The Awkward Steps of Love Manga Reviews (P.4)

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May 15, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

ギャップ萌え

Gap Moe

一見地味な黒髪眼鏡っ子だけど実は美人さんでエロさもあって、性格は素朴で照れながらも気持ちいいことに積極的、というギャップ萌えヒロインのBL応用編って感じの作品。ヒロインこたちゃんこと小太郎を好きになって一途になっていく遊び人吉野もある意味王道キャラ。吉野に惹かれていく小太郎の葛藤の描写とか、一途になってもやっぱりチャラめの吉野の雰囲気、幼馴染の京や後輩凪のキャラもいい。真面目に読むと強引な展開もあるのですが、そこはBL文法の範疇内かと思います。

This work feels like a BL applied version of Gap Moe's heroine, who is plain at first glance, but she is actually beautiful and erotic, and has a simple personality and is aggressive about what feels good. The playboy Yoshino, who falls in love with the heroines Kotachan and Kotaro, is also, in a sense, a royal character. I like the depiction of Kotaro's conflict as he becomes attracted to Yoshino, the atmosphere of Yoshino who is still flirtatious even when all at once, and the characters of his childhood friend Kyo and junior Nagi. If you read it seriously, there are aggressive developments, but I think that falls within the BL grammar category.

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May 12, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

本当に大好きです；；♡

I really love it;; ♡

This review contains spoilers. バリバリのチャラ男だった攻めくんが受けくんに恋をして以来面倒な一途攻めになる！！という展開と、恋愛とは縁遠いような地味受けくんが攻めくんと共に行動する中でたくさんの「好き」と「楽しい」と「嬉しい」を知っていく…！というお話が好きだったので、このお話は私にとって世界で一番と言える程に好きなＢＬ漫画です。何にも頓着しないこたくんが吉野くんと出会って快楽はもちろん様々な交友、初恋を得る部分や、トラウマを抱えた吉野くんにこたくんなりの覚悟と決意表明を持って向き合うセリフは一巻完結モノでもすごくくるものがありました！濡れ場シーンも攻め受けどちらもカッコ可愛くてきゅんきゅんがとまりません□♡ これからもたくさん読み返しては幸せいっぱいの気持ちになろうと思っています！このお話と出会えて良かったです♡

This review contains spoilers. Attack-kun, who was a tough guy, fell in love with Take-kun, and since then it's been a troublesome attack!! With this development, Sobble Take-kun, who seems to have a long way to do with love, gets to know a lot of “likes,” “fun,” and “happy” while acting with Attack...! I liked the story, so this story is my favorite BL comic so much that I can say that it is the best in the world. Kotaku-kun, who doesn't care about anything, meets Yoshino-kun and of course has a variety of friendships, and the part where he gets his first love, and the line where he faces a traumatized Yoshino-kun with a strong sense of determination and determination, there were so many things that came from the end of volume 1! Both the wet scene and the attack are so cute that Kyun Kyun can't stop □ ♡ I'm thinking of rereading them a lot from now on and I'll feel full of happiness! I'm glad I came across this story ♡

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May 11, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

安定です！

It's stable!

作者さん買いさせて頂きました！大正解です！疎いのにエッチなことに弱いところがほんとに可愛くて愛おしいです！

I bought it by the author! That's a great answer! Even though I'm ignorant, my weakness for naughty things is really cute and adorable!

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May 02, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

かっっわいい

that's so cute

小太郎よ、最初のボーッとした姿はどこへやら。どんどん可愛くなるわふとした時かっこよくなるわ、、全部吉野のお陰ですね。始まりは無理矢理だしセフレは沢山いるしで微妙でしたが、お互い一途になってからはも～堪らないです！2人とも可愛くてキュンキュンでした

Kotaro, where was the first dazed figure? It gets cuter and cuter, and it's all thanks to Yoshino, that's all because of Yoshino. The beginning was complicated by force, and there were a lot of friends with benefits, and it was subtle, but it's unbearable even after we all got together! They were both so cute and so excited

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Apr 29, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い！ってキュンキュンできる作品です

cute! It's a work that makes you cringe

地味で友達もいないコタちゃんが、蒼生と過ごす時間が増え、友達ってこんな感じなのか！ってホクホクしてるのが本当に可愛らしかったです！グズグズになってるコタちゃん、ふとした表情にキュンキュンしてる蒼生、どちらも可愛くてニヤニヤしちゃいます?何度も読み返してる大好きな作品です‼

Kota-chan, who is plain and has no friends, is spending more time with Aosei, and her friends are like this! The fact that it was so fluffy was really cute! Kota-chan, who is getting squishy, and Ao, who has an unexpected expression, are both cute and smirking? It's my favorite work that I've reread over and over again ‼

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Apr 13, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

にまにまする

Nimanimashu

This review contains spoilers. こたちゃん可愛すぎない？？付き合ってからの2人が甘々すぎて、こたちゃん可愛すぎてにやける、、とにかく可愛かった！絵も好みで最高です！

This review contains spoilers. Aren't Kotachan too cute?? The two of them were so sweet after they started dating, and they smirked because they were so cute... just so cute! I also like pictures and it's great!

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Apr 12, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

好き！

I like it!

初めての作家様ですが、絵もストーリーも好き。コタちゃんが可愛すぎる。当て馬もなく嫌な奴も出てこないので、ハッピーな気持ちになりたい人におすすめです。

This is my first time as an artist, and I love both the pictures and the story. Kota-chan is too cute. It's recommended for people who want to feel happy because there are no guithorses and no bad guys come out.

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Apr 11, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

よくある話だけど

It's a common story

地味で友達もいない大学2年生の小太郎と、セふレがいっぱいの同学年の蒼生。初めは蒼生が小太郎をからかい半分にヌイたのから始まり、段々と仲良くなっていき、、とよくある話です。小太郎は恋愛経験がないから蒼生への気持ちに気がつくのが遅かったけど、蒼生も小太郎への恋心に気がつくのには時間がかかった。それで話は終わりかな？あとはエチするだけの浅い話かと思いきや、蒼生がなぜ本気の恋をしないのかを小太郎に話し、それに対して小太郎は友達でいようと決意し、、。からの両想いを自覚してハピエンでした。蒼生の本気の恋をしない理由もありがちな内容でしたが、単純な話を丁寧に描いてあるなと思いました。そこまでささる内容ではなかったんですけど、コタちゃんがかわいいのと、蒼生が割と早くにコタちゃんにハマってるよね？というのが現れている辺りが良かったです。読んでてボリュームたっぷりな感じも良かったです。

Kotaro, a second-year college student who is plain and has no friends, and Aosei, who is in the same grade, has lots of friends. It's a common story that starts with Ao teasing Kotaro and getting rejected in half, then they gradually became good friends... Kotaro had no romantic experience, so it was slow to notice his feelings for Aosei, but it took time for Ao to also notice his love for Kotaro. Is that the end of the story? After that, I thought it was just a shallow story that only made me angry, but Ao told Kotaro why he didn't have a serious love, and in response, Kotaro decided to stay friends... I became aware of both feelings from then on, and I was happy. The content was also likely to have reasons why he doesn't have serious love for Ao, but I thought it was a simple story carefully drawn. It wasn't that far-fetched, but Kota-chan is cute, and Ao is pretty quickly addicted to Kota-chan, right? It was nice where that appeared. It was also nice to read it and feel that it was full of volume.

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Apr 09, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

いや〜〜好きです

well... I like it

とっても好きです！！ヤリ○ン×陰キャ、陽キャかける陰キャが大好物の私にはドストライクでした！絵もとても好きな感じで最初から最後までニマニマしながら読ませていただきました〜〜

I really like it!! Yari X Yin Kya, Yin Kya, Yin Kya is my favorite food, it was a big strike for me! I also really liked the pictures, and I was able to read them while being animated from beginning to end ~~

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Mar 28, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い

pretty

This review contains spoilers. こたちゃん可愛い！！チャラかった吉野が一途になるのもよかったです。付き合った時の周りの反応も素敵でした！！

This review contains spoilers. Kotachan is cute!! It was also nice that Yoshino, who was crazy, became one. The reaction from those around us when we started dating was also wonderful!!

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Mar 21, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

作者様買い

Buy the author

This review contains spoilers. 作者様買いです！受けが恋愛に慣れてなくて流されやすくてとにかく可愛い！友達のなぎちゃんも可愛かったからなぎちゃんの話もみたいなと思いました

This review contains spoilers. The author is buying it! Kakega isn't used to being in love and is easily swept away, and she's just so cute! My friend Nagi-chan was cute too, so I thought it would be like Nagi-chan's story too

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Mar 17, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

あーーかわいいいいいい

Ahhh cute good good

もう！キュンキュンのオンパレードです！！キュンキュンで悶えたい方には本当におすすめ！大学生モノの中で上位に食い込むほど好きな作品です

already! It's Kyun Kyun On Parade!! I really recommend it to those who want to be in agony! It's a work I like so much that it cuts into the top positions of college students

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キャラ設定と絵、タイトルがピッタリ!!

The character settings, pictures, and title are perfect!

This review contains spoilers. 好きな作品でリピ読みしてます!!2人の最初のきっかけは軽めでしたが、吉野が早い段階でこたちゃんのことを見た目とか気にせず、中身でみていて、こたちゃんに『優しい』ときちんと伝えている所で、吉野に好感がもてました。題名通り、少しヘタ?不器用で、少しすれ違いとかありましたが、こたちゃんがんばったな！と思います。吉野もこたちゃんへの気持ちに気づいてから、こたちゃんに真摯に向き合っている場面もいくつかあり、本気さが伝わりました！描き下ろしもラブラブでかわいい2人が見れて、よかったです♪あと、今回の2人の顔は割と特徴があるほうかなと思うのですが、それでも気持ちに沿っていろんな表情をきちんと描き分けられていたり（キャラ設定（性格）にぶれないし、セリフや行動とあっていて）、また絵の構図や角度も見やすく（読みやすく)、依子先生、すごくお上手と改めて思いました。(だからリピ読みできるっ！)かわいい2人をありがとうございました！

This review contains spoilers. I'm reading it over and over with my favorite work!! The first reason for the two was light, but Yoshino didn't care about Kotachan's appearance at an early stage, looked at the contents, and properly conveyed “kindness” to Kotachan, and I had a good impression of Yoshino. as the title suggests, is it a little bad? They were clumsy, and there were slight misunderstandings, but they did their best! I think so. Since Yoshino also became aware of his feelings for Kotachan, there were several scenes where he sincerely confronted Kotachan, and his seriousness was conveyed! I'm glad I was able to see the two lovey-dovey and cute faces this time ♪ Also, I think the faces of the two people this time are rather characteristic, but even so, they were able to draw various expressions properly according to their feelings (not distorted by character settings (personalities), and they were also easy to see (easy to read), and the composition and angle of the picture were easy to see (easy to read), and I thought again that Yoriko sensei was really good at it. (That's why I can read it over and over!) Thank you so much for these two lovely people!

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Feb 27, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

可愛い2人

2 cute people

表題作のみ206P。経験のない小太郎が天然で煽ってるというか発言とか表情が可愛くて、吉野がキュンとするのもわかる！！吉野がチャラついてたのも過去の事が原因って分かって辛かったね…小太郎と出会えて良かったね！！と誰目線状態（笑）ストーリーや感情変化の描写がしっかりしててスラスラ読めました！描き下ろしもラブラブで癒されました^^えちは白抜き

The title work is 206P only. Kotaro, who has no experience, is naturally inciting, or rather his remarks and expressions are cute, and you can also tell that Yoshino is freaking out!! It was painful to know that Yoshino's flirtation was also due to things in the past... I'm glad I met Kotaro!! and whose point of view (lol) the story and emotional changes were so well described that I was able to read it smoothly! I was also healed by being lovey-dovey and soothed ^^ Echi is blank

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Feb 26, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

☆4.5

☆ 4.5

恋愛慣れしてない地味な子と誰とでも遊んじゃうようなリア充の大学生カプ。前半は攻めがちょっと苦手かもと思ったけど、後半の溺愛っぷりが良かったです。

Ria Mitsuru's college student cap seems to play with anyone with a plain kid who isn't used to being in a relationship. I thought they might be a little bad at attacking in the first half, but it was nice to have a lot of love in the second half.

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Feb 25, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

すき！

I like it!

受けにギャップがあり超可愛くて攻めがんんんー！！ってなってるのが好き！笑絵のタッチがすごい好みです

There's a gap in reception and they're super cute and can't attack!! I like the fact that it's like that! I really like the touch of lol

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Feb 23, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

かわいすぎる、、、

too cute...

なんだこれは、、、可愛いが溢れていてヤバい！！こたが、可愛すぎてキュンキュンしまくりだよ！購入して大満足です(*^ω^*)

What is this... it's so cute and dangerous!! This one is so cute that it makes me cringe! I am very satisfied with the purchase (*^ω^*)

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可愛いかった、、

It was cute...

This review contains spoilers. こたちゃんが好きって気づいて自分から避けちゃうとこ可愛い。ギャップ萌えがあるし、トロトロになちゃうとたまらんですり

This review contains spoilers. It's cute when you notice that you like Kotachan and avoid it from yourself. There's a gap moe, and it's unbearable if it becomes trotoro

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Feb 12, 2022 (PST) | Translate to English

こたちゃんかわいいよー！！

Kotachan is so cute!!

This review contains spoilers. チャラ男攻め地味め受けで王道設定！普段のほほんとしてるのにえっちのときに色っぽい表情になるこたちゃん、かわいい(T_T)

This review contains spoilers. Set the royal road by attacking Chara Dude and taking in a sober manner! They are cute (T_T), who has a sexy expression when they're there even though they usually wear it. (T_T)

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ピュアエチ！

Pure sex!

構成としては結構えっち多め。軽めのが2回。本番3回。と言ってもどれも短めで最後の両思いえっちが長めに描かれてました。エッチが多いとストーリーが微妙になりがちなんですが、そんなことは一切なく、むちゃくちゃきゅんきゅんしました。話としては王道なんですが、表情が可愛かったり、キャラ作りがうまかったりで大満足です....。作者様の他の作品も買わせていただきましたが大当たりすぎて今後も絶対買います。

As for the configuration, it's quite a bit too many. The lighter one is 2 times. 3 live performances. Even so, they were all short, and the last two thoughts were drawn for a long time. The story tends to be subtle when there's a lot of sex, but that wasn't the case at all, and it was insanely fun. It's a classic story, but I'm very satisfied with their cute facial expressions and good character making... I also bought other works by the author, but they hit so much that I will definitely buy them in the future.

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