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Apr 10, 2025 (PST) | Total Reviews: 28

Soooo good!

The artwork is gorgeous. And the story is ADORABLE. 🥹 I hope to see more hot guys drawn by this amazing artist!

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Oct 05, 2025 (PST) | Translate to English

心が温まります！

It warms my heart!

This review contains spoilers. 草食✖️肉食という逆の発想が味わえる作品です。受けがとても素直でなんでも受け入れてしまうのですが、そこがとにかく可愛くて心が温まります！是非読んでほしい一冊です❤️

This review contains spoilers. It is a work where you can enjoy the opposite idea of herbivory ✖️ carnivorous. They are very straightforward and will accept anything, but they are just so cute and heartwarming! This is a book I definitely want you to read ❤️

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Dec 02, 2021 (PST) | Translate to English

作者買い

Buy the artist

作者買いです。相変わらず受けの体つきがえろくて良いです。攻めもイケメン。受けはちょっとバカで可愛い。ストーリーよりもえろメインかなと思います。

I'm buying the author. As always, the reception is in great shape, and it's nice. The attackers are also handsome. The reception is a bit silly and cute. I think it's more about the main story than the story.

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Dec 20, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

兄弟

siblings

This review contains spoilers. ヤクザで頭がキレて弟大好きな兄x無知であほな弟の兄弟BLですがおそらく血が繋がってないので背徳感は低めです。はじめての作者様ですが、とっても画が上手くて表紙のカラー絵の受けの尻が芸術的で感動しました。内容もアホエロ気味ですがおもしろくてガッツリえろいのでおすすめです。

This review contains spoilers. They are siblings BL who are yakuza and have a sharp head and love their younger brother x ignorant younger brother BL, but they're probably not related by blood, so their sense of immorality is low. This is my first time as an artist, and I was very good at drawing, and I was moved by how artistic the color picture on the cover was received. The content is also silly, but it's interesting and very exciting, so I recommend it.

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Sep 02, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

とても楽しみにしてました！

I was really looking forward to it!

隔月での連載でしたが、とても楽しみにしておりました。まさか5話で終了なんて泣お互いの愛がとても可愛かったです！ぜひぜひぜひ、続けて頂きたく宜しくお願いします！

It was a bimonthly series, and I was really looking forward to it. I never thought it would end with episode 5 and their love for each other was so cute! I definitely want you to continue, thank you!

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Aug 06, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

好き……

I like...

表紙がもうエッチじゃん……絵も綺麗で、初めて読む作家さんでしたがかなり好きです? 続きも購入します！！

The cover is already naughty... the pictures are beautiful, and it was my first time reading this artist, but I really like it? I will be buying more!!

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Aug 01, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

こんなん

Something like this

星5つけるしかないっしょ。絵も好き、内容も好き。ここ最近読んだ中でダントツつぼに来ました。単行本化楽しみにしています。

I have no choice but to give it 5 stars. I like the picture, and I like the content. I've been reading this recently, and I've come to the point where by far. I'm looking forward to making it into a standalone book.

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Jul 03, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

結局キャラみんな好き！

After all, I like all the characters!

This review contains spoilers. 士郎の天月さんのために暴走する可愛さといったら。すみません。3話までは…3話までは好きだったんです士郎…！でも4話で凱さんに心が持ってかれちゃいました…！Tのピアス、エロい！反則だ〜っ、いちいち顔合わせる2人！好き！！?まだ続くっぽいので、少しのコマでも、鬼華のアニキとのチョメチョメしてるのを拝みたいっ叶うのなら紙版でいーので！期待してます。?

This review contains spoilers. What is the cuteness of running wild for Shirou's Amatsu-san. I'm sorry. Up to episode 3... I loved up to episode 3, Shirou...! But in episode 4, Kai-san took my heart...! T's piercings are erotic! It's a foul play, two people who meet one by one! I like it!!? It looks like it's still going on, so even if it's just a few frames, I want to watch Onika's Chomechome with Aniki, but if it comes true, it's fine in the paper version! I'm looking forward to it.?

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Jun 21, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

最の高

The highest

This review contains spoilers. 草食ってきくと草食系男子が浮かんでしまうけど、逆なのね。攻めなのね。確かに角ありで細身で理知的な攻めかっこいいわー。性的なことを知らない受けを溺愛で落としていく。エロも絵もストーリーも全部良い。作家買いだけど今回も買ってよかった。

This review contains spoilers. When herbivores come to mind, herbivorous boys come to mind, but the opposite is true. it's an attack, isn't it? It's certainly cool to attack slender and intellectually with horns. They lose their perception that they don't know about sexual things through doting. The eroticism, pictures, and story are all good. I bought an artist, but I'm glad I bought it this time too.

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Jun 08, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

期待以上

More than expected

表紙を見てドロドロしたカンジかなと思って敬遠してたものの、安かったのでなんとなく購入。結果、かなり良かった笑ピュアすぎる弟と溺愛する兄。キャラもいいし絵柄もいい。ストーリーも◎このシリーズでもっと続けてほしいです！

When I saw the cover, I shunned it because I thought it was muddy, but since it was cheap, I bought it somehow. As a result, it was pretty good lol younger brother who is too pure and older brother who dotes on him. The characters are nice and so are the designs. The story is also ◎ I want more to continue in this series!

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Jun 05, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

と、とてもいい・・・

and, very nice...

This review contains spoilers. ギャップ萌！！見た目草食の美形が攻めで受けを溺愛。肉食のヤンキーが受け。そして受けが純粋おばかちゃんでとても可愛いっっ！！性知識が乏しく色んな勘違いをするんだけど、それがまたバカ愛おしい・・・兄貴にハラメって言われて赤ちゃんが出来るかも・・・ってお腹さするシーンはずるいっ。その絵面は兄貴にも見せたいので兄貴がいるところでまたして欲しいものです。エロ可愛すぎな・・・そのあと男は赤ちゃん産めないとわかるんだけど、その時の兄貴と舎弟のやり取りが面白かった笑そりゃあんな天使な姿みたら尊すぎて涙するわな・・・溺愛スパダリ×天然おばかちゃん最高です！絵も綺麗だしとてもエロい。あ、そして兄貴ごっつい指輪を沢山はめてるのに左手の薬指だけはしてない所にも萌えました。士郎の為かな♡えっっちする時に指輪外すし、そういった細かい描写にもキュンキュンします。早く続きが読みたいです?

This review contains spoilers. Gap Moe!! Her beautiful, herbivorous appearance attacks her and dotes on her. The carnivorous Yankee took it. And the recipient is a pure idiot and she's so cute!! I have poor sexual knowledge and make various misunderstandings, but the scene where I get hungry because it's also stupid and adorable... my older brother says harame and I might have a baby... is ugly. I want to show that picture to my older brother too, so I want him to do it again where my older brother is. It's too erotic... I know the man won't be able to have a baby after that, but the interaction between the older brother and younger brother at that time was interesting lol well, when I saw such an angelic figure, it was so precious that I burst into tears... Doting Spadari x Natural Obaka-chan is awesome! The pictures are beautiful and very erotic. Oh, and even though my older brother wears a lot of big rings, he doesn't just wear the ring finger on his left hand. Maybe it's for Shirou ♡ I take the ring off when I do that, and I'm amazed at such detailed descriptions. Want to read more soon?

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May 13, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

やばい?

that's crazy?

めっちゃはまってしまいました‼何度も読み返してしまいました‼エロい描写もあるのですが、登場人物が魅力的ですしストーリーも面白いです?続きがめちゃ楽しみです！

I'm really addicted to it ‼ I've reread it over and over ‼ There are also erotic depictions, but the characters are fascinating and the story interesting? I'm really looking forward to the continuation!

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May 08, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

かわいい〜！

so cute~!

兄貴と士郎がどこまでもラブラブで見ててキュンキュンします…すごく可愛いです！絵もとても綺麗で、ふたりとも身体がしっかり描かれてるのもめちゃくちゃ好みです！これからも続き楽しみにしています！

My older brother and Shirou are always in love and I'm so excited... they're so cute! The pictures are also very beautiful, and I really like the fact that they both have well-drawn bodies! I'm looking forward to continuing!

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May 07, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

超天然可愛さ爆発！

Supernatural cuteness explodes!

肉食人種の士郎が可愛いすぎてニヤニヤ。キラキラおめめで兄貴の言葉に一喜一憂。素直でエロくてまだ少年ぽさの残るムチムチの身体がまた可愛い！泣き顔もキューンとなります。兄貴の舎弟達もいいキャラです。

Shirou from the carnivorous race is so cute that I smirk. I'm happy and happy with the big brother's words, sparkly face up. Her honest, erotic, and plump body that still looks like a boy is cute again! My crying face also makes me cringe. My older brother's siblings are good characters too.

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May 02, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

エロい

erotic

エロいし絵もきれいだし、設定もすごくいい。一話一話ら短いけど、ちゃんとまとまっていて毎回きちんとオチがあるので読んでいて楽しい！

It's erotic, the pictures are beautiful, and the setting is really nice. Each episode is short, but it's well organized and has a proper punch line every time, so it's fun to read!

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Mar 11, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

どエロい

How erotic

むっちりなお尻がどストライクで買いました！表紙買いです！綺麗！

I bought a plump butt at Strike! I'm buying the cover! beautiful!

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Mar 08, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い！綺麗系攻め×おバカな受け

cute! Kirei Attack x Idiot Reception

受けの男の子の、ほどよく筋肉質な体型と、ビジュアルがドストライクだったこと、涙袋が魅力的な作画をする作者先生の画力が高いことなどの要素で買いました。ちなみに、同じ先生のコミックスも持ってますが、そちらよりも、この作品の方が(トーン処理の違いか不明ですが)画面が見やすいです。絵も益々上手くなられたと思います。きっちり取れたデッサンによる筋肉美が素晴らしい。特に、受けの子の方が攻め男子よりもちょっと体格がいいところがツボですね。攻めも、ほどよく筋肉質なのでそこまで体格差を感じさせませんが、2人が裸で並んでいるところをよく見ると、肩の筋肉や腿の筋肉、太さ、雄っぱいの大きさなど、随所に受けの方が体格がいいことが表現されてます。ただ、程よい描写なので、筋肉好きじゃない読者さんも違和感なく楽しめる範囲内です！ご安心を。内容は、綺麗で強いアニキをリスペクトしている弟分が、発情による性処理をアニキにされることになり、そこからアレコレなる話なんですが、エロいし可愛いし最高でした。甘々で満足度高いです！3巻以降も出てほしい！！

I bought it due to factors such as the boy's moderately muscular figure, the fact that the visuals were stark, and the artist's teacher, who draws with attractive tear bags, has high drawing ability. Incidentally, I also have comics by the same teacher, but the screen of this work (I don't know if it's a difference in tone processing) is easier to see than those. I think I've gotten better at painting. The muscular beauty from the well-drawn drawing is amazing. In particular, the point is that the target child has a slightly better physique than the attacking boy. Attacks are also moderately muscular, so it doesn't make you feel that much of a physical disparity, but if you look closely at the place where the two are naked and side by side, it is expressed that the person receiving them has a better physique everywhere, such as shoulder muscles, thigh muscles, thickness, and size of their strength. However, since it's a moderate depiction, it's within the range that even readers who don't like muscles can enjoy it without any sense of incongruity! Don't worry. The content is a story where the younger brother, who respects beautiful and strong Aniki, ends up being sexually processed by Aniki due to estrus, and it became a story from there, but it was erotic and cute, and it was awesome. It's sweet and very satisfying! I want them to come out after volume 3!!

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Mar 02, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

はぁ～？なにこれさいこう

huh? What is this

士郎かわいすぎない？兄貴も無表情での士郎への愛ダダ漏れが最高に愉快。士郎の兄貴への大好きが恋人としてになったのかは未だ不明だけど、そこがまたいい。微妙にすれ違ったままイチャイチャしてくれてたらいいと思います！

Isn't Shirou too cute? My older brother is also expressionless and his love for Shirou is extremely pleasant. It's still unclear whether Shirou's love for his older brother became his lover, but that's good again. I think it would be nice if they flirted while slightly passing each other in!

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Feb 06, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

絵がきれい関係性も最高

The picture is beautiful and the relationship is great

とにかく自分の趣味に完全にはまりました。兄貴がかっこいい。次回作が楽しみでなりません！

Anyway, I'm totally addicted to my hobby. My older brother is cool. I can't wait to see the next one!

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Jan 31, 2020 (PST) | Translate to English

何コレ最高！

What is this awesome!

草食攻めの、肉食受けとか、BLの極み！そして、両想いだけど考えの相違で一方通行！(笑)今、１番、続きが楽しみな作品になりました。

Herbivorous attacks, carnivores, etc., are the ultimate in BL! And, although they have both feelings, they go one way due to differences of thought! (Laughter) Right now, it's the first work I'm looking forward to continuing.

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