Susumu×Minoru Manga Reviews (P.2)

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Dec 23, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

初心者BL漫画家×一途なバイト先後輩

Beginner BL manga artist x Iszuna part-time senpai

This review contains spoilers. 売れない少年漫画家の前田進はBLを描くよう担当さんから勧められます｡高校時代に受賞して2回読み切りを掲載されたものの､それっきりだったススムは田舎に帰って親の店を手伝おうかと洩らします｡それを聞いたバイト先の後輩•星風実はススムにBL漫画を描くよう発破をかけます｡ミノルはBL漫画を描くための体当たり取材として自分と付き合わないかと持ちかけるのでした｡大事なのは正気を捨てる勢いだと言うミノルに｢うし！｣と早速チュウしたススムでしたが､ミノルは照れて赤くなるとそのまま帰ってしまうのでした｡BL漫画を描くという設定に沿って､属性や萌え､腐女子の生態などがコミカルに描かれていて楽しいです｡｢好きなものについて前のめりにプレゼンしそうになる自分を噛み殺す狂犬｣に爆笑しました｡ノンケのススムとゲイのミノル､不安や嫉妬などそれぞれと思惑を超えて晴れて結ばれるまでの明るいラブコメです｡

This review contains spoilers. Maeda Susumu, an unsellable shonen manga artist, is recommended by the person in charge to draw BL. Although he won an award in high school and was published twice, Susumu, who was clear, went back to the countryside and asked if she would help her parent's store. After hearing that, Byte-sensei's junior, Hoshime, detonated Susumu as drawing BL comics. Minoru asked if she wouldn't go out with herself as physical coverage for drawing BL comics. What's important is the momentum to abandon her sanity To Minoru who says “cow!” It was Susumu who immediately chuckled, but Minoru was embarrassed and went back home as soon as she turned red. It's fun because the attributes, moe, and the ecology of the rotten girl were comically drawn in line with the setting of drawing BL comics. I burst out laughing at “the mad dog that bites himself to death and makes a presentation about what he likes.” It's a bright romantic comedy where they go beyond their feelings of jealousy and jealousy.

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Dec 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

トゥインクル前田

Twinkle Maeda

新しいタイプの読んだって感じです！テンポが良いし可愛くて面白い！ジワジワ進んでいくのも良かったです。なんか話にちょっと挟む腐女子あるあるもツボでした〜

I feel like I've read a new type! It has a good tempo and is cute and fun! It was also nice that it was progressing slowly. There's a rotten girl that gets a little caught in the story, but it was also a pressure point ~

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カワイイ

cute

This review contains spoilers. BL漫画だけど1番笑ったのは小春ちゃんの狂犬の顔です！笑。私もコレやっとる…今度から友人とも「狂犬の顔」を合言葉にしようと思うくらいツボりました。売れない漫画家のススム（攻）が担当にBL描かない？と言われて、バイト後輩のミノル（受）にも応援されたのでBLをお勉強をしていくんだけど、その過程でお付き合いを提案したミノルとの距離感が面白くてカワイイです。ミノルはススム好きが隠せてないから愛くるしいし、ススムはBLを知っていくにつれてミノルをちゃんと意識しだしてるしで…なんか、それを体験してるトゥインクル前田先生の作品読んでみたいと思いました笑。最終的にはお勉強でのお付き合いから、小春ちゃんが狂犬の顔になる展開になりハピエンです。追記:2巻目でやっと本当の恋人になれた感あり。ススムを好きだけどノンケだし何処かで線引きしてて傷つかないようにしてたミノルを、ギュッと抱き寄せたススムに成長を感じました。ずっと優柔不断姿勢だったススムに「ハッキリせい！」と読みながら喝を飛ばしてた甲斐があった笑。当て馬な子も心の声を聞くと不憫だったな…もしかするとスピンオフでハピエンになってくれるかも？と思わせぶりなシーン入れてくるのもにくいですね。期待してます笑。

This review contains spoilers. It's a BL comic, but the one that made me laugh the most was Koharu-chan's mad dog's face! lol. I'm doing this too... it made me think I'll use “mad dog's face” as my password from now on. Doesn't Susumu (attack), an unsellable manga artist, draw BL in charge? I was told that I was supported by Minoru (Suki), my part-time junior, so I'm studying BL, and the sense of distance from Minoru, who proposed a relationship during that process, is interesting and cute. Minoru is adorable because she doesn't hide her love for Susumu, and Susumu starts to be properly aware of Minoru as she gets to know BL... Somehow, I wanted to read works by Twinkle Maeda sensei who experienced that lol. Eventually, from a relationship during study, Koharu-chan becomes the face of a mad dog, and it's a happy place. Additional note: I feel like I was finally able to become a real lover in volume 2. I felt the growth of Minoru, who liked Susumu but had drawn a line somewhere so that she wouldn't get hurt, and Susumu hugged her tightly. To Susumu, who had always had an indecisive attitude, “Because it's clear!” It was worth shouting while reading it lol. It was a pity when she heard Kokoro's voice... maybe she'll be happy in the spin-off? It's also hard to put in scenes that make you think. I'm looking forward to it lol.

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ウケる

It's great

売れない少年漫画家（のちにＢＬ作家）×バイト先の後輩のお話。ギャグ寄りのラブコメと思わせといて、ちゃんとキュンもあります。Ｈもあります。テンポがよくて本当面白い！！笑えます。狂犬のくだりが１番好きｗｗ面白すぎて１巻の続き、７話〜分冊版も読み始めました。めちゃくちゃ面白いです。オススメです！！

A story about an unsellable shonen manga artist (later BL writer) x part-time senior's junior. It makes me think it's a romantic comedy close to a gag, and it also has a lot of hum. H is also available. The tempo is good and it's really fun!! It's laughable. I like Kudari the Mad Dog the most lol lol it was so interesting that I continued volume 1, and I started reading the 7 ~ split edition. It's insanely interesting. I recommend it!!

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可愛い

pretty

絵柄が好みで購入したのですが、話も登場人物全てが愛おしくて大満足でした！エロはあまりないですが、よんだあとの満足感がすごく、大満足でした！

I bought it because I liked the design, and I was very satisfied that all the characters in the story were adorable! There isn't much eroticism, but the feeling of satisfaction after reading was amazing, and I was very satisfied!

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純愛

pure love

えっちな描写はほとんどなく2人の心が通っていく過程を楽しむ漫画です。過程が丁寧に書かれていてすごく読みやすかったです。

It's a comic where you can enjoy the process of two hearts passing through, with almost no eccentric depictions. The process was carefully written and very easy to read.

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かわええ

That's cute

クスッと笑ってしまうギャグ要素あったりしてあっという間に読み終わりました。年下受け可愛い、、、一途って最高、、

There were gag elements that made me laugh out loud, and I finished reading it in no time. Being younger is cute... Ichitu is the best...

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とっても良かった

It was very good

大好きな作家さんの作品、また会えて嬉しい！絵柄は相変わらず素敵で、ストーリーは重すぎず軽すぎず。所々コミカルなところもあって楽しめました。買って良かったです！

I'm happy to see my favorite artist's work again! The graphics are as nice as ever, and the story isn't too heavy and not too light. There were comical things here and there, so I enjoyed it. I'm glad I bought it!

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かわいい

cute

This review contains spoilers. Twitterで試し読みを読んで気になって購入させて頂きました。あまり読まないタイプのカプだったのですがめちゃくちゃ良かったです！受けが関西弁なのめちゃくちゃ好きです~全体的にほのぼの、平和~って感じで可愛かったです所々ギャグ要素もありつつで面白かったです！

This review contains spoilers. I read the trial reading on Twitter and bought it because I was curious. It was a type of cap I don't read very often, but it was really good! The reception is Kansai dialect and I really like it ~ overall, it felt heartwarming and peaceful, and it was cute, and it was interesting even though there were gag elements here and there!

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腐女子の特徴捉えすぎて辛い(最高)

Capturing the characteristics of a rotten girl is painful (awesome)

めちゃくちゃ笑いました、これは新しい(笑)とにかく出てくる台詞が身に覚えがあることばかりで、登場人物と気持ちがもうシンクロしまくり！ほんとに声出して笑いました、最高！！！

I laughed insanely, this is new (lol) but all the lines that come up are familiar to me, and the characters and feelings are already in sync! I really laughed out loud, awesome!!!

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二人ともすごくかわいい

They're both so cute

ミノルくんがかわいくてもう…読みながらかわいい〜って言っちゃうくらい受けがかわいいです?二人のこれからもみたいから続きあったら嬉しいな

Minoru-kun is so cute that she says she's already... cute while reading it, so cute? I want to see the two of them from now on, so I'd be happy if they continued

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おすすめです

I recommend

2人ともかわいい、エロは少ないですが話が丁寧でときめきました。受けのかわいいこと。付き合おうって大胆なことを言えるのに自問自答するのが可愛すぎます。

Both of them were cute, and although there wasn't much eroticism, the conversation was polite and exciting. It's a cute thing to receive. It's too cute to ask yourself questions even though you can say bold things about getting along.

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デジタル特装版もあるのでご注意下さい

Please note that there is also a special digital edition

私はこちらではなくデジタル特装版を買いました。デジタル特装版は1020ptとお高いのですが、巻末に10 ページの大萌え大会書き下ろしがプラスされていて、もちの米先生のファンの方は、あちらがオススメかもです。知らない方がいらっしゃるといけないと思い、コメントしました(^o^)

I bought the digital special edition instead of this one. The digital special edition is expensive at 1020 points, but the 10-page Omoe Tournament note was added to the end of the book, so fans of Mochi no Kone Sensei might recommend that one. I thought there must be people I didn't know, so I made a comment (^o^)

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BL業界に殴り込み

Smash into the BL industry

This review contains spoilers. とはいうものの、打席にも立たせてもらえなかった哀しみなんかが、さらりと描かれてて読み応え十分です！煽った側の「好き」の感情が漏れてしまうシーンはほんとにドキドキしました。こういうふうに自分も漏れてしまえばよかったのか…（違うTwitterから飛んできたのですが、この2人の行方をずっとずっと見守っていきたい作品です。

This review contains spoilers. That said, the sorrow of not being able to stand at bat is depicted without hesitation, and it's enough to read! The scene where the feelings of “like” on the incited side leaked out were really exciting. I wonder if I should have leaked out like this... (I flew in from a different Twitter, but it's a work where I want to keep an eye on the whereabouts of these two people for a long time.

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特装版を買うべきだった…後悔中…

I should have bought the special edition... I regret it...

SNSで1話試し読みをした時点ではちょっと気になるくらいでしたが、単行本を購読してみたら期待以上に萌えました。萌えで一筋の涙が流れたのは久しぶりです。しかし描き下ろし10Pが更に掲載されているらしい特装版の方を買うべきでした…通常版を買ったことを後悔しています。グレードアップで追加購入させてほしいです。でもそれはムリそうなので、たぶん時間をあけて買い直すと思います。そのくらい気に入った可愛らしいカップルでした。BL漫画家をめざすというテーマならではのBLあるある、腐女子あるあるが面白くて、少しシュールなノリに結構笑いました。脇役キャラ達も憎めない描写なので読後感が良いです。続きをとてもとても切望します。

I was a little worried when I tried reading episode 1 on SNS, but when I subscribed to the book, I was more excited than I expected. It's been a long time since I shed a single tear from Moe. However, I should have bought the special edition which seems to have further published the 10P drawing... I regret buying the regular edition. I want them to upgrade and buy additional ones. But that doesn't seem possible, so I think I'll probably buy it again after some time. They were such a lovely couple that I loved. The theme of aiming to become a BL manga artist is BL there, there are rotten girls, but it was interesting, and I laughed quite a bit in a slightly surreal way. The supporting characters are also depiction you can't hate, so it feels good after reading it. I'm very, very anxious for the continuation.

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また作品拝見できて感激しています

I'm thrilled to be able to see the work again

前作の後書きでBLをお休みする旨を見てとても残念に思っていた記憶がありました。たまたまちるちるの特集ページで先生のお名前を拝見した時は飛び上がるくらい驚き、またBLに携わって下さっていた事に感激しました。作中の攻めの担当さんがBLファンは作品ではなく作家に着くと言っていましたが、まさにその通りだと思います。もちの米先生の本が買える事が本当に嬉しいです。今作も過去の作品に負けず劣らず、というかむしろ絵柄が大向上されていて、読んでいてとても感情移入しやすくスッと話に入り込む事ができました。ノンケ攻め最高です。これからも先生の事を応援しています。

I remember feeling very sorry when I saw that they were taking a break from BL in the afterword of the previous work. It just so happened that when I saw the teacher's name on Chiruchiru's special page, I was so surprised that I jumped up, and I was also moved by the fact that he was involved in BL. The person in charge of attacking in the story said that BL fans will arrive at the writer rather than the work, and I think that's exactly true. I'm really happy to be able to buy Mochi no Kome sensei's books. This work is no less inferior to past works, or rather, the design was greatly improved, and it was very easy to empathize with it while reading it, and I was able to quickly get into the story. Nonke attacks are the best. I will continue to support my teacher.

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大大大好きな作家さん

A writer I love very much

This review contains spoilers. ずーーっと楽しみに待ってました！テーマからして好きに決まっていた。属性ってひとことで言うの難しいですよね、ミノルがかわいすぎて何とも形容しがたい。作者さまの絵が大好きです。ただ絵が上手な方はたくさんいるのに、なんでこんなに好きなんだろと思ってたのですが、登場人物の気持ちが口の形や目の動きに出る表情にグッときているからなのかもと今回思いました（狂犬のところで気づきました笑）。あと、作者さまのセンチメンタルドレスコードが大大大大大好きなので、また関西弁だ！とそこもグッときました。

This review contains spoilers. I've been looking forward to it for so long! I decided I liked it based on the theme. It's hard to say attributes in a nutshell; Minoru is so cute that it's hard to describe them in any way. I love the artist's paintings. However, there are a lot of people who are good at drawing, so I was wondering why they like them so much, but this time I thought it might be because the characters' feelings were astonished by the shape of their mouths and the expressions they showed when their eyes moved (I noticed it at Mad Dog lol). Also, I really, really like the author's sentimental dress code, so it's Kansai dialect again! and that was a surprise too.

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可愛すぎる！

It's too cute!

This review contains spoilers. 2人の関係性が可愛すぎました！そして絵も可愛すぎる！すぐエロになるわけではなく、段々と気持ちを確かめていく過程がすごく良かったですBL漫画についての話も面白かったです１

This review contains spoilers. The relationship between the two was so cute! And the picture is too cute! It didn't become erotic right away, and the process of gradually checking my feelings was really good. The story about BL comics was also interesting 1

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絵好き！！！話おもしろすぎ！！！

I love painting!!! The story is too interesting!!!

絵がまずタイプです、うっうま...！！！！！！！絵がこんなに好みなのに中身まで面白くてめちゃくちゃ最高でした。2人とも可愛いし、BL漫画家さんの裏も知れてとっってもおもしろかったです！！ぅうう2人ともほんとに可愛すぎ....続きが読みたい.....

First of all, the picture is the type, wow...!!!!! Even though I liked the pictures so much, even the contents were interesting and insanely awesome. Both of them are cute, and it was really interesting to know the secret story behind the BL manga artist!! Wow, they're both really cute... I want to read more...

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面白いです

It's interesting

ギャグ漫画みたいな要素もありつつ、胸きゅん要素もあり、ストーリーも面白くて、ニヤニヤしながら読みました。続編があるかもみたいで、今から楽しみです！

While there are elements like gag comics, there are also heart-wrenching elements, and the story was interesting, and I read it while smirking. It looks like there might be a sequel, so I'm looking forward to it now!

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