What's Wrong with Being Innocent? Manga Reviews (P.57)

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文句なしの五つ星！

An undisputed five star!

初！？BL漫画なの！！嘘でしょ！？どこからどう見てもプロの中でも相当うまい！んで話も読みやすいし、恋に変わってく心情もめちゃわかるし、トータルでレベル高い！！2人のイチャイチャえちえちもてんこ盛りで、まるまる1冊楽しかったです！途中から受けくんの顔とかほくろの位置がヒプ〇イの三郎ちゃんにしか見えなくて、それもまた私的には美味しかった～。これから作家買い決定です！てか、、きっとどっかで普通に描いてた人だよね…どこをどう見てもめちゃくちゃうまい！！何回も読んでます！！

first time!? It's a BL comic!! that's a lie isn't it!? No matter where you look at it, it's pretty good even among professionals! So the story is easy to read, and I really understand the feelings of turning into love, and the total level is high!! There was so much flirtation between the two of them, and it was a whole lot of fun! Only the hippie Saburo-chan could see the face and the location of the mole on the way, and that was also delicious for me personally. Now it's time to decide to buy an artist! Heck... it must be someone who drew normally somewhere... it's insanely good no matter where or how you look at it!! I've read it so many times!!

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王道のストーリーを最後まで読ませる絵力

Picture power to make you read a royal story until the end

全206p初コミックスとの事本人様Twitter拝見して購入しましたタチ専デリの攻(リョウタ)✕奔放に見られるが経験なし！初体験に夢見る受(はじめ)という本当にＢＬ王道のストーリーなんですが最後まで飽きさせない画力が凄いです。1コマ1コマのキャラのキラキラな表情やHなシーンの身体のバランス等本当に初コミックスなのか！と驚くばかりですしっかりとした画力と華やかな表情の絵力と今後の作品も読みたいと思わせる作者様でした

This is the first comic in all 206p, I saw it on Twitter and bought it by Tachi Exclusive Deli Attack (Ryota) ✕ I can watch it unrestrained, but I have no experience! It's really a BL royal road story called First Experience Dream (Hajime), but the drawing power that won't let you get bored until the end is amazing. Is this really the first comic about the sparkling expressions of the characters in each frame and the balance of their bodies in erotic scenes! It's amazing. It was an author with solid drawing power and gorgeous expression, and made me want to read future works

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最高オブ最高。

The best of the best.

今まで数え切れないくらいBL購入していますが初レビューです。興奮が抑え切れず読み終えてすぐレビューしたいと思った作品は初めてです！！！！一言だけ言わせてください。しぐれ先生やばいです。なんでしょうこのドキドキ感ともどかしさが心地よい感覚は。エロもしっかりあり206p全てメイン2人です。はじめが可愛いすぎる。諒太の気持ちが入りすぎてウルウル。本当に最高すぎます。今までで一番終わり方まで満足の作品。少女漫画を読んで悶えるような感覚にさえ陥りました笑好きです！！エロもたくさんありながらこんな感覚になれるなんてめちゃくちゃ幸せすぎて…続編希望:( ´•̥ω•̥ `):

I've bought countless BLs until now, but this is my first review. This is my first work that I couldn't contain my excitement and wanted to review as soon as I finished reading it!!! Let me just say one word. Shigure sensei is terrible. What is a pleasant feeling of excitement and frustration. There is also plenty of eroticism, and all 206p are the main 2 people. The beginning is too cute. Ryota's feelings got in so much that it was amazing. It's really too awesome. This is the most satisfying work until now, until the end. I even felt like I was in agony reading shoujo manga lol I love it!! I'm insanely happy to be able to feel like this even though there's so much erotica... I hope for a sequel: ('••`):

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めっちゃいい！！

it's so good!!

This review contains spoilers. 所謂恋心に気がついてない系のお話です。エッチも日常も拗れも上手くまとまっておりとてもよかったです！！！

This review contains spoilers. This is a story about what is called a type of love that is unaware. It was so nice that sex, everyday life, and relentlessness were so well organized!!!

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胸きゅんがとまらない満足感

An unstoppable sense of satisfaction

This review contains spoilers. 絵が何より綺麗ですし！ストーリーもよみやすくて甘さに飽きることもなかったです！この2人のイチャイチャは永遠にみられる気がします?お幸せに！

This review contains spoilers. Above all else, the picture is beautiful! The story was easy to read and I never got tired of the sweetness! I feel like these two will be able to flirt forever? Be happy!

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めっちゃ良かった

That was really good

発売早々夜中の3時にレビュー36件て何事？と思い試し読みをして我慢出来ずに買ってしまいました。納得。すごく良かった。エロも良いけど2人のケナゲさ純情さにきゅんときます。面白かった！

What do you mean with 36 reviews early on sale at 3:00 in the middle of the night? I thought of it as a trial reading and couldn't stand it and bought it. I'm convinced. That was really good. The eroticism is good too, but I'm amazed by the naivety and innocence of the two. That was interesting!

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とにかく最高

Anyway, it's awesome

二人のビジュアルから、内容や細かいキュンポイント何から何までとにかく今まで読んだ作品の中で史上最高にドツボでした。これからの作品も楽しみにしてます…！！

From the visuals of the two, to the content and detailed points from what to what, it was the most thorough in history among the works I've read so far. I'm also looking forward to future works...!!

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絵が綺麗

The picture is beautiful

This review contains spoilers. サンプルを見てとても好みの絵柄だったので購入。王道なストーリーではあるけど、主人公がかわいくて共感できるタイプの子でした。女の子っぽい受けが苦手な人には向いていないかも。そもそも攻めはなぜこのバイトを…という疑問はありつつ、幸せな２人をもっと見たいです。

This review contains spoilers. I saw the sample and it was a design I really liked, so I bought it. It's a classic story, but the main character was cute and the type of kid I could relate to. Maybe it's not for people who don't like being treated like girls. I want to see more of these two happy people, even though there is a question about why the attack is this part-time job... in the first place.

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純情万歳

Hurray for the Pure Heart

はぁぁぁ〜っっ！！！最高すぎました。純情万歳です。大天才すぎて始終キュンキュンしながら読み進めました。。Twitterで偶然流れてきて絵が綺麗だなと思い購入させて頂いたのですが、ストーリーが甘々のトロトロでほんのりビターのハッピーエンドというドンピシャすぎて大満足です。気が早いですが続編を出していただければ泣いて喜びます（ ; ; ）♡

huh huh!!! It was too awesome. Long live pure love. I was such a genius that I read on with a sense of excitement from beginning to end.. It happened to be played on Twitter and I bought it because I thought the picture was beautiful, but I was very satisfied because the story was so sweet and the happy ending with a slight bitterness. It's quick, but I'll cry and be happy if you put out a sequel (;;) ♡

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最高

highest

最高にえろくてかわいくてかっこよくて本当に最高でした。Twitterで偶然知れたの幸運でした(T_T)続編出たら絶対に買います！！

It was really awesome because it was so beautiful, cute, and cool. I was lucky to know it by chance on Twitter (T_T) I'll definitely buy it when the sequel comes out!!

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最高すぎました

It was too great

This review contains spoilers. めちゃくちゃ絵が綺麗でお話も可愛いです！これは受けちゃんが可愛いお話だろうと思って買ったら、攻めちゃんも可愛いかった、、、可愛いカップルすぎて癒されました。ありがとうございます₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄⌂‾᷅)̧̢ ₎₎

This review contains spoilers. The pictures are so beautiful and the story is so cute! I thought this would be a cute story about Uke-chan, and when I bought it, I was soothed that Attack was cute too... they were such a cute couple. Thank you ()

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最&高of最強(*⁰▿⁰*)

Highest & highest of strongest (**)

とりあえずまずなによりはじめが可愛いすぎてムリ(*⁰▿⁰*)絵も綺麗で読みやすいし、なかなかエチシーンも満載で！！！！！甘々お好きな人はとりあえず読め！！となる作品ですね(//∇//)続編でないかなー！！！

Anyway, first of all, the beginning was so cute (**) the pictures were beautiful and easy to read, and there were so many scenes!!!! If you really like it, read it anyway!! It's a work that becomes (////) I wonder if it's a sequel!!!

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ハッピー?

happy?

ツイッターに作者さまが一話を投稿されていて、あまりの面白さ続きが気になりすぐに購入してしまいました。めちゃくちゃ面白かった。きゅんもあり、ちょっと笑えて安心感のある作画。買って損なし！続きやスピンオフにも期待したい❤

The author posted the first episode on Twitter, and I was worried that it would continue to be fun, so I bought it right away. It was insanely interesting. There is also Kyun, and the drawing is a bit laughable and reassuring. Buy it without loss! I would like to look forward to the continuation and spin-offs ❤

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文句なしの★5

No complaints ★ 5

This review contains spoilers. 画力★★★★★、テンポ★★★★★、エロ★★★★★、どれを取っても文句なしの★5。文句なしのデビューコミックスでした。外見で遊んでいると判断されがちだけど、実は初体験に夢見てる受けと、お仕事はきっちり系のデリボーイ攻め。一見するとヤ◯チン×めんどくさ処女だけれど、蓋を開けてみれば可愛さしかない、恋愛初心者×恋愛初心者の大学生同士のお話でした。普段の自分なら「この二人はどのタイミングでお互いのことを好きになったの？」と疑問に思うところも、圧倒的な画力とテンポで少しも気になることなくあっという間に読了してしまいました。そして、キャラデザって大事だなあと改めて実感……。見た目が好みだとストーリーに多少の荒があっても視覚から凌駕してしまうんですよね（私だけ……？）デリボーイの方はその後どうしたのかとか、キャラ濃そうな先輩のその後とか、まだまだ読みたい話、掘り下げて欲しい話はたくさんありますが、こちらもコミックスになるまで3年かかったということなので、ご自身のペースで執筆を続けていただけたら幸いです。すっかりファンになってしまったので、また出会えたら嬉しいな。

This review contains spoilers. Drawing power ★★★★★, tempo ★★★★★, and eroticism ★★★★★, there are no complaints about ★ 5. It was an undisputed debut comic. It's easy to be judged that they're playing around with their appearance, but in fact, they are attacking Deliboy whose job is a perfect match between his first experience and his dream. At first glance, it was a story about college students who are beginners in love x beginners in love, but when you open the lid, they are nothing but cute. If it were my normal self, “When did these two fall in love with each other?” Even though I was wondering, I read it in no time without worrying at all due to its overwhelming drawing power and tempo. Then, I realized once again that character design is important... If you like the way it looks, it will surpass you visually even if the story is a little rough (just me...?) There are still many more stories I want to read and delve into, such as what happened to Deriboy after Senpai, who seems to have a strong character, but this one also took 3 years until it became a comic, so I would be happy if you could continue writing at your own pace. I've completely become a fan, so I'd be happy if we met again.

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とってもきゅんとしました

It was very cool

Twitterで見かけて、即購入しました。初めてレビューと言うものをします…笑一見かっこいい攻めだけど、受けとはまた違った純情さがとてもかわいく感じました。受けは終始かわいくて、すごくすきです。えっちも色っぽくてよかったです。お洋服なんかもイマドキっぽくてお洒落に感じました！笑続編あったら読みたいです！

I saw it on Twitter and bought it right away. I'm doing something called a review for the first time... lol it's a cool attack at first glance, but I felt that the innocence, which was different from receiving, was so cute. The reception was cute from beginning to end, and I really like it. It was nice that they were sexy too. The clothes were also imadoki-like and I felt so stylish! lol I'd love to read it if there's a sequel!

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めちゃ面白かったです！

It was so much fun!

This review contains spoilers. 初単行本おめでとうございます！と言うか初だとは！作画も綺麗で、はじめ君と諒太君が最初の出会いは、はじめ君にとっては、ショックが大きい物で、夢描いていた処女喪失のシチュエーションとは、かけはなれていましたが、度重なる偶然と、諒太君が自分の気持ちに気づかずにいて、ある事で心と裏腹な発言をしてしまい、はじめ君を傷つけてしまって。。。はじめ君に拒否られてしまい、落ち込んでる姿も可愛く見えてしまいました。でもって、諒太君の先輩が「純情」って言った時「うんうん」と頷いてしまった。凄く楽しめました。書き下ろしで、肩に手をやたら置きたくなる動作を諒太君がやってるのをググルはじめ君可愛かった！

This review contains spoilers. Congratulations on your first book! Or rather, it's my first time! The drawing is also beautiful, and the first encounter between Hajime-kun and Ryota-kun was a big shock for you at first, and the situation of losing your virginity was a big shock to you, but due to repeated coincidences, Ryota was unaware of his own feelings, and for some reason, he made statements contrary to my heart, which hurt you at first... At first, I was rejected by you, and my depressed appearance also looked cute. But when Ryota's senior said “pure heart,” he nodded “yeah yeah.” I really enjoyed it. I wrote it down, and I started googling Ryota doing movements that made me want to put my hands on my shoulders, and you were so cute!

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2人とも可愛い

Both of them are cute

This review contains spoilers. 体の関係バンバンあるのに純情になってく2人が可愛くて仕方ないですね…速攻で買いにきてよかったです。嫉妬とか…もっともっと見たいので是非続きを…！

This review contains spoilers. It can't be helped that the two people who are getting pure love even though they have a physical relationship are so cute... I'm glad they came to buy them in haste. Jealousy... I want to watch more and more, so be sure to continue...!

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最高！！

the best!!

か、か、可愛い、、、！！！！受けも攻めもどっちも超可愛い。なのにしっかりエロい。エロと胸キュンってこんなに両立するもんでしたっけ？？絵も綺麗だしストーリーも丁寧で、1冊とは思えない満足度でした。これで初コミックなんて信じられないです、、超オススメ、、

or... cute...!!! Both receiving and attacking are super cute. But it's definitely erotic. were eroticism and heart-pounding things so compatible?? The pictures were beautiful and the story was careful, and I was so satisfied that I couldn't believe it was just one book. I can't believe this is my first comic... super recommended...

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ほんとよかった！！！！

I'm really glad!!!

This review contains spoilers. Twitterで見かけすぐに買いに来ました！もう受けくんがとにかく可愛くて、えっちでした、、今まで色々な漫画を見て来ましたが、なんとゆうか指の書き方？とか色々綺麗で見入ってしまいました? 何で好きになったのか？とか攻めの事とか詳しくは書かれていませんが、続編など期待してます！もっと色々な方に知られて欲しい作品です！

This review contains spoilers. I saw it on Twitter and immediately came to buy it! I've already received it, but it was just so cute, it was eccentric... I've watched a lot of comics until now, but what kind of way to write fingers? did you look at a lot of things so beautifully? Why did you fall in love with it? There are no details about attacking, etc., but I'm looking forward to a sequel! I want more people to know about this work!

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全人類におすすめしたい。

I would recommend it to all mankind.

まず、初コミックスってほんとですか？！！！！！！先生は天才ですか？！！！もうほんっっとに良かったです·····。。攻めが無意識のうちに嫉妬しちゃう所なんてもう萌でしかなかったです。そして絵が綺麗！！！！絶対後悔させません！！読んでください！！

First, is the first comic really?!!!!! Is your teacher a genius?!!! I'm really glad... There was nothing but cute about attacking where I unknowingly became jealous. And the picture is beautiful!!! You won't regret it!! Please read it!!

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