The Awkward Steps of Love Manga Reviews (P.13)

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ふふふ。可愛っ。

hehehe. cute.

初読み作家さんです。最近、キャラ達の顔、絵柄が似通ってる事が多く、これも似た系ですが、ある意味安全パイですが、中身で勝負する技量が必要になってくると思います。そう考えると、この作品は心理描写が上手く、感情移入しやすく面白かったです。チャラ系モテ男×モブ系地味男子。設定はありがちですが、ストーリー展開が良く、飽きませんでした。地味で友達いないボッチ君のコタちゃん。唯一は幼なじみの京ちゃんくらい。その京ちゃんに、彼氏のフリをしてと頼まれた事がきっかけで、チャラ男蒼生と知り合う事に。数多く遊ぶ蒼生に気に入られたコタちゃんは、チェリーなボーイでうぶ。好奇心も手伝って、ちょっとエッチな事に身を任せて…お互いに、ハマっていくのが可愛くて、けどもどかしい男同士の恋。コタちゃんの気持ちが健気で切なくて、いじらしいし、本気になった蒼生の必死な想いが可愛らしい。不器用な恋ほど楽しいものはない。面白かったぁ。両思いになってからの、蒼生のデレ具合が、より一層可愛くて、コタちゃんといえば、エッチになりましたねぇ(笑)

I'm a first-time reader writer. Recently, there are many cases where the faces and patterns of the characters are similar, and this is also a similar system, but in a sense, it's a safety pie, but I think the ability to compete with what's inside will become necessary. With that in mind, this work is good at depicting psychology, is easy to empathize with, and was interesting. A popular chara-type guy x a humble mob-type boy. The setting is easy, but the storyline was good and I never got tired of it. Bocchi-kun is plain and has no friends. The only one is Kyo-chan, my childhood friend. When Kyo-chan asked me to pretend to be my boyfriend, I decided to get to know Chara Otoko Aosei. Kota-chan is liked by Aosei, who plays a lot, and is a cherry boy. Help your curiosity too, and surrender to something a little naughty... it's a cute yet frustrating love between men who become addicted to each other. Kota-chan's feelings are healthy and sad, and Aosei's desperate feelings that have become serious are adorable. There's nothing more enjoyable than a clumsy love. That was interesting. Aosei's Dele state after they had both feelings was even cuter, and speaking of Kota-chan, she became naughty (laughs)

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よかった！

That was great!

受けがえろいのもよかったし、攻めの遊んでるところと本気なところの違った顔を見せるギャップがよかったです。ラブラブな二人が見れて幸せでした！

It was well received, and the gap between playing offensively and showing a different face in earnest was great. I was happy to be able to see these two lovey-dovey people!

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溺愛彼氏最高やん。

A doting boyfriend is awesome.

攻めが本気になってからの溺愛が最高にキュンです、、両思いになるまでのストーリーもちゃんとしてるし、2人のキャラクターとか心情が丁寧に描かれてるので最後まで安心して読めました。

The doting after the attack became serious is amazing... the story until they both fall in love is well done, and the characters and feelings of the two are carefully drawn, so I was able to read it with peace of mind until the end.

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燃えた…

burnt...

すごく続きが読みたいです！！続編希望！！2人ともえっちで可愛い！

I really want to read more!! Hope for a sequel!! They're both so cute over there!

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一途なチャラ男

Ichijutsu no Chara Otoko

地味男くんがチャラ男に振り回されるつつも、しっかりハッピーエンドでした。絵も綺麗だしストーリーもとても良かったです！

Even though the sober man was swayed by Chara Dare-kun, it had a solid happy ending. The pictures were beautiful and the story was great too!

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最高！！！

awesome!!!

シュガードッグライフが好きなのでこちらも購入。買ってよかった。あー。最高。二人可愛すぎる。お互いの気持ちが通じあってからのますますのイチャイチャ、かわいいんです。続きも読みたい感じ。何度も読み返そう。

I like Sugar Dog Life, so I bought this one too. I'm glad I bought it. ah. the best. they're both too cute. Once we understood each other's feelings, they became more and more flirtatious and cute. I feel like I want to read more. I'll reread it over and over again.

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受けも攻めも可愛いな

Both receiving and attacking are cute

最初はハッキリしない流され受けと、クズい攻めで高評価の理由が分からないな、って思ってたけど、後半受けも攻めもお互いの気持ちに気付く頃にはもう目が離せなくなってた。攻めも受けも一生懸命なのが可愛い！最後の電子おまけも最高でした！

At first, I thought that they were swept away clearly, and that they didn't understand the reason for the high evaluation due to their scum attack, but by the time they realized how they felt about each other in the second half, I couldn't take my eyes off them. It's cute that they work so hard at both attacking and receiving! The electronic bonus at the end was great too!

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性格真反対っていい！

It's OK to have the opposite personality!

設定、あらすじ、絵とレビューに惹かれて購入しました！！すれ違い、嫉妬など、もちろんえっちい馬面満載で最高です！！！めちゃくちゃにかわいいです！

I bought it because I was attracted to the setting, synopsis, pictures and reviews! Of course, it's full of eccentric faces, such as passing each other, jealousy, etc., and it's awesome!!! It's insanely cute!

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やっばい！！！

that's great!!!

すごい萌えました！！ここ最近で1番でした、、続編でないかなあ

I'm so excited!! It was number 1 recently... I wonder if it's a sequel

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王道のピュアピュア

The royal pure pure

遊び系×地味系という王道ですが、2人の関係に終始にやにやしてました～～！受けくんも卑屈なわけではないので、見てて暗い気持ちになることもなく、最後まで楽しめました✨

It's the royal line of playful and sober, but the relationship between the two was smirking from beginning to end! Receiving it wasn't mean, so it didn't make me feel dark when I watched it, and I enjoyed it until the end ✨

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最高のカップル

best couple

こたちゃんのえちえちな顔と吉野の八重歯がすこでした。悩んだけど買ってよかった！

Kotachan's eccentric face and Yoshino's double teeth were a bit amazing. I'm worried, but I'm glad I bought it!

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可愛すぎ

Too cute

This review contains spoilers. 過去色々あってトラウマでヤリチンになった攻×純真無垢で可愛い受のラブラブになるお話。どちらも大学生。とにかく可愛い。受が男前な性格してるのに、可愛すぎる。そして幼馴染の京ちゃんが強くてまたいい。可愛すぎかよ。まじで尊い。語彙力崩壊するやつ。わーもう何回も読んじゃうな。最高です！！

This review contains spoilers. It's a love-love story about Attack, who was traumatized by a lot of things in the past, and a love and love story with Innocent, Innocent, and Cute Receiving. Both are college students. Anyway, it's cute. Even though Uke has a handsome personality, she's too cute. Also, my childhood friend Kyo-chan is strong and that's fine again. is that too cute? It's really precious. The one that destroys vocabulary. Wow, I've read it over and over again. It's awesome!!

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好みじゃないのに…！

I don't like it...!

正直なところ地味受けもかわいい受けもあまり興味がなく、男前受けが好きなわたし……でも試し読みをしたら絵柄が好みだったのと攻めの子が好みだったので思い切って購入しました。結果は大正解。もうほんと、自分を信じて(笑)買ってよかったです。受けは流されやすいし地味だけどあまり卑屈じゃなくて素直で人間的にちゃんとしていて、読んでいて少しも不快感がなかったです。個人的に小さくてかわいらしい感じの受けチャンが苦手なので、攻めとの身長差や体格差が殆どないのもすごくよかった。攻めはヤ○チンなのに受けへの感情に気づきはじめてからがかわいくて……たしかにヤ○チン×地味男なんだけど、読後真っ先に思ったのは「かわいいヤ○チン×男前な地味男最高！」でした(笑)作家買いする作家さんが増えて嬉しいです。

Honestly, I'm not really interested in either plain reception or cute reception, and I like handsome reception... but when I did a trial reading, I liked the pattern and I liked aggressive kids, so I took the plunge and bought it. The results were quite correct. I really believed in myself (laughs) and I'm glad I bought it. It's easy to get carried away, and it's plain, but it's not too humble, they are honest and humane, and I didn't feel any discomfort while reading it. Personally, I'm not good at Takechan, who is small and cute, so it was great that there was almost no height difference or physical disparity from attacking. Even though it's attacking, she was cute when I first noticed the feeling of receiving it... it's certainly a dirty girl x a sober man, but the first thing I thought after reading it was “cute girl x handsome plain man the best!” It was (laughs) I'm happy that more writers are buying writers.

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嫉妬可愛い

Jealousy is cute

他の方のレビューにもありましたが、攻めが本気になっていくのが良い。可愛い。えろいし多幸感あるし良かったです。

There were reviews from other people, but it's good that the attack is getting serious. cute. I'm glad it's erotic and euphoric.

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プレイボーイと地味男は最高

Playboy and Sober Man are the best

この作家さんのお話好きすぎて毎回買わせてもらってます！今回も素敵！プレイボーイ苦手な人にもこれは読んでほしいです！！受けも、可愛すぎなくて可愛いいところがいい！ギャップ萌え、いいですね！プレイボーイの過去も必見。

I love this writer's story so much that I buy it every time! Great this time too! I want people who don't like Playboy to read this too!! It's nice that the reception is cute and not too cute! Gap Moe, that's great! Don't miss out on Playboy's past.

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はぁぁかわいい

Huh cute

This review contains spoilers. 初めての作家さんでしたがランキングから購入。買って良かった。。最初は攻めは女の子が好きで興味本位なんだと思ったけど違ってよかった。ちょいちょいキュンキュンさせてくる。こたちゃん健気でかわいい

This review contains spoilers. It was my first time as an artist, but I bought it from the rankings. I'm glad I bought it.. At first, I thought they were interested in attacking because they liked girls, but I'm glad it was different. I'm going to make you cringe a little bit. Kotachan is healthy and cute

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ラブラブ□

Lovelove □

どんどん攻めが本気になっていくのがいい！！絵が綺麗で男の子がみんな美形！

It's good that they get more and more serious about attacking!! The pictures are beautiful and all the boys are beautiful!

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はぁ～可愛い

Huh... cute

この作家さんの描かれる受けは何て可愛いんですかね(*^^*) 最初は攻めがかなり遊んでて、おいおいって展開でしたが、攻めは攻めで辛い過去があって納得しました。こたちゃんに出会えて本当に良かったね。付き合い出してからの2人が本当に可愛い。末永くお幸せに( 〃▽〃)

How cute is the reception drawn by this artist (*^^*) At first, the attack was played quite a bit, and it developed in a whoa way, but I was convinced that the attack had a difficult past with offense. I'm really glad I met Kotachan. The two of them have been really cute since they started dating. Be happy for a long time (▽)

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ありがとうございます！！！

thank you so much!!

最高です！絵が綺麗！話もいい！作者さんの作品これからハシゴしてきます！

It's awesome! The picture is beautiful! Nice story too! I'm going to post the author's work now!

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最高

highest

受けも媚びすぎてなくて読みやすい。攻めも経験豊富だけど一途で展開がしんどくならないから、安心して読めた。

The reception isn't too flattering, so it's easy to read. They have a lot of experience in attacking, but the development doesn't get tough all at once, so I was able to read it with peace of mind.

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