで購入。いい！とてもいい！ストーリーもいいし、これからどうなるんだろうって続きも気になります。二人の関係もいいですねー。そして、番外編も購入！これは読んでなかったので電子でよめてありがたいです！！！

Read the reviews carefully, try it out a bit, and then buy it. good! very nice! The story is good, and I wonder what will happen in the future, and I'm curious about the continuation. The relationship between the two is nice too. Also, I bought the extra edition! I haven't read this, so I'm thankful to read it electronically!!!

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待ち侘びた！

I've been waiting impatiently!

単行本を待ち侘びていた作品の1つです！！！はじめの数ページから、どのようなお話なのか本の世界観に引き込まれ、読み進めてしまいました。まだまだお話の続くところで終わっていますが、続きが待てる終わり方ではあるので、楽しみに待ちたいと思います。まだBL感は少ないですが、お互いに大切に思っていることが伝わってきます。ぜひ皆さまに読んで欲しい1冊です。

This is one of the works I've been waiting impatiently for!! From the first few pages, I was drawn into the worldview of the book about what kind of story it was, and I read on. It ends where the story is still going on, but it's a way of ending where you can wait for the continuation, so I'm looking forward to it. There is still little sense of BL, but it conveys that they both care about each other. This is one book I definitely want everyone to read.

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待ってましたー‼️‼️

I've been waiting for you ‼️‼️

嬉しい！画力のあまりの高さに一目惚れした作品がありまして、ユノイチカ先生だと教えてもらった時は発狂しそうでした。こんな素敵なファンタジーも書かれるなんて…想像力を掻き立てる設定、この先の二人の関係、気になる登場人物も沢山いてこれからどう関わってくるのか、まだまだお話としては序盤ですがワクワクしてしまいます！そしてやっぱり絵がーー！なんですかこの安定感。背景の書き込み一つとっても妥協なし！エルヴァが美しいのにかわいいわー。ワンコなアルトも大きく育ってこの身長差萌えるー！またユノ先生の絵が拝めるだけでも幸せ。もちろんストーリーも！アルトには期待しかないよ！色んな意味で…

I'm happy! There is one work that I fell in love with at first sight, and I almost went crazy when I was told that it was Yunoichika sensei. I can't believe such a wonderful fantasy was also written... the setting that stirs up imagination, the future relationship between the two, and how many interesting characters will get involved in the future, it's still early in the story, but it's exciting! And after all, there are pictures! What is this sense of stability. There is no compromise on just one background post! Even though Elva is beautiful, she's cute. The dog Alto has grown so big that this height difference is amazing! Also, I'm happy just to be able to see Yuno-sensei's paintings. Of course, the story too! I have nothing but hope for the alto! in many ways...

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面白い！

interesting!

単話からレビューが良かったので単行本化嬉しい！！あらすじも読まずに購入したけど、ファンタジー要素とミステリーホラー要素もあって、次がとにかく読み進めるお話でした。覡様かわい。凄くハラハラするところで1巻が終わったので続きが気になって仕方ない…！

The reviews were good starting from the single episode, so I'm happy that it was made into a standalone book!! I bought it without reading the synopsis, but it also had fantasy elements and mystery horror elements, so the next one was a story I just read on. Ka-sama is cute. Volume 1 came to an end in a really jarring place, so I can't help but be worried about the continuation...!

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待ってました！

I've been waiting!

単行本になるの待ってました。待ってたのに続き待てなくて単話で続き読んじゃいましたよ…ストーリー面白すぎ。ラブの方もですが、島の謎が明かされていくのか気になってしょうがないです…生きていく楽しみが増えました…

I've been waiting for it to become a standalone book. I was waiting but I couldn't wait, so I continued reading it in a single episode... the story is too interesting. Love is also there, but I can't help but wonder if the mystery of the island will be revealed... the fun of living has increased...

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待ってました！

I've been waiting!

単行本化したら絶対買う！！って決めてました！待望の第一巻、本当最高でした。絵はもちろんストーリーも！ファンタジーものは普段全然読まないのですが、するする読めてわくわくして凄く楽しかったです。アルトもエルヴァ様も2人のキャラもすごく素敵！冬に二巻発売とのことですがあーもう待ちきれない、単行本化待ってたのにいざ読み出したら次まで待たずにこのまま単話買いしちゃうこと必須ですね！表紙だけでも素敵なこと間違いなく伝わるので気になってる方ぜひ読んでみてもらいたいです！

If it becomes a standalone book, I'll definitely buy it!! It was decided! The long-awaited first volume was really great. Not only the pictures, but also the story! I don't usually read fantasy stuff at all, but it was exciting and really fun to read it. Alto, Elva, and the 2 characters are so wonderful! It is said that volume 2 will go on sale in the winter, but I can't wait anymore; once I read it out even though I've been waiting for the standalone book, it's essential to just buy the single episode as it is without waiting until the next one! The cover alone definitely conveys wonderful things, so if you are interested, I definitely want you to read it!

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ステキすぎる！

It's too nice!

作者初買いです。ファンタジックな世界のお話。ぐいぐい引き込まれていく。BLというよりブロマンス？続きが早く読みたいです。

This is the author's first purchase. A story about a fantastic world. It draws me in quite a bit. Bromance rather than BL? I want to read the rest soon.

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ファンタジーBLは普段は読まないのですが絵が綺麗でずっと気になっていたのと評価の高さで購入しました。結果、購入して良かったです！これから盛り上がっていくんだろう感が凄くて早く続きが読みたです！

I don't usually read fantasy BL, but the pictures are beautiful and I've always been interested in them, so I bought them with high reviews. As a result, I'm glad I bought it! The feeling that it's going to get excited from now on was so great that I read the continuation quickly!

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こういうのを求めてました

I was looking for something like this

単話の頃からずっと大好きでした。登場人物のひとりひとりが本当に息づいているような描かれかたです。綺麗なだけじゃない、優しいだけじゃない色々な人の繊細な心がとっても沁みます。デビュー作だなんて信じられません！絶対絶対損はさせませんのでぜひ多くの方に読んで欲しいです。次巻が待ちきれないです！！

I've always loved it since it was a single story. Each and every one of the characters is depicted as if they are really breathing. It really sinks into the delicate hearts of various people who are not only beautiful or kind. I can't believe this is my debut work! I definitely won't let you lose money, so I definitely want many people to read it. I can't wait for the next volume!!

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