The Unknown Song Of Dawn -A Love That Begins By Living Together-

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  Posted by Readers in Japan

  May 16, 2026 (PST) | Translate to English
  うん、明け方やね。
  Yeah, it's dawn.
  This review contains spoilers. 明け方の空気感、闇の終わりと朝の始まりの境界線の気配を感じました。まるで小説みたいに。ソウタが自分を終わりにするところを、ハルマに救われるという設定が効いてます（ハルマが夜(闇)の帝王だけに?!）。飄々としていてつかみどころがないハルマなのに、ほどよい距離感の世話焼きが魅力。ソウタの方はほっとけない、年上からも年下からも愛されてしまう純粋なところがチャーミング。ハルマの首のホクロ…については、ソウタのセリフから、ホクロあったん？と総チェックしてしまいました(暇か)。首のホクロはさりげないセクシーポイントで極めて重要なので、ちゃんと描いてほしいです。斜め後ろからの大きめのカットでも描かれてないのは惜しい。「キスしちゃったね」っていう感じもたまらん。続きくださいね。

  This review contains spoilers. I felt the air at dawn, a sign of the boundary between the end of darkness and the beginning of the morning. It's like a novel. The setting where Sota ends herself is being saved by Harma works (only Harma is the Emperor of the Night (Darkness)?!) Even though it's a quiet and hardy place to grab, the care-yaki with just the right amount of distance is attractive. The pure fact that Souta can't be left alone and is loved by both older and younger people is charming. As for the mole... on Haruma's neck, was there a mole from Souta's line? I did a full check (free time?). The mole on the neck is a casual sexy point and is extremely important, so I want you to draw it properly. It's a pity that even a large cut from an oblique back wasn't drawn. The feeling “you kissed me” is also unbearable. Please continue.

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