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Premium Member Exclusive: #2-6 Also Free Until Sep 30 (PST)The B plot with the gay best friends either shouldn’t exist or should be fully sexually explicit. It would be more compelling if the ML and his friend were exes instead of an unrequited crush. And FL’s friend should have a full scene with her current partner. I hold out foolish hope she gets it during the Hawaii trip. I’ve only read through chapter 13 so far.
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