JentleSquid's Reviews

This review contains spoilers. The art is gorgeous, the story idea would be a good one, but I think it needs to be expanded upon instead of all smooshed into a one shot. It’s almost as if all the substance and context was removed, and we’re just given the big events all laced together with nothing showing what led to them? I would’ve loved multiple chapters to build the angst, show more back story, show more of things that happened like the embezzlement being revealed, and really get to know the characters and have a chance to get attached (and/or dislike for a real reason) to them before the happy ending. Even starting in childhood like so many do

This review contains spoilers. Very cute and sweet, but I wish it was done as a one-shot like so many have mentioned, or even expanded a little more in each chapter to put a little bit more angst in to make the ending that much more rewarding. The chapters are pretty expensive compared to many others on here that are similar quality or even better.

My other two complaints are the translation is a bit all over the place and some of the bubbles got mixed up like whoever did it doesn’t grasp how to properly translate and place sentences in right-left format; my last is just a dumb one, I kinda wish his suit at the end wasn’t so…. Modern looking. I wish it would’ve been some fancy knightly garb or some such, to keep the fantasy feel a bit more, but that’s just a nitpick on my personal part