Over-Cumming Writer's Block Manga Reviews (P.66)

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Mar 29, 2017 (PST) | Translate to English

笑える〜っ

that's laughable!

This review contains spoilers. ヒロインがガバっと思いっきり脱いだ後の下着姿に笑えたな〜( ´∀｀) 私の中学生一年くらいの時を思い出し懐かしさを感じましたよ。スポーツブラにおばちゃんパンツ最高 (笑)ストーリーは良くありそうなんだけど、この作者の先生の絵が可愛くて作品にとても引き込まれます。続きが楽しみです！

This review contains spoilers. I was able to laugh at how the heroine looked in her underwear after taking it off so fast ~ ('∀`) It reminded me of when I was in my first year of junior high school and felt nostalgic. Sports bras and old lady pants are the best (lol) There seem to be a lot of stories, but this author's teacher's picture is so cute that I'm really drawn into the work. I'm looking forward to the continuation!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Mar 28, 2017 (PST) | Translate to English

面白い

interesting

This review contains spoilers. 今後、期待できそうなストーリーとそれに合った絵柄の作家さんです。主人公のマイペース感がキャラ立ちしてて面白いです。この先、どう発展していくか楽しみです。

This review contains spoilers. He is an artist with a story that we can look forward to in the future and a pattern that matches it. The main character's sense of self-paced character stands up and is interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops in the future.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Mar 28, 2017 (PST) | Translate to English

一人で声だして笑ってしまいました!!

I spoke up alone and laughed!!

面白いですね、同じような内容の作品は沢山ありますが。この作品は読みながらエッチにきゅんって感じながらも笑ってしまいました。早く続きが読みたいです。

It's interesting, there are many works with similar content. While reading this work, I laughed even though I felt that it was naughty. I want to read more soon.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Feb 11, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

ようやく！

finally!

This review contains spoilers. 藤縞さんがお祖母様の魂胆に気付きましたね！２人の誤解が早く解けるといいけど…でも、問題なのは　りおが藤縞さんに全然悩みを打ち明けられないところだよなぁ…自立して藤縞さんを支えられるような女性＝なにも話さない、心配させないってどうなんだろ。ちょっと端的すぎる考えだよ　りお結果　藤縞さんは不安になって何度も何か悩みはあるのか聞いてくれてるのに…ぽっと出の男には悩みを打ち明ける始末…りおの藤縞さんと対等じゃないっていうコンプレックスから全て来てると思うんだけど、そこを藤縞さんが解きほぐしてあげれるかだね。早く２人の幸せがみたいな

This review contains spoilers. Fujijima-san noticed her grandmother's courage! It would be nice if the misunderstandings between the two could be resolved quickly... but the problem is that Hario can't confide her worries at all to Mr. Fujijima-san... how about a woman who can stand on her own and support Fujijima-san = she doesn't talk about anything or make her worry. It's a bit too simple an idea, but as a result, Fujishima-san became uneasy and asked me many times if I had any problems... I think they all came from a complex where they confided their worries to the guy who came out loud... I think they all come from a complex where Rio's Fujijima-san isn't equal, but I wonder if Fujishima-san can unravel that. I want to see the happiness of the two of them soon

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jan 10, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English

わたし的TL金字塔

My TL pyramid

This review contains spoilers. とても大好きな作品です。私がTL沼にどっぷりとハマるきっかけになった作品です。初めは主人公に翻弄されながらも、徐々に惹かれていく藤縞さんに微笑ましくもハラハラして。晴れて恋人となった二人にニマニマしながら読んでいました。ですが、ここ1年以上ヒジョーーーーーーッ！！！にツラいモヤモヤしている展開ばかりです・・・。最新話が配信される度に元のラブラブな2人に戻ってくれてる？と期待して読んでますが、読了後はズーーーンと沈んでます。　すれ違いばかりで、噛み合わない二人に別れさせ屋の登場。更新頻度も多くないので、かれこれお互いに噛み合わず1年以上経過・・。どん底の行き着く所まで行っているので、そろそろ救いが欲しい。藤縞さんが可哀想過ぎて、もう・・・。勝手に読者代表しますが、本音で話し合ってイチャイチャの幸せな2人がみたいです。大好きな作品なので★5にしたいけど、昨今の展開が鬱過ぎての★4つ。

This review contains spoilers. It's a work I love very much. It's a work that made me completely addicted to TL Swamp. At first, I was at the mercy of the main character, but then I was both smiled and annoyed by Fujishima-san, who gradually became attracted to me. I was reading it while animating the two people who became lovers after a long day. but it's been over a year now... hehehe!!! There are only developments that are rough and confusing... Every time the latest episode is broadcast, do they go back to their original lovey-dovey 2 people? I'm reading it expecting it, but after I read it, it sank sharply. Two people who just passed each other and didn't get along so they broke up and a shop appeared. There aren't many updates either, so over 1 year has passed since they didn't mesh with each other... We've reached the point where we've reached rock bottom, so I want salvation soon. Fujijima-san is so pitiful that it's already... I will be representing readers without permission, but I want to see two happy people who talk with real intentions and are flirtatious. It's my favorite work, so I want to make it ★ 5, but recent developments are so depressing ★ 4.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 20, 2025 (PST) | Translate to English

素直

Straightforward

小説を書くのに、どこまでも素直で真面目✨な彼女仕事人間?の彼✨真面目さは彼女にも☺️衝撃的な1ページ目から、どんどん2人の親密度が上がる様子が、楽しく、もっと素直に仲良くなって?と応援できる作品です✨

Even though she writes novels, she's always honest and serious ✨ is she a workaholic? He ✨ is serious for her too ☺️ is the way the intimacy between the two increases steadily from the shocking first page, so it's fun and they become more honest friends? It's a work I can support ✨

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jun 14, 2025 (PST) | Translate to English

どうにか解決法を教えて下さい、藤縞さん～

Please tell me the solution somehow, Mr. Fujiba~

This review contains spoilers. この作品のお話もキャラクターたちも大好きでずっと読んできましたが、、結婚話や妊活あたりから完全に雲行きが怪しくなっております。２人ともよく話し合って欲しい。ピルのところとか辛すぎる。パートナー同士の妊活への想い仕事と結婚観の違いはこのあと良い方向に解決されますように。。別れないで～今まで星5以上の気持ちで読んでましたが、2025.6月あたりの話が辛すぎるので星4で。。最新39話まで読みました。う～思うツボ的に、婚約解消してるやんけ～。次に挽回してくれることを信じてます。２人のイチャイチャ読みたいよ～。

This review contains spoilers. I love the story and characters in this work, and I've been reading it for a long time, but things have become completely suspicious about marriage stories and fertility treatments. I want both of them to have a good discussion. The pill part is too painful. Feelings for fertility between partners, and I hope the differences in views on work and marriage will be resolved in a positive direction later... Don't break up ~ I've been reading it with a feeling of 5 stars or higher until now, but the story around 2025.6 is too painful, so 4 stars... I've read up to the latest 39 episodes. Wow, like a pressure point, the engagement has been dissolved, isn't it? I believe they will recover next. I want to read how they flirt.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

May 09, 2025 (PST) | Translate to English

面白い！けど……

interesting! but...

This review contains spoilers. 主人公って素直さが魅力なのに抱えてる悩み何一つとして藤縞さんに言わないのが不自然だしイライラする。あと痴漢にあってボロ泣きする癖に男とは二人きりになることに抵抗がないところも意味不明。30話以降は藤縞さんが好きとか全然考えずにただ自分のことだけ考えてる(そしてなぜか解決に向けて動かない)思い立ったら即行動のキャラじゃなかったの……？

This review contains spoilers. Even though the main character's honesty is appealing, it's unnatural and frustrating that he doesn't tell Fujijima-san any one of his problems. Also, I don't know the meaning of being alone with a man due to the habit of being molested and crying. After episode 30, wasn't Fujijima-san a character who just thinks about himself without thinking at all about liking him (and for some reason doesn't move towards a solution) and then acts right away...?

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 29, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い

pretty

藤縞さんの溺愛が好き！2人がカップルになってからの話が好きです！女の人の積極性が変で面白いからつい読んじゃう

I love Fujijima-san's doting love! I love the story after the two became a couple! Women's aggressiveness is strange and interesting, so I just read it

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 23, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

溺愛良き

Good doting

だんだんと藤縞さんがリオにハマっていき、過保護というか溺愛モードなのが良いです。ただ、ここ数話はリオがウジウジしていて話が進んでない気がします。そろそろスッキリさせて話進まないかな。

Fujishima-san is gradually becoming addicted to Rio, and it's good that they are in overprotective or rather doting mode. However, in the last few episodes, Rio is so bogged down that I feel like the story isn't progressing. I wonder if it's time to clear things up and move on with the conversation.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 21, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

いい

That's good

こういうクールな男の人が我慢してる表情がくるんよね〜女の子が本気で気持ち良さそうなのもいい！きゅんきゅんするストーリー！

The expression that such a cool man is putting up with it comes up ~ it's nice that the girl is serious and seems so comfortable! An intriguing story!

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 15, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

主人公が天然すぎる

The main character is too natural

どうしたらそんな事がお願いできちゃうの？ってくらい主人公頭のネジぶっ飛んでるそしてそんな彼女を嫌うどころかどんどん惹かれていく藤縞さんを見てるとあのセリフが思い浮かぶ「おもしれー女」

How can I ask for such a thing? That line comes to mind when I watch Fujishima-san, who is attracted more and more, far from disliking her, the main character's head is flying around, and that line comes to mind “Omono Onna”

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 12, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

濡れ場が苦手

I don't like wet places

なのになぜTL小説家になろうと思ったの！？実地取材より、文章力磨いた方が良くない！？在学中に少女小説でデビューというと、新井素子さん連想する。

But why did you decide to become a TL novelist!? Wouldn't it be better to improve your writing skills than field coverage!? When it comes to her debut with a girls' novel while still in school, I associate it with Arai Motoko.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 02, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

初心者さん

Beginner

TL小説を書いているけれど自分自身は性知識が皆無という主人公のお話しですなので少々最初は有り得ないな、、、って思う位にコメディ色が強いし、正直全然魅力的じゃないけど、、、って思っちゃうんですけど、、、段々その素直さというか無垢さに面白みを感じて来るのが良かったです。玩具を初めて手にした時の「生き物」への感想みたいなセリフとか笑っちゃいましたしねｗ初心者目線で楽しみつつ成長して開花していくのが面白かったです

It's a story about the main character who writes a TL novel but doesn't have any sexual knowledge, so the comedy color is so strong that I think it's a bit impossible at first, and to be honest, I think it's not appealing at all... but... it was nice that gradually I was intrigued by its honesty, or rather innocence. I laughed at the lines like my impressions of “living things” when I first got my hands on toys lol it was interesting to grow and blossom while having fun from a beginner's point of view

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 01, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

TL小説家の研究体験実習

Research experience training for TL novelists

This review contains spoilers. 主人公のTL小説家のリオが「エロさ」の研究に銀行員の藤縞さんに実地体験をお願いする物語です。イケメン銀行員が性体験豊富なのかどうかは分かりませんが・・・とにかくユーモア溢れる指導・体験で愉しめます。

This review contains spoilers. It's a story where the main character, TL novelist Rio, asks bank employee Fujijima-san for a hands-on experience in research on “eroticism.” I don't know if the handsome bank employee has plenty of sexual experience, but... anyway, I enjoy it with humorous guidance and experiences.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 01, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

凸凹カップル

uneven couple

TL作家のリオのイノシシのような突進の勢いで藤さんを巻き込んでいく展開です。そのうち藤さんも絆されていく。

It's a development involving Mr. Fuji with a rushing momentum like TL writer Rio's wild boar. Over time, Fuji-san also became bonded.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Sep 01, 2024 (PST) | Translate to English

ぶっ飛んだヒロイン?

the heroine who flew by?

ヒロインがぶっ飛んでいて面白いです。絵が綺麗でヒーローがイケメンなのが眼福です。コメディ要素好きです。

The heroine is flying around and it's interesting. It's a blessing to see that the pictures are beautiful and the hero is a handsome guy. I like the comedy element.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Aug 20, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

純愛ですが、エロいです

It's pure love, but it's erotic

This review contains spoilers. 初めの頃もよかったのですが、藤縞祖母が登場して妊娠しないと結婚出来ない事になってからの今回は、避妊しなくなり、彼の本気度が増してきましたね。荒々しいのですが、愛を感じるのがたまらないです。

This review contains spoilers. It was good at the beginning, but after Grandma Fujishima appeared and it became impossible to get married without getting pregnant, this time, he stopped taking birth control, and his seriousness has increased. It's rough, but it's irresistible to feel the love.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

Jun 24, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

最初の頃が面白い

The beginning is interesting

男性がカッコよすぎで、絵が綺麗。ストーリーが面白くて一気に購入してしまいました、が、完全に結ばれてから、なんかあんまり面白くなくなったなー、という印象。でも充分面白い作品だと思います。

The man is too cool and the picture is beautiful. The story was so interesting that I bought it all at once, but after it was completely connected, I had the impression that something wasn't that interesting. But I think it's an interesting enough work.

Helpful

Posted by Readers in Japan

Report

May 28, 2023 (PST) | Translate to English

ヒロインの行動にこちらがやきもき

I'm excited about the heroine's actions

ヒロインのウブさにこちらがなんだかやきもきして、藤縞さんめげるな！と応援したくなる。なんだかんだで両想いになれる展開も、山あり谷ありと楽しめます。

The heroine Ubusa was kind of nervous, and Fujijima-san didn't give up! It makes me want to cheer. There are mountains and valleys, and you can enjoy developments that somehow make you feel ambivalent.

Helpful

Reviews for Over-Cumming Writer's Block Manga