Twilight Out of Focus Manga Reviews (P.18)

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Oct 05, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

まるで映画のよう

It's just like a movie

まるで映画のようで素敵な作品でした。一つ一つのコマの美しさ、間の取り方、本当に映画を観ている気分になります。キャラの表情もすごく素敵で読みながらグッときました。攻めの色気、受けの可愛らしさ、全てにおいて最高です！繊細な心の機微を描くのがとてもお上手な方ですね。こちらの作品で初めて知った作家さんですが、他の作品も読んでみようと思います。

It was just like a movie and it was a wonderful film. The beauty of each frame and the way the spacing makes me really feel like I'm watching a movie. The characters' expressions were also really nice, and I was amazed while reading them. The aggressive sex appeal and cuteness of reception are all amazing! You're a very good person at drawing the subtleties of a delicate heart. This is the artist I first met through this work, and I think I'll read other works as well.

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Oct 01, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

まさに映画のよう

Exactly like a movie

カメラのモニター越しの絵が本当に綺麗で色っぽい。「カメラの前では嘘はつけない」というセリフがでてきますが、本当に心の中まで見えるようで、ドキッとします。独特の空気感があり、まさに映画のようでした。

The picture on the camera monitor is really beautiful and sexy. The line “I don't lie in front of the camera” comes up, but it really seems like I can see the inside of my heart, which makes me excited. It had a unique atmosphere, and it was just like a movie.

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キュンの波状攻撃！

Kyun's wave attack!

全部丸ごと表題作。もう最高です！男子校の寮で同室になった映画部の真央と、一匹狼でゲイの寿の物語。お互いの恋愛には干渉しない、絶対手は出さないと約束していたけど、恋心を自覚してしまった2人が気持ちを吐露して身体を重ねて行く様子が、映画のシーンとシンクロして本当に美しい。真央の純粋さや可愛さもイイけれど、とにかく寿の色気が半端ない！特に目線や立ち姿が綺麗で色っぽくてゾクゾクしちゃいます。そんな彼が両思い後は真央に甘々でゾッコンで、ひたすら優しい。エッチシーンも美しいしキュンキュンさせられっ放しです。更にキュンキュンしたい方は、分冊版の方の7巻の番外編をお読み下さい。胸キュンの波状攻撃で心臓をぶち抜かれます！

It's all titled in its entirety. It's already awesome! The story of Mao from the film club, who shared the same room in a boys' school dorm, and Kotobuki, a lone wolf and gay. They promised they wouldn't interfere with each other's romance and never touch each other, but it's really beautiful to see the two people who have become aware of their love express their feelings and stack up their bodies in sync with the movie scene. Mao's purity and cuteness are also nice, but anyway, Kotobuki's sex appeal is amazing! In particular, her eyes and standing figure are beautiful and sexy, and I'm thrilled. After his feelings for both of them, he was sweet and displeased with Mao, and was just plain kind. The sex scenes are also beautiful and make me cringe. If you want to get even more excited, please read the 7-volume extra edition in the split edition. Your heart will be knocked out by a heart-pounding wave attack!

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Sep 26, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

本当に映画のような

It's really like a movie

This review contains spoilers. BLを読んで、こんなに清々しい気持ちになったのもひさしぶりです。とにかく、心の動きがいい。初めての作家さんですが、絵も綺麗で、アングルなども独特で良かったです！高校生の、映画部のお話なのですが、本当にお話全体が映画のような…！攻めに最初彼氏がいますが、恋とも言えない感じだったので、あまり重たい感じはないです！エロもきちんとあります！何度でも読み直したい作品です。

This review contains spoilers. It's been a long time since I read BL and felt so refreshed. Anyway, it's good to move your mind. This is my first time as an artist, and I'm glad that the pictures are beautiful and the angles are unique! It's a film club story about high school students, but the whole story is really like a movie...! I had a boyfriend at the beginning of the attack, but I didn't feel like I was in love, so it doesn't feel too heavy! There's plenty of eroticism too! It's a work I want to reread over and over again.

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Sep 22, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

さくさく読めます

I can read it quickly

軽めの内容で、さくさく読んじゃいました。絵が可愛くて、真央がだんだん可愛くなっていく様子がとても良いです。

The content was light, and I read it quickly. The picture is cute, and it's really nice to see Mao getting cuter and cuter.

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Sep 16, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

すきです?

do you like it?

分冊版で気になっていて購入しました。他のかたのレビューにもあるように、映画のようなストーリーでした。読みはじめてすぐに作品に引き込まれてあっという間に読み終えました。おもしろかった?

I was interested in the split edition, so I bought it. As other people's reviews say, it was a movie-like story. As soon as I started reading it, I was drawn into the work and finished it in no time. was that interesting?

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絵が綺麗

The picture is beautiful

絵が綺麗で良いです。攻めが綺麗過ぎて、子供の頃は受けだったのかな、と思ったら昔から攻めなのか。

The picture is beautiful and nice. The attack was so beautiful, and if you think I was a recipient when I was a kid, I wonder if it was an attack from a long time ago.

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きれいな青春と恋

Beautiful Youth and Love

買ってよかった！きっと優しい気持ちや前向きになりたいときに何度も読み直します。絵もきれい。耽美すぎると最初思ったけど、ストーリーがしっかりしててキャラが派手すぎず、とても肌触りよくキレイな絵を楽しめて自分の中で新発見。大人になった2人も読みたい。

I'm glad I bought it! I'm sure I'll reread it over and over again when I feel kind or want to be positive. The picture is beautiful too. At first I thought it was too aesthetically pleasing, but the story was solid and the characters weren't too flashy, and I was able to enjoy the beautiful pictures that were very pleasant to the touch and made a new discovery within myself. I also want to read the two grown ups.

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Aug 31, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

良かった、、

That was great...

分冊からずっと気になっていてまとまったので即購入！絵が綺麗すぎる、、それにストーリーが映画のような深い内容で面白すぎました！買ってよかったです?

I've been interested in it ever since it was split, and it came together, so I bought it right away! The pictures were so beautiful, and the story was so deep that it was so interesting! Are you glad you bought it?

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絵に引き込まれました

I was drawn into the picture

じゃのめ先生はとにかく絵がキレイです。さらに色っぽいキャラが沢山いるので良いんですよね～。全寮制の男子校、同部屋の二人のストーリーです。分冊番の7巻が後日譚になってます。

Anyway, Janome sensei has beautiful pictures. Furthermore, there are a lot of sexy characters, so that's great. This is a story about two people in the same room at a boys' boarding school. Volume 7 of the split edition is a later book.

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すごくよかった

That was really good

想像以上によかった。寿も真央も色気があって雰囲気があり、映画部の面々も個性的でしっかり描写されていて楽しそう。この先も見てみたい作品。

It was better than I had imagined. Both Kotobuki and Mao have sex appeal and have an atmosphere, and the members of the film club are also unique and well depicted, and seem fun. It's a work I want to see in the future.

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2人のサイズ感が良い

The sense of size for 2 people is good

冒頭のカメラ越しの2人から引き込まれました。映画制作の話だけあって演出がいつにもまして凝っているので見ていて楽しい(真央はカメラの前だと嘘はつけない、とか)。最後のタイトルの意味回収シーンもほんとオシャレでカッコよくてうまいなぁと感心しました。また今作は寿の色気といい、真央のかわいさといい、絵にキラキラ・つやつやが増している！王道タイミングでのエロも多くて、何というかじゃのめさんがさらに進化しそうな予感！！(そしてちょっと寂しい)

I was drawn in by 2 people through the camera at the beginning. It's just a story about film production, and the production is more elaborate than ever, so it's fun to watch (Mao doesn't lie when in front of the camera). I was impressed that the meaning collection scene in the last title was also really stylish, cool, and delicious. Also, this work is called Kotobuki's sex appeal, Mao's cuteness is good, and the sparkle and luster has increased in the picture! There's also a lot of erotica with classic timing, and I have a feeling that Janome is going to evolve even further!! (and kinda lonely)

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映画みたい

It's like a movie

絵柄が独特なので、好き嫌いは分かれるかもしれません。実際私も気になるところはありましたが、それ以上に話やキャラが良かった。なかなか見ないアングルが多くて、本当に映画みたいだなって思いました。今まで恋に落ちた瞬間がわかるような、腑に落ちるようなものが好きでしたが、確かに現実ではいつのまにか好きになることのほうが多いよな〜と、その表現の仕方も綺麗で好きでした。

The pattern is unique, so your likes and dislikes may be mixed. Actually, there were things I was worried about, but even more than that, the story and characters were great. There were a lot of angles that were hard to watch, and I really thought it was like a movie. Until now, I've liked things that make sense so that you can understand the moment you fall in love, but in reality, there are many things you fall in love with before you know it, and I also liked that way of expressing it because it's beautiful.

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Aug 29, 2019 (PST) | Translate to English

大好きです

I love it

大好きな作家さんです。ストーリーもしっかりしていて絵も綺麗です。真央はかわいいし寿はカッコイイです。高校生はいいですね。

This is my favorite writer. The story is solid and the pictures are beautiful. Mao is cute and Kotobuki is cool. High school students are nice.

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すごく好き！

I really like it!

This review contains spoilers. 表紙の寿にズキュンと撃ち抜かれてから（笑）ずっと気になってて、単行本になるの待ってました！！凄く良かったです。いろんな方に読んでもらいたい！皆美形すぎる！市川でさえも妙にカッコいい（笑）映画部の主要メンバー全員個性的で面白い。演劇部2年のホープ本條演じる理想の委員長（受）は納得。確かに理想の受けだね（笑）攻めの寿と受けの真央。寿はエロかっこよくて色気あるし、真央はエロ可愛い！最初寿には付き合ってる彼氏がいるし、3つの約束事があるしで、この2人の恋どうスタートするの？ってちょっと不安になりながら読み始めたのですが、ストーリー、映画の撮影と2人の気持ち（恋）が上手く進行してて面白い。寿の何気ない仕草やじゃれてくる様に真央同様にドキドキ！しっかりエロあり！2人のキスシーンも良い！いちゃつく2人が可愛い。寿を叱る真央のお母さんバージョン、お父さんバージョンもクスッと笑える。真央が途中で食べてる「くまパン」が可愛い（笑）細かいところもちゃんと書かれてあって面白い！映画が軸になる漫画だけに色んなところでカメラを上手く使ったコマがよくて。最後に出てくる表紙のシーンは素敵でした。あぁ、なるほど。だからこの表情なんだ！と。単行本には収録されていない番外編（その後の二人のお話）分冊版7も絶対オススメです。じゃのめ先生の絵ってキレイだけどクセが強い気がしてたのですが、今回とても素敵でした！何回も読み返してます！

This review contains spoilers. I've been curious ever since I was shot through Kotobuki on the cover (laughs), and I've been waiting for it to become a standalone book!! It was really good. I want many people to read it! They're all too beautiful! Even Ichikawa is strangely cool (lol) All of the main members of the film club are unique and interesting. The ideal chairman (acceptance), who plays Hope Honjo in the 2nd year of the drama club, is convinced. It's certainly an ideal reception (laughs); it's the center of the attack's Kotobuki and the reception. Kotobuki is erotic, cool and has sex appeal, and Mao is erotic and cute! Hajime Kotobuki has a boyfriend they are dating, and they have 3 promises, so how do these two start their love? I started reading it while feeling a little uneasy, and it's interesting that the story, shooting of the movie, and the feelings (love) of the two of them progressed well. As excited as Mao is, Kotobuki's casual gestures and playful behavior! There is plenty of eroticism! The kiss scene between the two is good too! The two people flirting are cute. The mom version and dad version of Mao who scolds Kotobuki are also really funny. The “bear bread” that Mao is eating along the way is cute (laughs) and the details are also written properly, so it's interesting! There are often comics that make good use of cameras in various places, only comics centered around movies. The cover scene that came up at the end was wonderful. Ah, I see. That's why I have this look! and. I also definitely recommend the extra edition (the story of the two after that) split edition 7, which is not included in the book. Janome sensei's paintings are beautiful, but I had a strong sense of habit, but this time they were so wonderful! I've reread it over and over again!

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色気ダダ漏れDK

Sex appeal leak DK

This review contains spoilers. 独特の雰囲気を漂わせた、色気のある絵柄の作者さん。出だしの宣誓ビデオのシーンだけで2人のキャラがちゃんと伝わってきて、流石だなーっと思いました。2人ほぼ同時に自覚をしていっているので、拗れずさら〜っと展開していきます。もっと、先生（彼氏）が絡んでくるかと思ったりしましたが、それも特には無く。。兎に角寿が美しいので、終始愛でておりました。

This review contains spoilers. The artist has a sexy pattern that exudes a unique atmosphere. The two characters were properly conveyed just in the scene of the opening oath video, and I thought it was amazing. The two of them are becoming aware almost at the same time, so they will continue to unfold relentlessly. I was wondering if my teacher (boyfriend) would get involved even more, but nothing in particular... Kakuju is a beautiful rabbit, so I loved him from beginning to end.

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いつ、どこで、どのタイミングで

When, where, and at what timing

人を好きになるタイミングって本当にどんな時なんでしょうね。やっぱりこの二人のように、小さいことの積み重ねなんでしょう。一目ぼれってあるけど、この二人のように積み重ねてたどりついたなら、互いを尊重しあいながら、きっといつまでも続いていくんだと思う。絵もとてもきれいで引きこまれました。

I wonder what kind of time it really is when you fall in love with someone. After all, like these two people, it's probably an accumulation of small things. We fell in love at first sight, but if they build up like these two, I'm sure they'll continue forever while respecting each other. The picture was also very beautiful and I was drawn in.

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２人のキラキラした関係性が良いー！

The sparkling relationship between the two is great!

一年間同室で友人のポジションで積み重ねてきた２人の関係性が、お互いの領域には踏み込まないとしながらも、互いに信頼を育てていっていつのまにか恋になり、それに気付き戸惑いすれ違いつつ想いを繋げる過程がとっても素敵に描かれてます！寿が「真央が足んなかったかも」て甘えるシーンや、彼氏との別れ話の時に「真央の待つ部屋に早く帰ろう」と思うシーンは、寿の中で真央の存在が大事になってるんだなあと。部活の映画制作に絡めたストーリーや、シーン展開コマ割り構図なども効果的で、高校生らしい青さと不器用さと真っ直ぐさがキラキラとして脇役含めたキャラも魅力的！えっちも高校生なのに？！ってくらい色気あってラブくて良かったです〜。

The relationship between the two, who have been in the same room for a year in the position of friends, is depicted very nicely as the process of developing mutual trust and falling in love before they know it, and even though they don't step into each other's territory, they notice it and connect their feelings while being bewildered and confused! In scenes where Kotobuki is spoiled by saying “maybe Mao wasn't enough,” and scenes where she thought “let's go back to Mao's room as soon as possible” when talking about her breakup with her boyfriend, Mao's presence is important in Kotobuki. The story involved in the production of the club activity film and the scene development frame division composition are also effective, and the characters, including supporting characters, are sparkling in their blue, clumsiness, and straightness typical of high school students! even though they're high school students too?! I'm glad they had so much sex appeal and were so lovable.

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絵が綺麗

The picture is beautiful

This review contains spoilers. じゃのめ先生の絵が独特で綺麗で大好きです。イラストの構図や人物のアングル？っていうのかな、が素敵でかっこよくて惚れ惚れします。あと、真央がカメラに向かって寿に自分の気持ち言うシーンが個人的に可愛いすぎてたまりません。えちシーンもあるんですが絶妙に見えないっていう先生の画力！

This review contains spoilers. I love Janome sensei's paintings because they are unique and beautiful. The composition of the illustration or the angle of the person? I wonder if that is wonderful and cool, and I fall in love with it. Also, the scene where Mao talks to Kotobuki to the camera is personally so cute that it's irresistible. The teacher's drawing ability is that there are also scenes that don't look exquisite!

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映画みたい

It's like a movie

絵は、独特で魅力的です。映画を作る内容ですが、漫画自体が映画の様な印象。攻めはカッコイイし、セクシーです。出てくるキャラ、みんな個性的で愛すべきキャラ達でした。

The picture is unique and fascinating. The content is about making a movie, but the impression is that the manga itself is like a movie. Attacks are cool and sexy. All of the characters that appeared were unique and lovable.

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