When the Morning Comes Manga Reviews (P.8)

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ストーリーが自然で好感

The story is natural and likeable

登場人物が次々に実はゲイでカップルになったり、周りの人たちが当たり前に受け入れてるストーリー展開とかを見ると、ちょっと都合よすぎに見えちゃうので、アンチの存在と本人たちの葛藤、その中での理解者に励まされて歩んでいく姿に好感が持てました。

The characters are actually gay and become couples one after another, and when I look at the story development that people around them have taken for granted, it seems a bit too convenient, so I was impressed by the conflict between the existence of the antagonists and the people themselves, and the way they walked along encouraged by those who understood them.

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同性を好きになるとは

What does it mean to like the same sex

This review contains spoilers. 営業課の藤井はクローゼットゲイだが、ある日同じ会社のシステム課の後輩でオープンゲイの甲斐にバーで男性とキスしてる写真を取られ、1度だけの体の関係を迫られる。止む無くその脅迫に乗るが、それまでの立ち振舞に反して甲斐の反応は初いものばかりで…という話。体の関係から始まるのはよくあるけど、2人とも同性好きがゆえの生きづらさを抱えていて、2人が歩み寄ることでそれまでを昇華していくというと話。重たい話な感じだけど、絵柄や見せ方がスッキリしててとても良かったです。甲斐の妹あかりちゃんや藤井の同期の林さんがとてもよくできた人たちで周りが理解のない人ばかりじゃないのもとても好感でした。

This review contains spoilers. Fujii from the sales department is closet gay, but one day a picture of him kissing a man at a bar is taken due to being a junior in the system section of the same company and an open gay person, and they are pressured to have a physical relationship only once. It's a story where they can't stop taking advantage of that threat, but contrary to how they stood up until then, Kai's reactions were all first-time... It often starts with a physical relationship, but it's a story where both of them have difficulties living because they like the same sex, and when the two walk up to that point, the story sublimates. It feels like a heavy story, but it was really nice that the design and presentation were so clean. Kai's younger sister Akari and Fujii's colleague Hayashi-san were very well-made people, and I was also very impressed that not all people around them understood.

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繰り返し

repetitive

繰り返し読んでいます。表情がとても好きで、ストーリー追って表情を見るためにまた読んでって繰り返しちゃいます。ラストの温かい雰囲気と優しい表情が最高です。ストーリーも無理がなく自然でとても素敵なお話でした。

I read it over and over again. I really like facial expressions, and I read them over and over again to follow the story and see facial expressions. The warm atmosphere and gentle expression at the end are amazing. The story was natural and very nice without any difficulty.

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じんわりする良いお話

A good and gentle story

This review contains spoilers. 二人が一緒になるまでの過程が丁寧に描かれていてとても素敵なお話です。同性同士ゆえの過去からくる葛藤や家族との関係なども描かれています。クローゼットで同じ人とは二度としないと決めていた攻めが受けに惹かれていく流れが良かったです。ずっと攻めを好きだった受けの思いが通じて良かったねって思いました。絵はあっさりしてるのですが、それがお話に合っていて私は好みでした。

This review contains spoilers. The process leading up to the two getting together is carefully depicted, and it's a very nice story. Conflicts and family relationships that come from the past due to people of the same sex are also depicted. There was a good flow where they were attracted to attacks that they had decided not to do with the same person again in the closet. I was glad that the feeling of receiving, which I had always liked attacking, came through. The picture is simple, but it fits the story and I liked it.

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買ってよかった

I'm glad I bought it

初作家さんです。すごくよかったです。2人が時間を重ねて恋人になる過程が丁寧に書かれてて絵とマッチするんです。そして同期の女性上司や妹そして元同級生。みんないい人すぎて読後が最高です。社内とプライベートのギャップも可愛らしい2人です。

I'm a first-time writer. It was really nice. The process of the two becoming lovers over time is carefully written and matches the picture. And my female boss, younger sister, and former classmates in the same period. Everyone is so nice that it's great after reading it. The gap between internal and private life is also a cute couple.

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絵がきれい

The picture is beautiful

お互いに自分のセクシュアリティに複雑な思いを抱えてる2人が、すれ違いつつも存在の大切さに気づいていく過程が丁寧に描かれていて、とても良かったです。儚げ受けが大好きなので体の線がきれいで眼福でしたm(_ _)mその後のふたりが気になります！

The process of two people, who have complicated feelings about each other's sexuality, realising the importance of existence while passing each other was carefully depicted, which was very nice. I love ephemerality, so I'm curious about the two of them after m (_ _) m because their body lines were beautiful and my eyes were a blessing!

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穏やか

calmer

This review contains spoilers. エロさや派手さはないです。視覚的にさっぱりした印象だけど、穏やかに流れる中にしっかり物語がある作品だなと思います。読むうちに世界観に浸かる感じで、あざとい受けちゃんかと思いきや健気な甲斐君と、ツンケンしてるけど結局甲斐君に鎧を解かれた芯は優しい藤井先輩に癒されました。別サイトで公開している寄宿舎の学生のお話も魅力的で、密かに81先生の作品を追っています。先生の初単行本、堪能してます。

This review contains spoilers. It's not erotic or flashy. The visual impression is refreshing, but I think it's a work with a strong story in a gentle flow. As I read it, I felt like I was immersed in the worldview, and I was healed by Fujii Senpai, who was healthy, and Kai-kun, who had a fight but eventually had his armor removed by Kai-kun, who was kind. The stories of students at the boarding house published on a separate site are also fascinating, and I'm secretly following 81 sensei's works. I'm enjoying the teacher's first book.

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初コミックスおめでとうございます。

Congratulations on your first comic.

This review contains spoilers. 単行本になるのを待ってました。表紙の2人、めちゃくちゃ素敵ですね。色彩が最高です。そして距離感が好きーー。先生の絵のタッチが独特ですね。スマートと表現したらいいのでしょうか笑でも、ストーリーに深みがあるので、読んで良かったなぁと思いました。流れも自然で読みやすかったです若干、顔が似ていて誰が誰がわからなくなるのは、私だけでしょうか。たぶん、私だけですね笑海外におられる先生、次の作品も楽しみにしてます。

This review contains spoilers. I've been waiting for it to become a standalone book. The two people on the cover are insanely wonderful. The color is the best. And I like the sense of distance... The teacher's touch on the picture is unique, isn't it? I wonder if I should describe it as smart lol, but the story is deep, so I thought it was good to read it. The flow was natural and easy to read. Am I the only one who has slightly similar faces and doesn't understand who? Probably just me lol, teacher who is overseas, I'm looking forward to the next work.

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大好き?

love it?

This review contains spoilers. 2人のモダモダが！最後は幸せ?がいっぱい一話から再度読むと色んな発見がたくさんあります。単話から追いかけてましたが、一冊になるとまた良さが再確認できていいですね☘続編読みたいです

This review contains spoilers. Two Modamodas! happy at the end? If you reread a lot from episode 1, you will discover a lot of things. I was chasing it from a single episode, but it's nice to be able to reconfirm the goodness again when it comes to one book ☘ I want to read the sequel

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朝日に向かって歩いていくよう（ホクロ）

Like walking towards the rising sun (mole)

流れるようなスッとした先生の絵が魅力的で、ずっと単行本化を楽しみにしていた作品。隠れゲイの藤井と、会社の後輩でゲイをオープンにしている甲斐のお話。体から始まる不安定な関係をどう展開させていくのか気になっていたのだが、個々の心の根底に刻まれてしまっている溝をヘラで埋めていくような丁寧なストーリー運びで、変に奇をてらっておらず良かった。2人が朝日に向かって歩き出すような、未来を感じさせる素敵なお話。エロももれなくスッとした線で描かれているので、ドぎつくなく、初心者の人にも読みやすそう。それにしても受けがいじらしくて、予想外にエロかった。突然の衝撃に震えてしまったり、気持ち良すぎて泣いてしまうという描写が良い。先生の絵がとにかく好み。横顔のラインが特に美しい。描きわけのためなのかもしれないが、脇役がホクロ率高めだったのは嬉しい誤算。先生の素晴らしい絵にホクロが加わるとか…！どのコマも見逃すまいと、ホクロ好きには気が休まらない作品だった。

The smooth, flowing picture of the teacher is fascinating, and I've been looking forward to making it into a standalone book for a long time. It's a story about Fujii, a hidden gay, and a junior at the company who is worth opening up about gays. I was curious about how to develop an unstable relationship that begins in the body, but I'm glad it wasn't strangely strange, with a careful storyline that filled in the groove engraved at the root of each individual heart with a spatula. It's a wonderful story that makes you feel the future, like two people walking towards the rising sun. It's drawn with smooth lines without losing any sense of eroticism, so it's easy to read, even for beginners. Even so, the reception was annoying, and it was unexpectedly erotic. Depictions of people shaking from a sudden shock or crying because they feel so good are good. I just love the teacher's paintings. The profile lines are particularly beautiful. Maybe it's for drawing, but it's a nice miscalculation that the supporting characters had a high mole rate. Like adding a mole to the teacher's wonderful picture...! It was a work that mole lovers couldn't rest easy, trying not to miss any of the frames.

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すごく良かった。

That was really good.

絵があっさりしていることもあり、全体的に静か。ストーリーもベタ。でも、とても良かった。甲斐くんのあざと健気なキャラクターが好印象だし、可愛かったです。一点、涙が重力に逆らって流れているのが気になりました。

There are times when the pictures are light, so overall it's quiet. The story is solid too. But it was very good. Kai-kun's sassy and energetic character made a good impression, and he was cute. One point bothered me that my tears were flowing against gravity.

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COするか、しないか、

Do you CO or not,

This review contains spoilers. リーマンの先輩×後輩、良かった〜！最初あらすじを読んだ時は脅す後輩って攻めかと思ったらまさかの受けの方で、どうせまた年下攻めなんでしょーって思ってたから嬉しくて即読んじゃいました！(根っからの年上攻め好き)大好きなセ/フレからの始まり、ほんと萌える。受けはカミングアウト済みで、それが別れる原因になるなんて…そういうこともあるんだなってちょっとショックだったな。あ、ハピエンですけどね。内容もページ数もしっかりあって、大満足でした。

This review contains spoilers. I'm glad Lehman's seniors and juniors! When I first read the synopsis, I was happy and read it right away because I thought the threatening juniors were attacking, and I thought they would attack younger people again anyway! (I like attacking older people from the bottom of my heart) It started with my favorite fee/fret, and I'm really excited. The reception had already come out, and I was a little shocked that that would cause them to break up... that kind of thing also happened. Ah, it's Happien though. The content and number of pages were solid, and I was very satisfied.

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じんわりあたたかいお話

A gentle and warm story

繊細で綺麗な絵のタッチで描かれるお話は、切なくも甘いじんわりとあたたかくなるようなお話しでした。セ○レ関係から始まったふたりのお話ですが、甲斐くん（受）の健気さや想いの強さ、藤井さん（攻）のトラウマや葛藤が丁寧に描かれていて、毎話感情移入してしまいながら読み終えました。ふたりには、おじいさんになるまで、たまに喧嘩しながらも穏やかで幸せな日々を過ごしてほしいなと心から思いました☘こんなに応援しなくなるようなカップル中々いないです、読了後のじんわり感がたまりません…描き下ろし漫画も、苦難を乗り越えたふたりのラブラブっぷりが最高でした…結ばれるまでのあれこれを見た後には素晴らしい短編です！結ばれたあとのふたりのお話も読みたい?

The story drawn with the touch of a delicate and beautiful picture was a sad yet sweet, gentle, and warm story. It's a story about the two that began with a relationship, but the energy and strength of Kai-kun (), and the trauma and conflict of Fujii (attack) were carefully depicted, and I finished reading every episode while empathizing with emotion. I really wanted them to have a peaceful and happy day while fighting once in a while until they become grandparents ☘ There are no couples that don't support them this much, and the feeling of comfort after reading is irresistible... The comics they drew were also amazing, and the love love between the two of them who overcame hardships was amazing... it's a wonderful short story after watching this and that until they tied the knot! Do you also want to read the story of the two after they tied the knot?

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あるべき姿

The way it should be

大きな問題ごともなく丁寧にすすんでいくストーリーと、現代社会にあるべき姿の会社の方針がみえてとっても良かったです。BLが幸せになってなにが悪いんだ！

It was great to be able to see the story, which progresses carefully without any major issues, and the company's policies as they should be in modern society. What's wrong with BL being happy!

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待ってた！

I've been waiting!

単行本になるのを待ち望んでいた…！あざとくて一途な受けくんが、幸せになって欲しいなあと思いながら読んでいたし。作者の想いのとおり、ふたりと一緒にちょっぴり泣いて笑った作品でした(*^O^*)

I've been waiting for it to become a standalone book...! I was reading it while thinking that it was ridiculous and that I wanted them to be happy. As the author thought, it was a work where I cried and laughed a little with the two of them (*^O^*)

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健気な

healthy

受けの気持ちに寄り添うように丁寧に読み進めた。絵も余分な線がなくて、とても見やすく綺麗でした。攻めの気持ちもとてもリアルでわかるぅー。どちらも愛すべきキャラクターで、感情移入しやすかったです。お話の流れなど、がとても心地よく優しくて、この作者さまのファンになりました。

I read it carefully so as to be close to the feeling of acceptance. There were no extra lines in the picture, so it was very easy to see and beautiful. The feeling of attack is also very real and I understand it. They were both lovable characters, and it was easy to empathize with. The flow of the story was so comfortable and kind, and I became a fan of this author.

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よかった

That was great

218ページ。同じ会社で働くリーマンのストーリーです。クローズドゲイ×オープンゲイ。あっさりとした線の細い絵柄とストーリーがマッチしていた。人間の弱いところも描いていて、切ないシーンもあったけど、実は似た者同士の二人が一緒に成長していくところがよかった。ヒューマン的要素もあって、泣いたりまではしなかったけど、とても素敵な作品でした。ただ、受けは今までバーで誘われたりはしなかったの…？とは思ったけど…。

page 218. This is the story of Lehman, who works at the same company. Closed gay x open gay. The story matched the simple, thin line pattern. It also depicts weak points of humans, and there were sad scenes, but in fact, it was nice that two people who are similar grow up together. There was also a human element, and I didn't even cry, but it was a very wonderful work. However, until now, Osamu hasn't been invited to a bar...? I thought...

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最高です！！

It's awesome!!

単話で読んでました！！描き下ろしが読みたくて…いやーまじで大好きな作品です。絵もシンプルなかんじでサラッとしてて好きです。甲斐くんかわいい♡藤井さんもいい男です。そして林さんがめっちゃ好きだなー！！続編ほしい！同棲編待ってます！！

I was reading it as a single story!! I wanted to read the drawing... well, it's a work I really love. I like the pictures because they are simple and smooth. Kai-kun is cute ♡ Fujii is a nice guy too. And I really like Hayashi-san!! I want a sequel! I'm waiting for the Cohabitation Edition!!

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良かったー

That was great

分冊版で何話読んだことあったが、その時はまだ切なくて恋に辿ってないけど、新刊が出るのを知って早速購入した。良かった！と見終わった後素直な感想でした。

How many episodes had I read in the split edition, but at that time I was still sad and hadn't followed love, but I knew the new issue was coming out and bought it right away. That was great! I had an honest impression after I finished watching it.

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個人的に大ちゃん推し

I personally recommend Daichan

This review contains spoilers. 七五三みたいな格好で挨拶来たっていうのがウケる笑。作者さん初コミックおめでとうごさいます！絵も無駄な線がなく（絵◯鼓先生の系統、好きです）サラッとしてるのに人物の表情が豊かに感じるんですよね。悠介はぱっと見、一歩引く感じかなと思ったんですが結構グイグイいきますね〜。隼人のほうがちょっとアンニュイでクールな感じがしつつも繊細だったり。割り切った関係を続けていたのも、傷ついた自分を守るためだったんですね。もう一度、自分をさらけ出して向き合える相手に出会えてよかった！しかも自分のことが大好きな相手に。ストーリーとしてはよくある体からの関係ですが、悠介の健気さに心打たれます。時々隼人にジレジレしましたが、マンションでの妹との鉢合わせシーンには、ようやく自分から動いたか、頑張った隼人！とジーンとしました。読み終わった後、もっともっと！な気持ちになり、好きすぎてpi◯ivまで追って見ちゃいました〜←こちらでは隼人のちょっとしたヤキモチとか2人のやりとりが楽しめる、本誌を読んでからのおまけページとなっています。2人の何気ない1日とかまとめてまた紙にしてくださったら迷わず買います！

This review contains spoilers. The fact that they greeted me dressed like Shichigosan is so cool lol. Congratulations to the author for her first comic! There are no useless lines in the picture either (I like the picture, Tsuzumi-sensei lineage), yet I feel that the expressions of the characters are rich. I took a quick look at Yusuke and thought it was like taking a step back, but it's going pretty fast. Hayato is a bit nuanced and cool, yet delicate. The reason I continued the split relationship was also to protect my hurt self. I'm glad I was able to once again expose myself and meet someone I can face! What's more, it's someone I love. It's a common physical relationship as a story, but I'm struck by Yusuke's healthiness. Sometimes I had trouble with Hayato, but in the scene where he hit it off with his little sister in the condominium, Hayato finally moved on his own, and did his best! I decided with Gene. After reading, even more! I felt like that, and I liked it so much that I followed it to pi◯iv ~ ← here is a bonus page where you can enjoy Hayato's little bit of excitement and interaction between the two, after reading this magazine. If you put together a casual day for two and turn it into paper again, I won't hesitate to buy it!

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