Bite Marks and Fluorite Manga Reviews (P.5)

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Jun 17, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

続編来て〜

The sequel is coming~

面白くて絵も綺麗で良かったのですが、設定の割にあっさり終わった感じがするので続編見たいなと思いました。まだまだ掘り下げれる部分あるので続編出たら買いたいです。

It was interesting and the pictures were beautiful, but I felt like it ended so easily for the setting, so I wanted to watch the sequel. There are still more parts I can delve into, so I'd like to buy the sequel when it comes out.

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Apr 07, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

面白い！けど

interesting! but

絵もキレイで見やすく内容も面白いです。受けの陽くんが明るく前向きなので吸血鬼モノですが、重い雰囲気にならずに読む事ができます。ただ、あっさりなので色々な問題が片付いておらず続きが気になる感じです。単巻なので、是非続編を描いて頂きたいです。

The pictures are beautiful, easy to see, and the content is interesting. Kakenoyo is bright and positive, so it's a vampire thing, but you can read it without feeling heavy. However, since it's so easy, I feel like various issues haven't been cleared up and I'm worried about the continuation. It's a single volume, so I'd like you to draw a sequel.

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Dec 23, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

よかった

That was great

吸血鬼の話は何作か読んだことありますが、血を吸われただけで吸血鬼になるという話が意外と無いことに気づきました。しかもタンクという期間があるのは初めての設定です。とても面白かったです。だからこそ、え？これで終わり？ってなってしまって少し残念でした。

I've read several stories about vampires, but I've noticed that surprisingly, there aren't any stories about becoming a vampire just by being sucked in blood. Moreover, this is the first time that there is a tank period. It was very interesting. that's why, huh? is this where it ends? It was a bit disappointing that it became like that.

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Oct 09, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

吸血鬼のお話

A story about vampires

秋人を襲ってきたのを助けた人間が秋人に噛まれて吸血鬼になる手前のタンクになる。絵が色気があっていい！

The person who helped to attack Akito is bitten by Akito and becomes a tank just before they become vampires. It's good if the picture has sex appeal!

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Sep 14, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

完全な吸血鬼になったら‥

If you become a complete vampire...

おさまるところに収まって良かったです！吸血鬼になってからの、その後が気になるので是非とも続編が読みたいですね‼︎

I'm glad it fits anywhere! I'm worried about after becoming a vampire, so I definitely want to read the sequel ‼ ︎

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Jul 17, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

吸血鬼

vampires

This review contains spoilers. 襲われそうになった男を庇い致命傷を負ってしまうが目が覚めると何故か傷が消えていて、救った男が吸血鬼…。吸血されたことで自身も吸血鬼になるが、このお話は吸血鬼になるまでのタンクと呼ばれる存在があるところが新鮮でした。綺麗な絵柄で吸血シーンも見応えがありました。

This review contains spoilers. He sheltered a man who was about to be attacked and was fatally injured, but when he woke up, the wound disappeared for some reason, and the man who saved him was a vampire... Being suckled to her becoming a vampire herself, but this story was fresh about the fact that there is an existence called a tank until you become a vampire. The picture was beautiful and the blood-sucking scene was also impressive.

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Jul 16, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

無防備美人受×クール美人攻

Defenseless Beauty Attack x Cool Beauty Attack

作家さん買い。人間と吸血鬼の間の“タンク”て設定のお話。（タンクて、なんかエロいな…）攻受、どちらも美人だけど違う良さがある。目を離したら襲われまくる無防備美人受けと、クール無表情なのに時々見せる、照れた表情が堪らん攻め。吸血鬼お決まりの血吸いプレイもあり升。お話や設定は面白いんだけど展開に少し違和感…終わり方も一区切りついたところではありますがここで終わり?!て感じで、続編があると良いな、という印象でした。絵は相変わらず美しくて、牙からのぞく舌の描写がｴｯﾁｨでした!

Buy the artist. The story is set in a “tank” between humans and vampires. (Tanks are kind of erotic...) Attack and Attack, both are beautiful, but they have different strengths. The defenseless beauty that attacks you when you take your eyes off her, and the shy expression that she sometimes shows even though she is cool and expressionless, is unbearably aggressive. There is also the usual vampire blood-sucking play, so it's up. The story and setting are interesting, but I feel a little uncomfortable with the development... there is a break in how it ends, but it ends here?! It felt like that, and I had the impression that it would be nice if there was a sequel. The picture was as beautiful as ever, and the depiction of the tongue peeking through the fangs was amazing!

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吸血鬼と吸血鬼にされた人間

Vampires and humans made into vampires

まるっと表題作。家族のいない施設育ちのバイトくん。暴漢に襲われそうな人を助けるつもりが自分がやられてしまい。しかも助けた相手は吸血鬼。やられた怪我から助けるために自分も吸血鬼にされてしまい。なお話し。仲間はいるけど孤独な吸血鬼といろんなものを諦め手放す事が当たり前な人間がお互い大切に思い合いハピエン。いろんな設定をもう少し深く読んでみたかったけどタンクなる人間と吸血鬼の間の状態支配されたい欲求など新設定で面白かったです

The entire title work. A part-time worker who grew up in a facility without a family. I tried to help someone who was likely to be attacked by thugs, but I was beaten. What's more, the person I saved was a vampire. I was also turned into a vampire to help me from my injuries. Keep talking. Vampires who have friends but are lonely, and people who give up and let go of various things take care of each other carefully and are happy to care for each other. I wanted to read the various settings a little deeper, but the state between humans and vampires called tanks, etc., the desire to be controlled was interesting with the new settings

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Jun 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

なんだかあっさり

Somehow so easily

吸血鬼者だったので楽しみにしてたのですが、案外あっさり終わっちゃった感じです。もう少し内容が濃いのが良かったなぁ。

I was a vampire, so I was looking forward to it, but surprisingly it ended so easily. It would have been nice if the content was a little more intense.

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May 23, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

良くも悪くも予想を裏切らず

Don't disappoint for better or worse

サラッと読めました☆絵が綺麗で、私は個人的にあまり動じない秋人が好きですが、年齢にしたらすごい長寿なんですね！話の展開は割と予想通りというか、そこをもうちょっと裏切って欲しかったなぁ〜という感じです。

I was able to read it smoothly ☆ The pictures are beautiful, and I personally like Akito, who isn't really fazed, but he has a great longevity when it comes to age! The development of the story is relatively as expected, or rather, I feel like I wanted them to betray that a little more.

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Apr 19, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

続きください！！

Please continue!!

現代吸血鬼モノ大好きです?クール攻×きらきら無邪気受良いですね…設定の仄暗さもチープにならないのがよかったです。受け君、陽(はる)なのに太陽浴びられなくなってしまうのかーって考えると切なくなるんですが、その様も見たいし、もっとこの設定でお話が読みたいので続編希望です！

Do you love modern vampires? Cool Attack x Sparkling Innocence feels good... It was nice that the dark settings weren't cheap either. I'm sad when I think about Ukei-kun, even though he's the Sun (Haru), but I want to see that too, and I want to read more stories with this setting, so I'm hoping for a sequel!

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キャラがすごく好き

I really like the characters

This review contains spoilers. 魅力的な造形のキャラ、視線を描くのが上手な作家さんなので欠かさず読むのだが、今作はバックボーンや世界観が広すぎて描き切らない部分が多くあり、読みたりない気持ちになってしまうのが惜しかった。近未来人と人でないものが知らず共存している社会で、主人公陽は人を助けようとしたら死にそうになってしまう。その助けようとした人秋人が実は吸血鬼で自分を庇い瀕死になった陽を救うために吸血鬼にしてしまう。このお話の中では吸血されて吸血鬼になるまでにタイムラグがあり、その間はタンクと呼ばれる吸血され放題の存在になってしまう。陽がタンクの状態の間吸血鬼で一番強いと言われる秋人との間のお話。二人の産まれに加え、荒廃しつつある社会、吸血鬼同士の戦い、タンクから吸血鬼にいつなるか等が背景にあるのだがそこはほぼ触れられない。二人の恋物語に終始したが消化不良感が否めない。だがキャラの造形は秀逸。強い視線を持つ攻がとても魅力的。なのでやはり物語がちょっと残念。せめて陽がタンクから変化する先が見たかったがそうなるともう一冊必要となるんだろうなあ。

This review contains spoilers. He is an artist who is good at drawing characters with attractive shapes, so I read them without fail, but this work has too broad a backbone and world view, and there are many parts that I can't fully draw, so it was a pity that I felt like I hadn't read it. In a society where people from the near future and things that aren't people coexist without knowing, the main character Yo almost dies when he tries to help people. The person who tried to help, Akito, is actually a vampire and turns him into a vampire in order to protect himself and save the dying Sun. In this story, there is a time lag between being suckered and turned into a vampire, and during that time, they become unlimited bloodsuckers called tanks. A story between Akihito, who is said to be the strongest vampire while the Sun is in a tank. In addition to the birth of the two, the background is a society that is falling into disrepair, battles between vampires, and when they become vampires from tanks, etc., but that is almost impossible to touch. It's a love story between two people from beginning to end, but the feeling of indigestion is undeniable. However, the shape of the characters is excellent. Attacks with a strong line of sight are very attractive. So after all, the story is a bit disappointing. I wanted to at least see where the sun changes from the tank, but if that happens, I guess I'll need another book.

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Apr 07, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

つづかないんかぁーーーーい

it's not going to continue

購入して、読んで、作品画面を確認したら『完結』となっていたから、叫びました。もったいない！ぜひ続きが読みたい！

When I bought it, read it, and checked the work screen, it was “complete,” so I shouted. that's a waste! I definitely want to read more!

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Apr 04, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

かっこいい吸血鬼

cool vampire

さらっと読めちゃうけど、吸血鬼のお話って、どこかミステリアスだし、かっこいいし、ドキドキしながら読みました。

It's easy to read, but the story about vampires is somewhat mysterious, cool, and I was excited to read it.

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Apr 01, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

続編はあるのかな？

I wonder if there will be a sequel?

This review contains spoilers. 絵が綺麗でオシャレな感じ。吸血鬼モノは設定から既にエッチですからねー。試し読みでは出だしからわりとグロいやつかな？と思ったけど、全然でした。ただ最後が少し物足りなかったです。1巻完結表記になってるけど、物語自体はまだ完結してないですよね。続編ありきなの？なので★4.5。あと、受けは結局昼休みから仕事サボった事になってるんじゃ…？せっかく受けは仕事に対して誠実なのに、事情が分からない職場からはまたサボってるって思われてそうで可哀想だなぁ。あと、タイトルのフローライトはどっから来たの？宝石のフローライト？受けの目の色？よく分からなかった。

This review contains spoilers. The picture is beautiful and stylish. That's because vampire stuff is already naughty since it was set up. I wonder if it's a pretty gross one from the beginning in the trial reading? I thought, but it wasn't at all. However, the last one was a bit unsatisfactory. It says volume 1 is complete, but the story itself hasn't been completed yet, is it? is there always a sequel? So ★ 4.5. Also, after all, I skipped work from lunch break...? It's a pity that people think they are skipping out of a workplace where they don't understand the circumstances even though they are sincere about their work. Also, where did the title Fluorite come from? Fluorite the gemstone? the color of the recipient's eye? I wasn't sure.

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Mar 30, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

新しい！

new!

吸血鬼物です。自分の好みでした！絵は綺麗だし攻めはスパダリ感あるし、一途だし嫌な部分なし。続編なので次も期待します。

It's a vampire thing. It was my favorite! The picture is beautiful, the attack feels spadary, and it's all at once, so there are no bad parts. It's a sequel, so I'm looking forward to the next one.

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世界観

worldview

作者買いです。相変わらず絵が綺麗。今回は吸血鬼のお話でした。ちょっと一巻にまとめるには説明不足感が残ったように感じました。受けの背景とか時代感とかよく分からないところが気になりました。住処もボロボロすぎだしね、、もっと丁寧にお話が進むとよかったのにと残念です。

I'm buying the author. The picture is as beautiful as ever. This time it was about vampires. I felt like there was still a lack of explanation in order to put it all together in one volume. I was concerned that I didn't really understand the background of the reception or the sense of the times. The place of residence is also too tattered, and it's a pity that it would have been nice if the story proceeded more carefully.

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もう少し読みたい感じ

I feel like I want to read some more

ページ数の終わりが近づくにつれて、収束するスピードが加速した感じがしました。もう少し拗らせてるとこを読みたかったです。吸血鬼モノを初めて読む人にはまだ良いのかも知れませんが。想定内というか、気持ちが予想に反して跳ねるようなお話が読みたい。あと、受けのキャラがよく分からずじまいでした。今時の若い子、生き抜くための術として切り替えのいいところ、良い人なのは分かるけど、それが1人の人格として魅力的に感じるかというとそこまで…まだ何か物足りないというか…そういった意味でも続きで読んでみたいです。今さらですが、みんなツリ目なんですよね…ツリ目の良さはあるし、表情も豊かなんだけど、ニュアンスがどうしても似て見えてしまう、何冊も読んでるくらい好きなんですけど…

As the end of the number of pages approached, I felt that the speed of convergence accelerated. I wanted to read it a little more relentless. Maybe it's still good for people reading vampire stuff for the first time, though. I want to read stories that are within my expectations, or that make my feelings bounce against my expectations. Also, I didn't really understand the recipient character. I know that today's young children are good at switching as an art to survive, and that they are good people, but when it comes to whether they find them attractive as a single personality, that is... something is still unsatisfactory... I'd like to continue reading in that sense. As for now, everyone has slender eyes... they have good eyesight, and they have rich expressions, but the nuances seem similar no matter what, I like them so much that I've read so many books...

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吸血鬼は大好物なので

Vampires are my favorite food

良きでした！アキさんかっけぇ〜！でももう少し先が読みたかったかなぁ。やっとこれからってところで終わっちゃうから少しもったいない感。

That was great! Aki is cool! But I wonder if I wanted to read it a little further. It's finally over at this point, so it feels a bit wasteful.

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面白かったけど…足りない。

It was interesting, but... it wasn't enough.

内容、作画、とても綺麗で素敵だったけど…あっさり終わってしまった。もぉ少し〈物語〉を読んでいたかった気分です。とても良くまとまってるけど…後日談とか2人のイチャイチャとか、欲しかったです。なので…続編希望!!!

The content and drawing were so beautiful and wonderful, but... it ended so easily. I feel like I just wanted to read a little bit of “the story.” It's very well organized, but... I wanted to talk at a later date or flirt between the two of them. So... I hope for a sequel!!!

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