What's Wrong with Being Innocent? Manga Reviews (P.54)

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とんでもねぇきゅんきゅんをありがとう?

thank you so much Kyun Kyun?

初コミックおめでとうございます！！もう本当にきゅんきゅんが止まりません…！！！！！天才です。終始「甘酢っぺぇなぁ」と内なるおばさんが呟いておりました。あと話のテンポもよく、クスッと笑えるコマもあり、「かわええわぁ…」とこちらは内なるおじさんが呟いておりました。あと！忘れてはいけないエロですが、こちらも天才！！描写がリアルで、身体のしなり方が最高です！！興奮が冷めず、レビュー書かせていただきました！！！！続きあれば是非読ませていただきたい！！これからも2人に幸あれ！！！！！！

Congratulations on your first comic!! I really can't stop Kyun Kyun...!!!! He's a genius. From beginning to end, my inner aunt muttered, “That's sweet and sour.” Also, the tempo of the story was good, and there were scenes that made me laugh out loud, and the inner old man muttered “Wow wow...” later! Don't forget it's erotic, but this one is also genius!! The depiction is realistic, and the way the body bends is the best!! I couldn't let my excitement cool down and I wrote a review!!! If there are more, I definitely want to read them!! Good luck to both of you from now on!!!

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Twitterから飛んできました。

I flew in from Twitter.

こんなに絵が綺麗でストーリーもしっかりしてて言うことないです。両思い最高です。続編出てほしです。

The pictures are so beautiful and the story is so solid that I have nothing to say. Both feelings are the best. I want a sequel to come out.

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すき

plough

あ～すごい良かったです～！！余韻に浸ってます。絵がキレイって理由だけで購入したんですがお話も面白いし、登場人物のひとつひとつの表情がとても魅力的でした。もっと続きが読みたいので続編希望です！！

Ah~ that was really good ~!! I'm immersed in the afterglow. I bought it just because the picture was beautiful, but the story was interesting, and the expressions of each character were very attractive. I want to read more, so I hope for a sequel!!

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ヤバすぎる！！！

that's too dangerous!!!

ほんっとにキュンキュンしました...！！こんなにキュンキュンしたの久しぶり！少女漫画かよ！！！(絶対そう)2人の心情の変化を描くのがとても上手だし、何より絵が上手！！！デビュー作でこれはもう期待の星でしかないですね、、、これからの作品も買いますー！！！

I was really excited...!! I haven't been this excited in a long time! is it a girls' manga!!! (Absolutely) They are very good at drawing changes in their feelings, and above all, they are good at drawing!!! It's my debut work, and this is nothing but a star I'm looking forward to... I'm buying future works too!!!

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めちゃくちゃ好き

I like it insanely

Twitterで見つけて飛んできました！キュンキュンしたし、かわいいし、最高でした！！！是非沢山の人に読んでほしいです

I found it on Twitter and flew by! It was hilarious, cute, and awesome!!! I definitely want a lot of people to read it

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あいや～～～～～～～～～～

Ayeah~~~~~~~~~~~~

This review contains spoilers. あいや～～～～～～よかった！！！！初コミックスおめでとうございます&この世にこの漫画を産んでくれてありがとうございます…表紙と試し読みと高評価で買ってみるか～と軽い気持ちで購入したんですが、好きすぎて普通に2回読み直して今レビュー書いております…コスパよすぎん？みんな買お？理想の脱処女シチュエーションを夢みる受けが、タチ専デリを頼んで脱処女するが、ふたりは実は同級生で…という話。攻のビジュがよい！！！いや、受のビジュもよい！！！！かわいい！！！！！絵がとにかくうまいし、えろも多く、胸がぎゅっとなるところもあり、読者の感情を揺さぶるのがうまい！！あと表情がとてもよきでした。執着攻の片鱗がチラチラ見えてもう大興奮ですよ…！！続編読みたいよぉ～！！！嫉妬する諒太とそれをよしよしするはじめがみてぇよぉ～！キスマつけまくって牽制する諒太みてぇよぉ～！はじめに怒られろ～！！！

This review contains spoilers. Aaah~~~~~~ that was great!!!! Congratulations on your first comic & thank you for giving birth to this comic... I bought it with a light feeling that I would buy the cover, trial reading, and high ratings, but I liked it so much that I reread it 2 times and now I'm writing a review... isn't the cost performance too good? everyone buys it? The story is that Mechi, who dreams of an ideal situation to get out of her virginity, asks for a Tachi-only deli to get rid of her virginity, but the two are actually classmates... The attack visuals are good!!! No, the reception visuals are good too!!! cute!!!! The pictures are just so good, there are lots of erotica, and there are places that make my heart feel tight, and it's great at shaking up readers' emotions!! Also, her expression was very nice. I can see a glimpse of their obsession and I'm already so excited...!! I want to read the sequel!!! Watch Jealous Ryota and Hajime, who is good at it! Watch Ryota restraint him by putting on lots of kisses! Be scolded first!!!

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めっちゃ好き！

I love it so much!

試し読みから一気に引き込まれて、買って良かった！！！！絵がとっても綺麗で可愛いし、オシャレだし、ちょっと笑っちゃうとこもあるし、えっちだし素敵な作品に出会えて良かったです！これからの作品も楽しみです！

I was drawn in all at once from the trial reading, and I'm glad I bought it!!! The pictures are so beautiful and cute, they are fashionable, and there are places that make me laugh a little bit, so I'm glad I came across such a wonderful work! I'm also looking forward to future works!

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純情！エロい！

pure love! erotic!

まずは絵が美しすぎる。特に受けの顔が好みドンピシャです。初コミックスとは思えないくらい丁寧なストーリー、テンポも丁度良くて読みやすい。あとエロい、、とにかくエロいです。買ってよかった~！次の作品も楽しみにしております

First, the picture is too beautiful. I particularly like the face of acceptance. The story is so careful that you wouldn't think it was your first comic, and the tempo is just right, and it's easy to read. Also, it's erotic... it's erotic anyway. I'm glad I bought it! I'm also looking forward to the next work

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初コミックス⁈

First comic!

初コミックスとは思えないくらいよかった作品！内容は王道でしたがえちシーンも濃厚だし、私としては王道でもキャラクターによっても変わってくるしよかったなぁと思います！一癖あるキャラや一悶着あってほしい人には向かないかも？

This work was so good that I didn't think it was my first comic! The content was royal, but the scene was also rich, and for me, I think it was great that both the royal road and the characters changed! Maybe it's not suitable for characters with a habit or for people who want them to be stuck in agony?

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百戦錬磨のデリ/ヘル×夢見がち処女の純愛

Deli from Hundred Battles Refinement: Hell x Pure Love by the Dreaming Maiden

This review contains spoilers. デリ/ヘルバイトの同級生・諒太×夢見がちな処女・はじめ。遊んでそうな見た目に反して甘く優しく抱かれる初Hを夢見るはじめは、ついに脱処女を決意してデリ/ヘルを依頼。が、やってきた諒太に理想のシチュエーションを語る間もなく好き勝手に抱かれてしまう。二度目で念願の理想のHを体験し、結局そのまま関係を持ち続ける二人の純情な恋。もうめーーっちゃ可愛かった！百戦錬磨の諒太が無自覚にハマって、ナチュラルに恋人感出してくるの最高にいい。流され続けるはじめだけどそんなに鈍くなくて、大事なところはきっちり締める芯の強さに好感しかなかった。都会に染まりきってないのも可愛すぎる。絵が綺麗だし体もエロいし、ファッションも可愛くてクオリティ高すぎな初コミックスで大満足！最強に可愛い二人でした。表情がいいな〜。

This review contains spoilers. Deli/Hellbite's classmate Ryota x Hajime, a virgin who tends to dream. At first, she dreams about Hatsu-H, where she is sweetly hugged, contrary to her playful appearance, and finally decides to get rid of her virginity and asks Deli/Hell. However, soon after talking about the ideal situation to Ryota who has arrived, they are hugged without permission. An innocent love between two people who experienced their long-awaited ideal H for the second time, and eventually continue to have a relationship as it is. It was so cute already! It's great that Ryota from One Hundred Battles Renma is unknowingly addicted to it and naturally feels like a lover. It was the beginning that kept getting swept away, but it wasn't that sluggish, and the only important thing was that I liked the strength of the core that tightens tightly. It's also too cute that it's not steeped in the city. The pictures are beautiful, the body is erotic, the fashion is cute, and the quality is too high, and I am very satisfied! They were the two most adorable people. You have a nice expression.

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素晴らしい！

great!

絵がとにかく上手できれい！お話もよくある話なのにぐいぐい読ませる力量はすごいと思います。初コミックスということで今後がとても楽しみな作家さんです。最近レビューは書いていなかったのですが、思わず書き込んでしまいました。眼福でした！

Anyway, the picture is so good and beautiful! Even though the story is a common story, I think the ability to make you read it so well is amazing. This is my first comic, so I'm really looking forward to the future. I hadn't written a review recently, but I did. It was a blessing!

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相当面白い

It's pretty interesting

かわいい、きゅん、えろ、全部あって受けのキャラが最高〜！購入してよかったです！好きな先生の1人となりました。

The cute, kyun, and ero characters that have them all are the best! I'm glad I bought it! I became one of my favorite teachers.

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評価が足りませんよ！！？☆100万です！

There aren't enough reviews!!? ☆ It's 1 million!!

This review contains spoilers. いてもたってもいられず、初めてレビューというものを投稿します。Twitterで作者様のツイートでお見かけしてお試しを読ませて頂きました。そこで凄まじく衝撃を受けました、まず圧倒的な画力とドンピシャすぎる美しすぎる絵柄、何より、諒太くんのビジュアルから性格までドストライクすぎて気がついたら購入ページに進んでいました。画面のひとつひとつにリアルさがあって、キャラの表情や空気感が伝わってきて素晴らしいエロスとドキドキを終始感じました。タイトルである、「純情」が、一見はじめくんのことかと思いきや、紛れもなくそれは諒太くんのことだった……(昇天)無自覚に恋になっていく過程が素晴らしく愛おしいです。もう、最高の二文字です。お試し読んでみて、いいなと思った方、絶対買って最後まで読むことを全力で推奨します。作者様の次作がとても楽しみです。

This review contains spoilers. I can't help but post a review for the first time. I saw it on the author's tweet on Twitter and read the trial. I was terribly shocked there, and first of all, the overwhelming drawing power and the pattern was too beautiful; above all, everything from Ryota's visuals to his personality was too much of a strike, and when I noticed it, I proceeded to the purchase page. Each screen had realism, and the characters' expressions and atmosphere were conveyed, and I felt wonderful eros and excitement from beginning to end. At first glance, I thought the title, “Junjo,” was about Hajime-kun, but unmistakably it was about Ryota-kun... (Ascension) The process of unknowingly falling in love is wonderful and adorable. Those are already the best two letters. If you try it out and think it's good, I definitely recommend that you buy it and read it until the end. I'm really looking forward to the author's next work.

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最高

highest

Twitterで見かけて絵が綺麗だったので、試しで購入してみたら大当たり！デビュー作ということであまり期待は正直していませんでしたが、最高でした?

I saw it on Twitter and the picture was beautiful, so when I tried it out, it was a big hit! I honestly wasn't expecting much since it was my debut film, but was it awesome?

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天才です

I'm a genius

ストーリー、画力、キャラ、話の流れ、エロ、全てにおいて文句なしです！！！新人と聞いてびっくりしました。受けのはじめは超可愛いし、攻めのりょうたがどんどん受けに執着していくのもキュンキュンが止まりませんでした(TT)2人が可愛すぎてすれ違いももはや愛おしい、、、全てが最高なので是非読んで欲しいです(TT)

There are no complaints about the story, drawing power, characters, story flow, and eroticism!! I was surprised to hear that he was a rookie. The beginning of receiving is super cute, and the attacking Ryota became more and more obsessed with receiving, and I couldn't stop being excited (TT) 2 people are so cute that they pass by and they're already adorable... everything is awesome, so I definitely want you to read it (TT)

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かわいい！

cute!

はじめちゃんがめちゃくちゃかわいかったー！！諒太はかっこよかったなぁ。あの自分の気持ちに気づいてない感じ、良いですね。ドタバタするはじめちゃんずっと見てられる。絵もキレイだし、エチもたくさんあって、テンポも良くて非常に良かったです！！デビューコミックスなんですね！すごい！恋人になった後の2人を見たいので続編希望です！あと、諒太の先輩1番さんも気になる！

Hajime was so cute!! Ryota was so cool. It's nice to feel like I'm not aware of my own feelings. I can watch the slapstick Hajime the whole time. The pictures were beautiful, there was a lot of etiquette, and the tempo was good, which was very nice!! It's the debut comic! That's amazing! I want to see the two after they become lovers, so I hope for a sequel! Also, I'm curious about Ryota's senior No.1!

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作者さんのTwitterから！

From the author's Twitter!

2人とも可愛くてとても良かったです！久しぶりのBLだったのですが、話を面白く絵もきれいで楽しめました。

They were both so cute and so nice! It was my first BL in a long time, and the story was interesting and the pictures were beautiful, so I enjoyed it.

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今後が楽しみな作家さん！

A writer who is looking forward to the future!

Twitterで試し読みが流れてきて気になっており、0時に購入！本当に初コミックスですか！？という作画の美しさと物語の無理のない展開の仕方。とても良かったです。始まり方や設定が同じような作品はよくあるんですが、物語の展開のさせ方で作家さんの力量が出ると個人的に思っています。この作品はよくある話をひとひねりさせて、気持ちの動き、物語の起承転結しっかりしていてとても引き込まれました。最後の終わり方が少し物足りなさを感じたので、番外編で少しでもいいのでその後の2人を見てみたいです！次の作品も期待しております！

The trial reading came up on Twitter and I was curious, so I bought it at 0:00! Is this really your first comic!? The beauty of the drawing and the reasonable way the story unfolds. It was very good. There are many works with similar beginnings and settings, but I personally think that the artist's ability comes out in the way the story unfolds. This work gave me a twist on a common story, and I was very drawn in because the movement of feelings and the beginning and transition of the story were solid. I felt that the way it ended at the end was a bit unsatisfactory, so I'd like to take a look at the 2 people after that because even a little bit is fine in the extra edition! I'm also looking forward to the next work!

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Twitterで見かけて

See me on Twitter

思わず購入しました。お話も、とんとん拍子でリズムよく進み、とても読みやすかったです。受けのこがとてもかわいかったです。

I bought it without thinking. The story also progressed at a rapid pace and with a good rhythm, and it was very easy to read. The receptacle was so cute.

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ドキドキする作品

A thrilling work

純愛とエロ同時に楽しめるし、ドキドキもあってとても好きになりました！可愛すぎるし、妄想がすごい膨らみます

I can enjoy pure love and eroticism at the same time, and it's exciting, so I really fell in love with it! It's too cute, and my fantasies expand so much

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