Breathless Momentum: Super Pink Manga Reviews (P.11)

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Nov 09, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

さいこーにえっちぃー！！！

that's awesome!!!

私の中でBL漫画はエロありで展開される漫画だったのですが「息できないのは君のせい」に出会ってからはBL作品の中で唯一エロシーンがなくても満足できる漫画になっていました！けれどこれは可愛すぎる！えっちぃしかわいいしこんな短くても満足できるぐらい中身が詰まっていました。ありがとうございます。ゼニコさん作品は本当に素晴らしいです。大好きです。

For me, BL comics were comics developed with eroticism, but after I came across “It's Your Fault You Can't Breathe,” it became the only BL comic that I was satisfied with without erotic scenes! But this is too cute! It was so cute, and it was so packed with content that I was satisfied even though it was this short. Thank you very much. Zenico's work is really amazing. I love it.

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本編はとってもライトなんですが

The main story is very light

本編では匂わせのみで本番一切なしの二人なのですが、会話の節々に濃厚な雰囲気が出ていました。笑そんな二人の絡み、いやー特濃でした…紙本は買わないことにしているので電子で配信してくれて本当に嬉しいです。ゼニコ先生神。。本編がライトな分、番外編で特濃なの最高です。今後もたまーにやってくれないかな、と期待せざるを得ません…！

They are two people who only smell in the main story and have no actual performance at all, but there was a rich atmosphere in every step of the conversation. lol the entanglement between these two people was really intense... I've decided not to buy paper books, so I'm really happy that they distributed them electronically. Zeniko-sensei is God.. Because the main story is light, the extra part is so intense, which is the best. I can't help but hope they will continue to do it once in a while...!

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ありがとうございます！

Thank you so much!

息できないのは君のせいの二人のガッツリ本番を描いた作品です。原作？本編？も十分素晴らしいのですが、まさか本編では軽い描写のみだった本番がこんなに濃厚だったとは！勝手に本番描くの苦手なのかと思ってましたが、もう！もう！凄いです！なぜ今まで描写しなかったのかって位上手くてエロい！もちろんなくてもこの作者の作品は面白いですが、今後もたまにこんなふうに他の作品のキャラたちの本番も読めると嬉しいですね。あと軽い描写だけだった場面の詳細とかw

It's a film depicting the real life of two people who can't breathe because of you. original? main story? It's also amazing enough, but I had no idea that the actual performance, which had only light depictions in the main story, was this rich! I was wondering if they weren't good at actual drawing without permission, but that's enough! already! That's amazing! Why hasn't it been depicted until now? It's so good and erotic! Of course, works by this author are interesting even without them, but I would be happy if I could occasionally read live performances of characters from other works like this in the future. and the details of the scene that were only light depictions lol

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最高

highest

本編では見られないえっちな2人もう最高でした！！はああーー。今日も仕事頑張れます笑。ゼニコ先生ありがとうございました！！本編の方も続編楽しみにしております^ ^

The two eccentric people you can't see in the main story were already awesome!! huh. I can do my best at work today too lol. Thank you very much, Zenico! The main story is also looking forward to the sequel ^ ^

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ようやく！

finally!

ようやく読めましたー！！もうずっと待ってました！先生が書かれたと聞いてから、なんとか商業誌で読めないか？と思っていました！配信すごく嬉しかったです?全てが最高でした、、、良かった読めて本当によかった⤴

I was finally able to read it!! I've been waiting so long! After hearing that the teacher wrote it, can't you somehow read it in a commercial magazine? I thought so! were you so happy with the broadcast? Everything was great... good I'm really glad I was able to read it ⤴

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最&高

Highest & tallest

This review contains spoilers. 本編が好き過ぎて何度も読んでましたが、エロを重点的にしていなかったので、これはずっっっっと最初から最後まで２人の欲情したエロが見られて大変美味でした…。(本編はストーリーを読むという意味では好きですが、エロが好きなら絶対こっちも読むべき)

This review contains spoilers. I liked the main story so much that I read it over and over again, but since it didn't focus on eroticism, I was able to watch the two lustful erotica from beginning to end, and it was so delicious... (I like the main story in the sense of reading the story, but if you like erotica, you should definitely read this one too)

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今まで、、、

Up until now...

This review contains spoilers. 今までちゃんがっつりとしたえちシーンがなかったゼニコ先生！！表情とか、事後の感じでえち想像、、、これはめちゃくちゃちゃんとしっかり描いて頂いてます！ありがたぃ〜

This review contains spoilers. Zeniko-sensei hasn't had a really strong girl scene until now!! Expressions and feelings after the fact... this was drawn insanely well! thank you~

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大好きです

I love it

ゼニコ先生、かみ様?こんなの志筑くん好きです！エッチシーンめちゃくちゃ良い！もっと見たいです～また出るのかな？

Zeniko sensei, wife? Shizuki-kun likes this! The sex scene is insanely good! I want to see more ~ will they come out again?

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これはヤバい！！

this is dangerous!!

本編はライトBLなので拝めなかった諸々が全部詰まってます！志筑の受けの姿がどうしても見たかったのでこんな濃厚な形で見せてもらってホントにありがたや…。本編読んでる大人のみんなは是非読んだほうがいい！60P以上全編エロです。あの2人のエロが見れた上に合間のやり取りとか細かい空気感も魅せてくれてホントに大満足でした！本編はエロなしストーリーメイン、同人で隅々魅せるスタイルとても良かったのでまたあったら楽しみに待ちます！

The main story is a light BL, so it's packed with everything I couldn't see! I really wanted to see Shizuki receiving it, so I was really thankful to have it show me in such a rich form... All adults reading the main story should read it! It's 60P or more full-length erotic. I was really satisfied that I was able to see the eroticism of those two people, and they were also fascinated by the interaction between them and the detailed atmosphere! The main story is a story without eroticism, and the style that captivates every corner with their doujin was very good, so I'm looking forward to seeing them again!

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勝手に

arbitrarily

直接的なエロは書かない作家さんなのかなーと思っていたので、R18ものを出されると知って電子配信を首を長〜〜くして待ってました！他の方も書かれてましたが、これから本編の二人をどんな顔で見たらいいのか(笑)乳首気になっちゃうじゃん…！つまり最高でした。〜11/25追記〜あまりに素晴らしくて定期的に読み返しに来るたびに増えている☆5レビューと皆様の熱量に感動して、つい追記(笑)何度読んでも素晴らしいですね。本編読んで、妄想してまたこっち読んで、無限ループできちゃう。ゼニコ先生、第二弾も期待しています！！

I was wondering if he was an artist who doesn't write direct erotica, so I knew R18 stuff would come out and waited a long time for the electronic distribution! Other people were also written, but I wonder what kind of faces I should look at the two people in the main story from now on (lol) I'm getting worried about my nipples...! In other words, it was awesome. ~ 11/25 postscript ~ It's so amazing that it's increasing every time I reread it regularly ☆ 5 reviews and everyone's enthusiasm, and I just added it (lol) It's amazing no matter how many times I read it. Read the main story, get delusional, read it over here again, and you'll be able to do an infinite loop. Zeniko-sensei, I'm looking forward to the second installment too!

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これから本編の2人をどんな顔で見れば…！

What kind of faces should we look at the two people in the main story from now on...!

ゼニコ先生！これを世に出していただいてありがとうございます！！身体の関係から始まり、気持ちいいことに貪欲で素直な二人に恥じない(？)絡みでした

Zeniko sensei! Thank you so much for bringing this out to the world!! Starting from a physical relationship, they are not ashamed of two people who are greedy and honest about what feels good (?) It was entangled

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もちろん、Super　pinkです?

Of course it's Super pink?

This review contains spoilers. 最初から最後まで、ずっとひたすらに　えちえちです。がっつり、じっくり描かれています。　ふたりの世界を堪能できます。ふたりが互いを煽りあうとき、私たち読者も煽られます。これは、まさにSuper　pinkです。タイトルに納得でした、、、

This review contains spoilers. From beginning to end, it's always been a no-brainer. It is drawn tightly and carefully. You can enjoy the world of the two of them. When the two incite each other, we readers are also incited. It really is Super Pink. I was satisfied with the title...

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凝縮エロ

Condensed erotic

本編では中々みられないエロ部分をこれでもかと凝縮したような作品です。色々とモロでエロです。最中、受けのカッコよさと可愛さのギャップをかなり感じられてとても萌えます。

It's a work that seems to have condensed even the erotic parts that can't be seen in the main story. It's very erotic in a lot of ways. Meanwhile, I was able to feel quite a bit of a gap between how cool they were received and how cute they were, and I was so moved.

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読者の願望が叶う

Readers' wishes come true

『息できないのは君のせい』のエロ同人誌。本編では見られない二人のエチが拝めます。ファンなら一度は夢見たことでしょう。作者様、本当にありがとうございます。いつもこんなことしていたんですね〜。だけど何だろこの感覚。満足しているはずなのに満足していない感。そこだけあっても萌えないのかな？でも１回は見てみたかったからよかったです。大感謝。

An erotic doujinshi from “It's Your Fault You Can't Breathe.” You can admire the two people you don't see in the main story. If you're a fan, you've probably dreamed of it at least once. Thank you so much, author. I used to do this all the time, didn't I? But I wonder what this feeling is. I feel like I'm supposed to be satisfied but I'm not satisfied. I wonder if it's just there but it won't make you fall in love? But I wanted to watch it once, so I'm glad. Thanks a lot.

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息できないのは君のせいSUPERPINK

It's Your Fault I Can't Breathe SUPERPINK

This review contains spoilers. 息出来ないのは君のせい、元々気になっていましたがなかなか踏み出せずにいました。しかしレビューを見てスーパーピンクは買ったほうがいいと知りこちらから入りました。え〇ちです。涼しい顔してちゃんとえ〇いこと好きな志筑も王子様フェイスでめっちゃ可愛いのに攻め攻めな矢野、ちゃんとえ〇いことしてて救われました笑

This review contains spoilers. It's because of you that I can't breathe, and I was originally worried, but I couldn't take the first step. However, looking at the reviews, I learned that it would be better to buy Super Pink, so I went in from here. Eh, that's fine. Shizuki, who likes to have a cool face and is so cute with a prince's face, Yano, who attacked and attacked, was saved by doing nothing properly lol

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Feb 07, 2025 (PST) | Translate to English

18　□で大正解☺

18 □ is a great answer ☺

This review contains spoilers. 本編もあります、スピンオフもあります。この番外編もすごく良かったです♪ムチムチ感が増していて(*^ーﾟ)b ｸｯﾞ

This review contains spoilers. There's also the main story, and there are spin-offs. This extra edition was also really good ♪ The feeling of fluffiness has increased (*^-°) b cool

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商業番外編

Commercial extra edition

本編で全然そんなそぶりが見えないのでどんなもんかと思ったらめちゃくちゃガッツリやってていい意味でびっくりしました。

I can't see that kind of skipping at all in the main story, so when I thought about what it was, I was surprised in the sense that it was okay to do it so hard.

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Aug 12, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

最高最高最高

Highest highest highest

えっちな2人最高ー！テーマの過激さの割にさっぱり(？)読みやすくて助かりました。2人普段こんな感じなんだな！！

those two people are awesome! refreshing in spite of the extreme nature of the theme (?) It was easy to read and helpful. 2 people usually look like this!!

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Apr 27, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

いいですね

That's good

うん、18金なのでもちろんヤッてるだけでなんですが、焦らしから始まるのが何ともよかった！！あの2人のオフが見れて良かった

Yeah, it's 18 karat, so of course I'm just screaming, but it was so nice to start with impatience!! I'm glad I was able to see those two off

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18歳以上、

18 years old or older,

大人でよかったなあ。とつくづく思いました。エロい事、キモチイイコト大好きな受け。本編ではセのフレから恋人同士になっておられますが、やることはいっしょ。いや、相手のことを思っての行動でヨサは倍にも三倍にもなるんでしょう。受けのいさぎよさが好きです〜

I'm glad I'm an adult. I kept thinking about it. I love erotic things and creepy things. In the main story, they've been lovers since they started off, but there's nothing they can do. No, Yosa will probably double or triple if she acts thinking about her opponent. I like how easy it is to receive it~

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